Comments on community poems by elizabethshadow
- Retro sweaters in warm weather (Edthepoet)
This poem was playful in the way you described an underlying truth about...
July 15th, 2018 19:07
- Make America Great (ForeverJesus7)
Very patriotic; you make your political and social views very known in an...
June 27th, 2018 08:59
- More Than Friends (ForeverJesus7)
I think this is very sweet and relatable to all people as they age and...
June 27th, 2018 08:55
- When Stars Collide (Noah)
Wow, your rhyming scheme is so nice in this poem! I loved the imagerry you...
May 5th, 2018 21:40
- Darkest Is The Night (W c)
This was a lovely poem with a wonderful rhyming scheme! You turned an...
May 5th, 2018 19:07
- Dark thoughts (Jaayx3)
This poem has a lot of imagery and description, so great job of that!...
May 5th, 2018 18:48
- Another Year Older (\"Carter Wills\")
I loved the simplicity and honesty of this poem. No superfluous...
May 5th, 2018 18:30
- He’s smarter than you (Ian Primmer)
You created a very honest piece of poetry. You made it very personal,...
May 5th, 2018 18:18
- If I Could Be Your Bed Tonight (Its Raskolnikov)
This was a very thoughtfully written poem, so very sweet and sensitive....
May 5th, 2018 18:13
- Live or die (Jesse G.)
You creatively convey a piece with such symbolism and meaning, so great...
May 5th, 2018 18:08
- More (Pots-and-pans)
I love the simplicity of your poem, yet it convery a lovely and meaningful...
May 5th, 2018 18:02
- A (Pots-and-pans)
Haha, what an irony you wrote here.
May 5th, 2018 18:00
- Whispers (Finley Fire)
Your rhyming scheme is strong and consistent, so great job with that! What...
May 5th, 2018 17:52
- Tell Him Dear, For Your Sake (Ethan)
Your poem is so complex, possessing many aspects that unify it together. I...
May 5th, 2018 17:46
- Mountain’s Call (Caroline Elizabeth)
I love the amount of imagery and personification you put into this piece!...
May 5th, 2018 17:38
- The urge never goes away (Theskyisnotblue)
You wrote very honestly about a matter so personal to many. It was...
May 5th, 2018 17:34
- A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It\'s been a while since I\'ve seen an acrostic poem and didn\'t know that...
May 5th, 2018 17:25
