Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Be Yourself A Little More (Edthepoet)
Love the slant-eyed use of wording and good rhythmic flow in this piece of...
November 20th, 2017 15:12 - ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards)
First rate writing Michael and has to be among my faves.
November 20th, 2017 03:20 - Amazing grace by the shore (Poetic Dan)
A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith -...
November 19th, 2017 21:11 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Powerful and intricate these one-liners Michael - -- the final one did it...
November 19th, 2017 03:17 - ZIMBABWE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A terrible struggle for the right to be free of tyranny Brian and written...
November 18th, 2017 10:56 - Blame, Guilt & Forgiveness (Accidental Poet)
Ah - now this is a piece of true wisdom A.P. and the final lines say it so...
November 18th, 2017 10:54 - Sunshine Streets Of Gold (Edthepoet)
Wow - loved the form and flow of this positive write Ed. - Must read it...
November 18th, 2017 10:52 - P R I O R I T I E S Author Unknown (Accidental Poet)
Such an inspiring read and thanks for sharing it A.P.
November 17th, 2017 17:50 - All by Myself (Mugsdaddy)
Reading these saddest of lines describes read loneliness Mugs. - hope...
November 17th, 2017 17:46 - Ragdoll (Edthepoet)
Powerful lines Ed - telling the sad tale of unfaithful behaviour where...
November 17th, 2017 17:45 - SNOWMEN ~ ELEGANT ! A 7 7 Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A magical read which brings back many Snowman-making joys when I lived...
November 17th, 2017 13:41 - You (Tony36)
A truly lovely romantic confession to a very special other half. Great...
November 17th, 2017 13:34 - Selfish (JLL517)
A compelling read and welcome to this friendly site - I smiled at your...
November 17th, 2017 09:39 - child sometimes (Frank Prem)
This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own...
November 17th, 2017 08:57 - Cardinals (Christina8)
Cardinals sound wonderful and very colourful Christina - - your tree...
November 17th, 2017 08:53 - ANCIENT TRANSITIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Anticipation is the answer to future transition Louis as I believe \"the...
November 17th, 2017 05:31 - MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards)
Incredulity versus reason - -- interesting thoughts Michael on logic...
November 17th, 2017 05:28 - IDEAS (Laura🌻)
Very perceptive this acrostic dear Laura - I agree with each aspect of...
November 17th, 2017 03:01 - My Love Was Left For Dead. (Kevin browne)
Your talent for wording with depth attracting such attention to detail of...
November 17th, 2017 02:58 - The Inventor (FredPeyer)
Your rhyming in this wise piece of advice is outstanding Fred - - making...
November 16th, 2017 16:18 - CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Of course a Mother warrants attention especially at Christmas and this...
November 16th, 2017 10:44 - DEPRESSION (Drewp)
Just letting someone know you and your poetic words are there can be...
November 16th, 2017 09:04 - Her (M.E.M.)
A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet ...
November 15th, 2017 17:31 - ERRANT PROGRAMMING (Louis Gibbs)
Yes programming is responsible for much of human conflictional error- a...
November 15th, 2017 12:14 - Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Such a special song and treat to hear it again dear friend.
November 15th, 2017 12:10 - FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
All the five appealed to me Brian but I have to admit number three gave me...
November 15th, 2017 12:09 - Just writing it out (Poetic Dan)
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan...
November 15th, 2017 12:02 - Nine syallables from a failed poet (Drewp)
Super write Andrew - such a good poem with excellent rhyming.
November 15th, 2017 12:00 - A Gift (Christina8)
A very good way to see the future is wrapped in this positive poem -...
November 15th, 2017 11:58 - ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
Your art with both brush and pen is stunningly good Michael - so pleased...
November 15th, 2017 03:05 - A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A charming lady-love is your special Angela - - so pleased for your both...
November 14th, 2017 17:18 - End of the Blues (MendedFences27)
A sad ending for the triangle of lovers in this wonderfully textured...
November 14th, 2017 17:12 - CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph)
Ouch - - I know just how mad it can make folks when naked they splash...
November 14th, 2017 14:46 - Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett)
Brilliant artwork and oh how I enjoyed that beguiling verse full of good...
November 14th, 2017 14:40 - My Purpose (Christina8)
Good aims dear Christina and put into a charmingly honest verse - you will...
November 14th, 2017 07:26 - 1 Year Anniversary on MPS (Poetboy123)
Oh what a delight to read such a tribute to this friendly site Poetboy - ...
November 14th, 2017 07:24 - THE RING (Michael Edwards)
The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
November 13th, 2017 17:30 - THE SURVIVOR (Louis Gibbs)
A slow and sad feel to this grieving lament Louis - - how powerful those...
November 13th, 2017 17:27 - C H R I S T M A S ! A Flow Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You have perfected the flow poem with your exciting and seasonal sonnet...
November 13th, 2017 17:24 - I\'ve Never Told (Christina8)
A heart-wrenching feel to this honest piece dear Christina - the positive...
November 13th, 2017 17:19 - An Ode To A Friend (Syd)
Another compelling read Syd - - from your memory box old friends pop up...
November 13th, 2017 13:01 - Dear oldest friend (Poetic Dan)
A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and...
November 13th, 2017 12:55 - I will always love you! (FredPeyer)
Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
November 13th, 2017 12:53 - Towards Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
An inspiring read Andy - and a favourite for me. Thanks for sharing.
November 13th, 2017 04:33 - Affliction Assistance (Orchidee)
A wonderful verse of encouragement to keep moving forward toward spiritual...
November 12th, 2017 16:36 - Favorite Word (M.E.M.)
Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so...
November 12th, 2017 16:33 - Hearing Aid (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Such an honest admittance of frustrations Edward - - hearing clearly is...
November 12th, 2017 16:31 - A Poem That Sleeps (Accidental Poet)
Love the conception of poems that sleep - - tis true that words after a...
November 12th, 2017 11:32 - Writer\'s Block (Christina8)
This comes to us all from time to time dear friend - - I keep pen and...
November 12th, 2017 02:49 - Veteran (W c)
A memorable tribute to a group of fine men who fought for animal health...
November 11th, 2017 14:59 - We’re Going Home (Accidental Poet)
A heart-rending picture of sacrifice on both sides of war-torn conditions...
November 11th, 2017 11:52 - Russian Rulette (Syd)
A powerful warning Syd - - there is much to be said for living \"health...
November 11th, 2017 11:48 - SEASONS OF THANKSGIVING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
such a pleasure to read of your reasons for genuine thanks my friend - ...
November 11th, 2017 07:34 - my place in nothing (Frank Prem)
Such depth to these lines Frank - small becomes nothing which alters its...
November 10th, 2017 12:34 - 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne)
Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and...
November 10th, 2017 10:59 - Life is a Mess (FredPeyer)
Your mind thinks in lateral style like all good poets Fred - -could really...
November 10th, 2017 10:18 - THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs)
I find the first line so very true Louis - - blessed are those with simple...
November 10th, 2017 10:16 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest...
November 10th, 2017 09:34 - FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So many beauties from which to choose when writing of flowers- - I love...
November 10th, 2017 09:26 - singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem)
Loud applause for singing duets with the famed Emmy-Lou - such a swinging...
November 9th, 2017 14:12 - Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer)
Love these informing two liners Fred - - sunshine written like this feels...
November 9th, 2017 14:08 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I...
November 9th, 2017 14:06 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
Fine piece of advice my friend - stepping out of our comfort zone will be...
November 9th, 2017 14:03 - Broken Wings (Tony36)
A fine testimony to a living faith Tony - - broken wings can be healed...
November 9th, 2017 13:40 - It’s a Good Day to Smile (Accidental Poet)
Ah - -lovely read with a super title - - that first stanza would win a...
November 9th, 2017 12:13 - Rebirth and Another Attempt (Michael J. Schaeffer)
A gem of a romantic write to a special someone with magic eyes - - great...
November 9th, 2017 12:08 - The Holidays (Christina8)
Yes dear Christina our heart must shine through the gifts we give - - a...
November 9th, 2017 11:06 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
p.s. I just love that beautiful example in the picture you chose - look...
November 9th, 2017 10:47 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Genuine hugs mean the world to those needing them - good read Brian and...
November 9th, 2017 10:43 - Tears Of A Shark (Syd)
Such wisdom given in this fine piece of shared experience with ending...
November 9th, 2017 05:58 - Reigning Reassurance (Orchidee)
You work hard to get just the right metre and line length my friend in...
November 8th, 2017 11:31 - Hear my plea (Poetic Dan)
A heart-touching read and may all your efforts and dreams to help a much...
November 8th, 2017 10:06 - The Beach With The Cave (Syd)
A very poignant read Syd - many times we need memories and this verse...
November 8th, 2017 08:50 - stirring the soup (Frank Prem)
I can smell from here that stirring aroma of delectable soup Frank - am...
November 7th, 2017 15:02 - The Land Of The Free (Christina8)
Such a powerful and appealing write on the terrible tragedy of wild use of...
November 7th, 2017 14:56 - HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards)
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - -...
November 7th, 2017 14:42 - AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh the lovely perfume wafts from your every word on the art of...
November 7th, 2017 06:02 - Reflection of Beauty (Accidental Poet)
This is so beautifully appealing A.P. - the way to see inward revealed...
November 7th, 2017 05:59 - ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A gem of a write which puts the praise for creation\'s great order in the...
November 5th, 2017 17:27 - The Optimist in Me (Accidental Poet)
Loud applause for this positive and worthwhile attitude we all needing...
November 5th, 2017 11:28 - Falling Leaves of Autumn (Rrodriguez)
What a beautiful and apt dedication to your much loved wife Roberto -...
November 5th, 2017 11:04 - Death Of A Warbler (W c)
All lovers of nature feel sad at these unfortunate happenings W.C. - a...
November 5th, 2017 10:41 - THE TRADE OFF (Louis Gibbs)
Ah - I agree with the alternative to the phrase - \"getting old\" -...
November 3rd, 2017 10:47 - Glory Greatness (Orchidee)
Verse 18 has long been a favourite of mine - - \"Jehovah\" - meaning -...
November 3rd, 2017 10:44 - American Crow (W c)
You picture the crow-scene very well here W.C. - - an apt tribute to the...
November 3rd, 2017 10:40 - A day on the farm (Tony36)
On single day described well here Tony - they say farm work is 24/7 in...
November 3rd, 2017 10:35 - THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the...
November 3rd, 2017 03:57 - Aftermath (FredPeyer)
Oh such a powerful poem with rhyming to add to its dire expression - an...
November 2nd, 2017 15:22 - My Goddess (Mugsdaddy)
A passionate piece of prose Mugs - - I am in need of a cooling shower...
November 2nd, 2017 15:20 - After this moment (Myself and me)
A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
November 2nd, 2017 15:17 - Highlighting Hopes (Orchidee)
Yes the two sides of \"chose\" in this enlightening verse tell us a lot...
November 1st, 2017 11:44 - Hell\'s Crew (Michael J. Schaeffer)
Something new learned here for me re such an event - A scary feel Michael...
November 1st, 2017 04:57 - ACT OF TERRORISM ~ NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Tragic the time when outraged the populace becomes afraid - well...
November 1st, 2017 04:51 - AND SO IT GOES (Louis Gibbs)
Love this description from nights of cavorting to days when parts have to...
November 1st, 2017 04:49 - THE DECISION (Michael Edwards)
Fine write again my friend - - An outstanding place of beauty may...
November 1st, 2017 03:55 - Loving You (Christina8)
Ah - - this it the way love should behave - so so pleased you have found...
October 31st, 2017 14:30 - Miles (Sandra)
The agony of not knowing you write with honesty Sandra - -love can leap...
October 31st, 2017 14:00 - Dancing With the Light (Accidental Poet)
An exciting read full of nostalgic interest on the art of photography in...
October 31st, 2017 12:14 - LET\'S ALL WORK TOGETHER ! A Mirror Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The need for a friend comes to everyone and this fine mirror sonnet...
October 31st, 2017 05:39 - Other Dimension (FredPeyer)
This has to be one of your best Fred - a perfect description of who we...
October 31st, 2017 03:34
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