Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Conceding. (Fay Slimm.)
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ?...
August 28th, 2017 04:09 - MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Im proud to be able to contribute here both commenting and publishing....
August 28th, 2017 04:05 - Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful observational writing backed up by your real life explanation....
August 28th, 2017 04:02 - Untamed-Collection of Senryu (Christina8)
There is FIRE in your words. The fire of passion. Love these short...
August 28th, 2017 03:51 - Winter (Michael Edwards)
Hmmm \'a blankets cold caress\' sounds like my marriage.... I\'m free.......
August 28th, 2017 03:44 - Yellow card (soccer game) (Myself and me)
This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
August 28th, 2017 03:40 - Unknown lover (ShannonXx)
That terrible feeling is betrayal indeed. Why don\'t people wak away...
August 27th, 2017 15:15 - Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett)
Beautiful sentiment. Very moving and inspiring. Pleasure to read. Goes...
August 27th, 2017 15:01 - Love Haiku (FredPeyer)
Whoever wants to solve such a mystery? No no no, its a mystery...
August 27th, 2017 11:22 - Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60)
Aaaaah wise words indeed. But you sir say so much in your works about the...
August 27th, 2017 08:19 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful feeling to offer that bridge for another soul and ask nothing....
August 27th, 2017 08:15 - Forbidden (Malubotelho)
Malu, you know we shall all see these places again in time and when we do,...
August 27th, 2017 08:10 - SUMMER (Michael Edwards)
Laughing at your comment about seasons might be a bit out of sync to Fred....
August 27th, 2017 08:01 - Farewell -cinquain (Myself and me)
OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
August 27th, 2017 07:53 - Longing (Myself and me)
Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
August 26th, 2017 13:25
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