Comments on community poems by Ethan

• mourning sickness (AAA) There are so many good contrasts in this piece. Great job
  July 20th, 2017 18:15
• Sticks And Cons. (Kevin browne) Ooo this is nice. Good work as usual.
  July 19th, 2017 20:06
• good times (Onepauly) Nice job. This is nice.
  June 21st, 2017 22:15
• Decisions (The Invisible) Good job :)
  June 9th, 2017 18:21
• Thank you (The Invisible) :)
  June 6th, 2017 15:05
• Are you right? (The Invisible) Hey we reached a message limit or something
  June 5th, 2017 19:43
• Pinocchio (ElenaGrace) Is the blue fairy in the fairytale or something? I haven\'t seen Pinocchio...
  June 5th, 2017 13:29
• Dipped In Dialect (Lily_) Very good. I like the negative connotations given to paint. Also, I think...
  June 5th, 2017 13:23
• Deadly Choice (Saima) Your use of both swearing and formal English is very interesting. Nicely...
  June 4th, 2017 19:39
• As My Ink Wets The Paper. (Kevin browne) Incredible work. I love the absence of punctuation. It\'s a bit Joycean.
  June 4th, 2017 18:37
• Bow wow (Dawnway) This is nice. You should read some Allen Ginsberg poetry. You\'d like him.
  June 4th, 2017 17:59
• Galleon (Poetae Opus) This is really nice. The only comment I have is to change \"I just see...
  June 4th, 2017 16:47
• Honey (Emma.Elizabeth) HAHA this is great
  June 4th, 2017 16:08
• PRICE BEEN PAID (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) This is very powerful. I absolutely love, and I can\'t stress this enough,...
  June 4th, 2017 15:31
• Through The Years Swiftly (Seeker) You right with a mature and commanding voice. I\'m impressed.
  June 4th, 2017 14:27
• Through The Years Swiftly (Seeker) You right with a mature and commanding voice. I\'m impressed.
  June 4th, 2017 14:27
• World of lies (Shayl) To be honest, it\'s a fun idea, but you didn\'t execute it as efficiently...
  June 4th, 2017 14:21
• THE WIZZARDS OF OZ (Louis Gibbs) I love this. Short and strong :)
  June 4th, 2017 14:08
• Mannequin Words (ElenaGrace) Nicely done :)
  June 4th, 2017 14:01
• Ana to me (Tytkettle) \"Said the man in his throne To his group of Roman friends\" is a very...
  June 4th, 2017 13:14
• Loss (Poetboy123) I love the rhythm you create with this poem. Nicely done.
  June 4th, 2017 11:48
• Orchid\'s Wings (Noveyre) I must say, it is a good idea. However, clarity is lost in your syntax....
  June 4th, 2017 11:47
• Eyes to My Soul (Gino) Very, very nice. I enjoy the subtle, tasteful alliteration.
  June 4th, 2017 02:47
• Friendship (Renzi) If I heard you correctly, you said \"we\'ve rose\". I believe the correct...
  June 4th, 2017 01:41
• For the Singles (MaddieJ) Haha this is really sweet thanks :)
  June 4th, 2017 00:59
• LIMERICK 33 (Michael Edwards) Aw I like this lots. It\'s so quaint. Thanks 👌🏻.
  June 4th, 2017 00:26
• Even When I Cry (Ummbre) \"Wiping the tears but never the make up\" is a very nice touch. Nicely...
  June 3rd, 2017 23:40
• Take Your Heart To The Grave. (Kevin browne) I love that you draw a connection between drinking and intoxication with...
  June 3rd, 2017 23:11
• Americana (Grnteabug) This is great. Only small grammar errors stand in the way of complete...
  June 3rd, 2017 22:55