Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- dawns delight (re-written) (Dusk arising)
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A....
April 17th, 2019 07:05 - Aromatic Anointing (Orchidee)
Aromatic sounds as it is - full of scented beauty and given with love it...
April 17th, 2019 07:01 - WOMAN IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Three good words you use here for describing the colour of mourning in...
April 17th, 2019 04:28 - Turn Toward the Window (Neville)
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of...
April 17th, 2019 03:08 - I asked! (Poetic Dan)
Yep - - keep slow and steady and give when you can - - a great race to win...
April 16th, 2019 11:19 - know JB (Dusk arising)
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - ...
April 16th, 2019 08:27 - Another New Day (Neville)
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new...
April 16th, 2019 03:44 - THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards)
Ah - Clever assessment of those who think they are the cat\'s whiskers -...
April 16th, 2019 03:36 - Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60)
Agree with Neville that those two final lines say it all Goldy - - ...
April 16th, 2019 02:44 - The Voyage (SerenWise)
Such a warm appeal in this message to a loved one Seren.
April 15th, 2019 15:49 - Old Sunlight (Neville)
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old...
April 15th, 2019 12:53 - The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60)
That number is now going round in my head now dear Goldy -- your words...
April 15th, 2019 10:21 - I AM SORRY (SensualRomantic)
A poignant feel to this write of
few lines yet excellent length to...
April 15th, 2019 08:34 - Rainbow Colours Shine. (Kevin browne)
An unusual rhyme scheme in this one Kevin but so tenderly phrased and...
April 15th, 2019 08:30 - The Birth of Opals (Neville)
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic...
April 15th, 2019 05:57
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