Comments on community poems by Marius
- The Squirrels We Lost (Cheeky Missy)
Ah... I once loved a squirrel and I still do...
The little animal in...
February 22nd, 2011 08:20
- Simply Me (Lonelykaren)
Beautiful poem! Know though that hate is too honest and strong a feeling...
February 11th, 2011 15:20
- Forgive Me (Marius)
This poem was published, along with other authors, in an anthology of...
February 11th, 2011 15:04
- ~~Irksome Exams!!~~ (Rajat)
This poem captures the essence of those times extremely well, while...
February 9th, 2011 02:59
- Cinderella (Emi)
For a moment I thought the story itself was written after your poem......
February 1st, 2011 20:44
- Re: the Church (Cheeky Missy)
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the...
January 30th, 2011 00:27
- Sorry (StormyDay)
"and all the things I didn't say"... how true. How often we forget that. ...
January 28th, 2011 16:29
- Where not to put the Broken... (Cheeky Missy)
"clothespin" according to Jenny Gordon ;)
January 28th, 2011 04:26
- Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?! (Cheeky Missy)
Humorous yet very serious. Been there, done that and I can relate. It...
January 27th, 2011 03:21
- Ah, Incurable Dreamer....... (Cheeky Missy)
A nightmare for the protagonist but a dream of a poem. Very expressive.
January 27th, 2011 03:15
- Lightning Bugs? (Cheeky Missy)
Very nice poem. I loved the fireflies comparison.
January 26th, 2011 04:06
- pain (Boricuamami222)
A feeling of desperation, sadness and exasperation beautifully redacted...
January 25th, 2011 17:09
- True friendship. (Lifewellspoken)
Beautiful thoughts delivering the feelings you have for friendship.
January 25th, 2011 17:06
- Death (JoshuaConklin)
A beautiful exposition of despair and helplessness.
January 25th, 2011 17:04
- Desire (StormyDay)
It's usually not a good thing to lose oneself for any reason, but this...
January 25th, 2011 17:02
- Ah, but what to write? (Cheeky Missy)
This beautifully exposes the feelings one gets from writing and reading...
January 25th, 2011 17:00
- I'll miss you (Gerrylegister)
"Even in dreams which make no sound"
This is so profound that it puts...
January 24th, 2011 02:00
