Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Dust to dust (Sorenbarrett)
wonderful wordsmithery from you creates totally negative scene
December 21st, 2022 08:06 - That Half-Smile (Fay Slimm.)
Your words once again bring home the sadness which fills us for these poor...
December 13th, 2022 11:10 - Another Fine DAy. (Goldfinch60)
Uplifting. you are living the life we all aspire to at your age,
December 13th, 2022 04:14 - Blessed Laughter. (Goldfinch60)
Joy and laughter are a necessity for happiness. The rest is just...
December 3rd, 2022 13:36 - Now That My Lady Is Gone (Neville)
Ouch! I bet you liked your self well enough before she appeared though....
December 3rd, 2022 13:34 - Conscience (Sorenbarrett)
LOL The screen would have the sleepy bits
December 2nd, 2022 08:21 - Covert (Fay Slimm.)
wanting more when even the kisses are illegal is treading on dangerous...
December 2nd, 2022 06:21 - Tomorrows Garden. (Goldfinch60)
my garden will be a wilderness for the wildlife in 2023.
December 2nd, 2022 06:16 - what i\'m not saying (Arqios)
why cant i fit into this lifestyle, i\'m only seventy.
December 1st, 2022 08:12 - Just Another Shot in The Dark (Neville)
we all have our secret/sacred places of dreamsville... our safe haven
December 1st, 2022 08:09 - Emerging December. (Fay Slimm.)
so thats whats going on in my bones is it. i knew something were up!
December 1st, 2022 08:07 - Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
the beauty and romance music brings to us
December 1st, 2022 04:17 - glimpse (Dusk arising)
Sympathy and wishing much strength to your brother in the days to come.
November 30th, 2022 05:51 - inimitable contrivances (Arqios)
the gods of war would do battle with you for this. For doing battle is all...
November 30th, 2022 05:30 - Here (Fay Slimm.)
making \'here\' a special place when each and every \'here\' is a place of...
November 30th, 2022 05:25 - Ten Years After (Neville)
like tail lights in the snow... with no indication of where or how far...
November 30th, 2022 04:54 - Bad Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
i used to enjoy driving
November 30th, 2022 04:51 - That Last Time Look (Neville)
The story begs to be told.
November 29th, 2022 07:20 - Slithered Moon Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Never heard of a moon described as slithering before. Trying to picture a...
November 29th, 2022 07:18 - Battles. (Fay Slimm.)
Though much around us is beautiful and does not tell of the struggles to...
November 29th, 2022 07:13 - How you look at it (Sorenbarrett)
The choice is from within us once our mettel is tested.
November 28th, 2022 06:15 - Poem on a Plate (Neville)
Didn\'t quite bring back the romance of faggots and peas on the street...
November 24th, 2022 10:26 - Fulfilment of Life. (Goldfinch60)
hERE HERE! Life\'s had a go at me recently but I like to see people being...
November 24th, 2022 10:22 - When Things Were Perfectly Perfect (Neville)
ah those shadows, like the maturing crust on a good cheese. not forgetting...
November 23rd, 2022 13:12 - Flaming Computers! (Goldfinch60)
I met the same glitch yesterday with all its fears worries and deep...
November 22nd, 2022 07:34 - For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain (Neville)
where are any of us going anyway?
November 22nd, 2022 07:32 - Seeing (Fay Slimm.)
life as it should be lived is a beauty in itself..
..but drugs and mind...
November 22nd, 2022 07:27 - Simon And Garfunkel. (Goldfinch60)
Each of us an Island. Each island brought together to make a...
November 21st, 2022 11:32 - Three Summers (Neville)
You certainly know how to make your reader feel envious.
November 21st, 2022 11:29 - My Good Life. (Goldfinch60)
long may your bits function.
November 16th, 2022 07:46 - Lessons In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sure enough, mistakes become lessons.
November 14th, 2022 05:36 - Mislaid (Fay Slimm.)
Love has an intrinsic value of being worth all the last twirls you can...
November 14th, 2022 05:35 - The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.)
long ago myths and legends given to our minds allow poetry to luxuriate...
November 9th, 2022 16:15 - POOL (Dusk arising)
hope the water will bring me back to where i was before or someplace...
November 9th, 2022 16:12 - POOL (Dusk arising)
i\'d love to join in more but the inspriration hasnt been there. thanks...
November 9th, 2022 16:10 - Necessary condition (Illia)
if only it were so, what a different existence we would all enjoy
November 9th, 2022 08:39 - The Lion (Anne@1)
i enjoyed reading this day in a life sort of verse.... thank goodness for...
November 9th, 2022 08:36 - “meaning of it all” (SureshG)
i got lost in your last verse, maybe its the pills theyre giving me.
November 9th, 2022 08:30 - Truth (Sorenbarrett)
to thine own self be true before all others.
truth is a much undervalued...
November 9th, 2022 08:27 - A Wonderful World? (Goldfinch60)
its a wonderful world for sure, look for the good, its all there.
November 9th, 2022 08:25 - Big Band Swing. (Goldfinch60)
the sound of a big band is fantastic, nothing else like it.
October 26th, 2022 14:42 - Poetic relationship (Sorenbarrett)
In others poetry we can communicate with the inner feelings, the heart of...
October 26th, 2022 14:29 - Pain (EmotionsOnwhitepaper)
Standing in those \'empty lanes\' with tears in your eyes, all alone, is...
October 26th, 2022 14:24 - Words Of The Wise. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m keeping shtumm.
October 24th, 2022 16:00 - Dirty Linen (Neville)
In my time i have experienced enough white garments turned pink by...
October 24th, 2022 15:58 - Dividends (Fay Slimm.)
A delightful encouragement of a write!
October 24th, 2022 15:54 - Renewal (Fay Slimm.)
What else could ageing be, other than the ready relish upon the tongue of...
October 20th, 2022 10:13 - How on Earth Did She do That (Neville)
On some women even lowly tattered rags manage to drape in a come and get...
October 20th, 2022 10:09 - Finding Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Taint what ya get makes ya feel good, it\'s what ya give.
October 20th, 2022 10:06 - My bathroom upgrade (Tallisman)
As a plumbing and heating man recently retired due to ill health and with...
October 20th, 2022 10:03 - Artful (Fay Slimm.)
Strange how most of us would admit therese creatures make our skin crawl...
October 18th, 2022 06:30 - Fishermen\'s Friends The Musical. (Goldfinch60)
Those fishermen have you hooked sir!
September 22nd, 2022 15:17 - Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You (Neville)
Moments from the past remain imprinted on our soul.
September 22nd, 2022 15:14 - Songs Of Yore. (Goldfinch60)
My older sisters loved his music and i bet i could join you word for word...
September 10th, 2022 02:13 - Words to dust (Sorenbarrett)
Keep digging, the nuggets you\'ll find and bring to the surface will be a...
September 9th, 2022 07:15 - The Sea Of Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
A very sad day indeed
September 9th, 2022 05:05 - this old upturned boat (Dusk arising)
Thank you sorenbarrett
September 8th, 2022 20:52 - Up and down (Sorenbarrett)
Superb rythmic piece. Into my favourites.
September 8th, 2022 09:23 - The Song Rang Out. (Goldfinch60)
Julian Clary\'s remark that he would suck a Fisherman\'s Friend after the...
September 8th, 2022 03:45 - Blackbird in Autumn (Saxon Crow)
Nice one Saxon. Here is the season once again to wrap it all up. Too cold...
September 8th, 2022 03:41 - Abating (Fay Slimm.)
I think you bring forth the fact that we romantic poets are never alone...
September 7th, 2022 03:15 - Past And Future. (Goldfinch60)
And long may it stay as good as it feels today sir!
September 7th, 2022 03:07 - Everlasting balance (Sorenbarrett)
I love this piece. I wish I had written it!, Goes into my favs for sure
September 6th, 2022 07:55 - Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister (Neville)
Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?
September 6th, 2022 05:08 - Nature Enlivening. (Goldfinch60)
those are the words of a man loving the rewards of life all around him.
September 6th, 2022 05:06 - Duet (Fay Slimm.)
ee by eck, there yu are again gal in ya wellies capturin the rarest sounds...
September 3rd, 2022 13:11 - Family Meeting. (Goldfinch60)
Trusting your family will be as warm as yourself, as open and as loving.
September 3rd, 2022 12:59 - On Being Too Gentle (Neville)
Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.
September 3rd, 2022 01:12 - Fiery Fred. (Goldfinch60)
A game i\'ve never really understood but as a backdrop to a summers...
September 1st, 2022 01:38 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
There are only two certainties in existence - birth and death. Might as...
August 29th, 2022 05:02 - Restored (Fay Slimm.)
Valourous Sol once again holds victory over night times dark defenders....
August 27th, 2022 05:09 - Take Two Poles Josie (Neville)
I dunno what theyre building on my chimney cowl but theres sure enough a...
August 27th, 2022 05:05 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
Never having been a cricket fan, this surprised me for its pace and...
August 27th, 2022 04:57 - Conceding (Fay Slimm.)
Oh such sights to behold indeed for they do things to our wellbeing,...
August 26th, 2022 06:14 - To the Memories II (Aradhya)
Many many wishes are but tiny fishes swimming against the tide. Though...
August 26th, 2022 05:43 - Between Pauses (Neville)
Such thoughts raid and plunder through the heights of passion. Plenty of...
August 26th, 2022 05:41 - Three Things. (Goldfinch60)
So wisely true Andy. At a slower pace maybe we can all become gentler with...
August 26th, 2022 01:55 - Laughter\'s Healing. (Goldfinch60)
It used to be there were bits of me made me laugh at myself, nowdays i...
August 23rd, 2022 05:40 - Poet (Nafis Light)
And so may it continue for you as your writing goes from strength to...
August 20th, 2022 10:26 - The hurt inside (1wachendorf)
Well if you are a true believer then you will know she got the lord...
August 20th, 2022 09:44 - My Little Brother (Thekkinkkattil)
The term \'unconditional love\' so well expressed here.
August 20th, 2022 09:25 - Trapped In A Telephone. (Goldfinch60)
Aha! The \'phoney\' generation goldfinch. Picturing u sat in your cafe (or...
August 20th, 2022 05:38 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful celebration of Autumn or as the americans call it, rather...
August 19th, 2022 04:32 - Changes In Time. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m so pleased to read that you still walk alongside your beloved Avon...
August 19th, 2022 04:22 - The Music Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
The Music of Time is such a well chosen title to accompany your dance.
August 17th, 2022 04:27 - Early One Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Ah!!! You have to be clever when they fire these trick questions at you.
August 16th, 2022 08:25 - Intent (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poetry Fay. For me, you have a way of placing life\'s romance...
August 16th, 2022 08:23 - Convince Me (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
Convince yourself you really want this person in your life or walk away.
August 14th, 2022 01:59 - Ghost Within The Machine (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Let down by poor spelling. Is your spelling \'illegable\' supposed to be...
August 14th, 2022 01:57 - Keith Nichols. (Goldfinch60)
Great sound. I was lucky enough to do a support for Syd Lawrence orchestra...
August 14th, 2022 01:29 - take away (Dusk arising)
I saw a GWR prairie doing mixed work at the new Broadway (Worcs) station...
August 14th, 2022 01:18 - Submit (NafisaSB)
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in...
August 14th, 2022 01:15 - What Is Wisdom? (Goldfinch60)
Wisdom is life\'s teaching for those who become wise enough to...
August 13th, 2022 20:00 - Ruined By Heat. (Goldfinch60)
Me and you both mate. I have reversed my days/nights many times just to...
August 12th, 2022 09:49 - Just Like Bollywood (Saxon Crow)
Whatever the past has held for us lies somewhere in a chest we have made...
August 12th, 2022 09:39 - Real Jewels (Fay Slimm.)
Brought to my mind that - though some can move away to more lucrative...
August 12th, 2022 09:33 - Shadows (Sorenbarrett)
Tuned into MPS and there was your piece, saying exactly how i\'m feeling...
August 12th, 2022 09:28 - Life\'s Library. (Goldfinch60)
So flippin true. I\'m rotting away here so bought myself a flute on ebay...
August 11th, 2022 09:51 - A reminder of seasons (Saxon Crow)
What a super punchline you teae us toward with this unseasonal...
August 11th, 2022 09:49 - Spellbound (Neville)
Definitely some \"eye of newt\" about this piece amid it joyous splendour...
August 11th, 2022 09:45
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