Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Who love no more
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I agree...they exist right here on Earth...
September 12th, 2018 03:50
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I agree...they exist right here on Earth...
September 12th, 2018 03:50
Love Poem?
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be held for so many different things in life.
August 27th, 2018 07:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be held for so many different things in life.
August 27th, 2018 07:37
Pub haiku
Goldfinch60 said:
May those two old lovers drink their amoretto \'til the sun goes down.
August 25th, 2018 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May those two old lovers drink their amoretto \'til the sun goes down.
August 25th, 2018 00:24
Pub haiku
fuche_bu said:
there\'s definitely a place in the world for pub haiku--at least in my world anyway.
August 24th, 2018 21:13
fuche_bu said:
there\'s definitely a place in the world for pub haiku--at least in my world anyway.
August 24th, 2018 21:13
Pub haiku
Laura🌻 said:
Jabberwocky,
A delicious haiku...
can’t go wrong with
*amaretto, oranges, and love...
~Laura~
*from Saronno
August 24th, 2018 16:15
Laura🌻 said:
Jabberwocky,
A delicious haiku...
can’t go wrong with
*amaretto, oranges, and love...
~Laura~
*from Saronno
August 24th, 2018 16:15
Dragon
SLR said:
Good flow and rhythm. I\'d be interested to read a longer version of this. If you feel like writing one be sure to let me know. Good imagery.
June 16th, 2018 22:38
SLR said:
Good flow and rhythm. I\'d be interested to read a longer version of this. If you feel like writing one be sure to let me know. Good imagery.
June 16th, 2018 22:38
Horse Shoe Nail
SLR said:
Pride is a pitfall for so many. To lose something so important, so vital because you couldn\'t admit you were wrong; tragic.
May 16th, 2018 20:54
SLR said:
Pride is a pitfall for so many. To lose something so important, so vital because you couldn\'t admit you were wrong; tragic.
May 16th, 2018 20:54
Whence and Whither
Goldfinch60 said:
Our Spirit will meet on the way to eternity.
May 16th, 2018 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Our Spirit will meet on the way to eternity.
May 16th, 2018 07:57
Conceit
SLR said:
You call it conceit but I\'ve got to admit my heart would call it justice. Great write.
May 15th, 2018 20:34
SLR said:
You call it conceit but I\'ve got to admit my heart would call it justice. Great write.
May 15th, 2018 20:34
Horse Shoe Nail
Lorna said:
Always hang horseshoes with the open u at the top or luck runs out.............
May 15th, 2018 04:49
Lorna said:
Always hang horseshoes with the open u at the top or luck runs out.............
May 15th, 2018 04:49
Beached
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write but your soul is still with you and always will be.
May 14th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write but your soul is still with you and always will be.
May 14th, 2018 00:51
Beached
SLR said:
She has no idea what she\'s lost and she\'ll realize too late. That was my interpretation too. Short and powerful.
May 13th, 2018 20:10
SLR said:
She has no idea what she\'s lost and she\'ll realize too late. That was my interpretation too. Short and powerful.
May 13th, 2018 20:10
Beached
dusk arising said:
Wow! Reads like a strong message/warning to somebody who has either lost or is losing something very important to you both.
May 13th, 2018 08:05
dusk arising said:
Wow! Reads like a strong message/warning to somebody who has either lost or is losing something very important to you both.
May 13th, 2018 08:05
Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, that glimpse to being touched is so moving.
May 13th, 2018 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, that glimpse to being touched is so moving.
May 13th, 2018 01:42
Enough
SLR said:
Sad. Like a sad, pathetic hope for at least a little of her time. Wrenching. Or am I reading it wrong? Maybe he\'s getting tired of her and only wants a little togetherness?
May 12th, 2018 20:15
SLR said:
Sad. Like a sad, pathetic hope for at least a little of her time. Wrenching. Or am I reading it wrong? Maybe he\'s getting tired of her and only wants a little togetherness?
May 12th, 2018 20:15
Handover
SLR said:
The unspoken hope here is heartbreaking. Tragic. I love the flow of words tugging heartstrings throughout the whole piece.
May 11th, 2018 18:00
SLR said:
The unspoken hope here is heartbreaking. Tragic. I love the flow of words tugging heartstrings throughout the whole piece.
May 11th, 2018 18:00
Dearth
SLR said:
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
May 10th, 2018 23:26
SLR said:
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
May 10th, 2018 23:26
Dearth
dusk arising said:
Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which continue after the loss. I really felt this. Goes into my favourites.
May 10th, 2018 05:20
dusk arising said:
Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which continue after the loss. I really felt this. Goes into my favourites.
May 10th, 2018 05:20
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