Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The candy girl (Malubotelho)
As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity...
August 24th, 2017 16:37 - A Beautiful Butterfly (Mandi)
Quite lovely. Very enjoyable reading.
August 24th, 2017 16:30 - Regret (Noah)
Ah dreams. Ahhhh the lottery, my wealthy offspring, the cars the house the...
August 24th, 2017 16:25 - Questions. (Fay Slimm.)
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic...
August 24th, 2017 16:20 - Time to Fight. (Liam Lawless)
Difficult! Thought provoking. Angry? Very powerful writing.
August 24th, 2017 16:09 - Love Is (Jennylynn0324)
Love is all of that. Love isn\'t complicated so long as it is a shared...
August 24th, 2017 16:05 - Jealousy, Nausea, ad Nauseam! (Nameless)
For nausea like this youve been eating the wrong kind of man. Bold but...
August 24th, 2017 15:16 - Poem 43 (Disrespectfully nice)
Some people aint going to like your explicit words but you know you tell...
August 24th, 2017 15:11 - The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful subject and great words. For me it is the coloured spectrum...
August 24th, 2017 11:53 - Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey)
I\'m in two minds about this. Both are thinking hard. A very enjoyable...
August 24th, 2017 11:47 - Panic (Christina8)
I only ever had one panic attack - horrible. Good writing.
August 24th, 2017 11:45 - Jaded (Baylee)
Such a shame those eyes are jaded sweet poet. Your work has such flowing...
August 24th, 2017 11:38 - Let me uncomplicate us / Inner demons (Sara Storkson)
Two good pieces here worth posting separately i thought, however. First...
August 24th, 2017 11:32 - A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer)
If only my little white muse would stay in its cage and run around on its...
August 24th, 2017 11:14 - THE LETTER (Michael Edwards)
This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you...
August 24th, 2017 11:07
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