Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards) The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - -...
  November 7th, 2017 14:42
• AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh the lovely perfume wafts from your every word on the art of...
  November 7th, 2017 06:02
• ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A gem of a write which puts the praise for creation\'s great order in the...
  November 5th, 2017 17:27
• Falling Leaves of Autumn (Rrodriguez) What a beautiful and apt dedication to your much loved wife Roberto -...
  November 5th, 2017 11:04
• Death Of A Warbler (W c) All lovers of nature feel sad at these unfortunate happenings W.C. - a...
  November 5th, 2017 10:41
• THE TRADE OFF (Louis Gibbs) Ah - I agree with the alternative to the phrase - \"getting old\" -...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:47
• Glory Greatness (Orchidee) Verse 18 has long been a favourite of mine - - \"Jehovah\" - meaning -...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:44
• American Crow (W c) You picture the crow-scene very well here W.C. - - an apt tribute to the...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:40
• A day on the farm (Tony36) On single day described well here Tony - they say farm work is 24/7 in...
  November 3rd, 2017 10:35
• THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the...
  November 3rd, 2017 03:57
• Aftermath (FredPeyer) Oh such a powerful poem with rhyming to add to its dire expression - an...
  November 2nd, 2017 15:22
• My Goddess (Mugsdaddy) A passionate piece of prose Mugs - - I am in need of a cooling shower...
  November 2nd, 2017 15:20
• After this moment (Myself and me) A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
  November 2nd, 2017 15:17
• Highlighting Hopes (Orchidee) Yes the two sides of \"chose\" in this enlightening verse tell us a lot...
  November 1st, 2017 11:44
• Hell\'s Crew (Michael J. Schaeffer) Something new learned here for me re such an event - A scary feel Michael...
  November 1st, 2017 04:57
• ACT OF TERRORISM ~ NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Tragic the time when outraged the populace becomes afraid - well...
  November 1st, 2017 04:51
• AND SO IT GOES (Louis Gibbs) Love this description from nights of cavorting to days when parts have to...
  November 1st, 2017 04:49
• THE DECISION (Michael Edwards) Fine write again my friend - - An outstanding place of beauty may...
  November 1st, 2017 03:55
• Loving You (Christina8) Ah - - this it the way love should behave - so so pleased you have found...
  October 31st, 2017 14:30
• Miles (Sandra) The agony of not knowing you write with honesty Sandra - -love can leap...
  October 31st, 2017 14:00
• LET\'S ALL WORK TOGETHER ! A Mirror Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) The need for a friend comes to everyone and this fine mirror sonnet...
  October 31st, 2017 05:39
• Other Dimension (FredPeyer) This has to be one of your best Fred - a perfect description of who we...
  October 31st, 2017 03:34
• MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES (Av) Ah yes - - I remember it well - covered all over and didnt dare show my...
  October 30th, 2017 14:09
• REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS (Louis Gibbs) The value of random acts of kindness so well outlined in this tribute to...
  October 30th, 2017 04:58
• the search for truth (Frank Prem) A grand tribute to those who revere life as they should -- I could see...
  October 30th, 2017 04:56
• Can You Hear It?? (Goldfinch60) Silence is golden as this lovely verse states - a good reminder of its...
  October 30th, 2017 04:53
• IN PRAISE OF HEDGEHOGS ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh such beautiful creatures - a really good hedgehog tribute dear Brian -...
  October 30th, 2017 04:51
• Is It Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) Wow - what a great number selected to hear when reading your honest and...
  October 30th, 2017 03:00
• Rock Star Poet (Christina8) Such a sincere tribute to a poet friend who will treasure these words i am...
  October 29th, 2017 09:04
• Communion Call (Orchidee) A loving reminder of the spirit that dwells within and the approach to...
  October 28th, 2017 10:01
• Our Tree (W c) Yes tree are certainly a welcome gift as your charming poem outlines W.C....
  October 28th, 2017 09:57
• bass lines (Frank Prem) Great poetic fun-wrte of the busy sounds around café life Frank. I fancy...
  October 28th, 2017 05:37
• Lake Michigan (Christina8) Oooh yes please - I want to go to Lake Michigan after reading its magic...
  October 28th, 2017 05:27
• SEASONS OF LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) You are a master at this form Brian - I love the flow of a good iambic...
  October 28th, 2017 05:22
• A Storm is Coming (LukeCoomer) Wow - loud applause for this collection of different weather conditions...
  October 28th, 2017 05:21
• Mirror (FredPeyer) We certainly reflect just like mirrors the world outside Fred - - a good...
  October 28th, 2017 05:17
• Internal Conflict (Alexa Pineda) A first rate picture of both dark and light which make such conflict - -...
  October 28th, 2017 05:15
• AT LAST IN LOVE (Michael Edwards) To paint one of these pieces would be a success but to produce two...
  October 28th, 2017 02:47
• You are gone (Myself and me) You express that lonely feeling so well with the metaphor you used in this...
  October 27th, 2017 13:32
• At the Party (FredPeyer) Oh what a surprise ending here Fred - a fantastic read which had all the...
  October 27th, 2017 03:25
• ronnie\'s other guy (Frank Prem) The folly of thinking we really know others around us eh? - a great...
  October 27th, 2017 03:22
• THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards) Super write again Michael - ancient the land and so well expressed in your...
  October 27th, 2017 03:20
• SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA) You both made the poem shine with all love\'s wonderful stages.
  October 27th, 2017 03:16
• bound (Heather T) The sensuous grandeur of your choice of metaphor is simply breathtaking...
  October 26th, 2017 22:44
• FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards) wisdom found in each one of these three liners Michael and oh that...
  October 26th, 2017 13:35
• ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS (Av) Passion extraordinaire in this powerful outline of amazing metaphors - ...
  October 26th, 2017 13:32
• holding close to beauty (Frank Prem) Love cannot be love if it changes to total indifference after a while -...
  October 26th, 2017 13:28
• Water is Life. (Goldfinch60) So true your wise words Goldi - thanks for posting a tribute to water.
  October 26th, 2017 13:19
• SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) What an interesting view of the moon being hollow and not a natural...
  October 26th, 2017 13:18
• 00:00 (Poetic Dan) Excellent reasoning in three little lines my friend.
  October 26th, 2017 13:13
• All we can be (FredPeyer) Ah - love the rhyming and meaning put into this posting Fred - -a perfect...
  October 26th, 2017 13:08
• Spirit Showerings (Orchidee) First rate write again Orchi.
  October 26th, 2017 12:58
• Touch of Madness (LukeCoomer) Writing it our is a good way to clear the head Luke - - a son usually...
  October 26th, 2017 12:57
• A Happy Poem (Christina8) A really good move forward and put so well in poetic terms it makes a...
  October 26th, 2017 11:30
• World without you (Myself and me) A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line...
  October 26th, 2017 08:43
• SAVOR THE MOMENT (Lasergraph) Lines of true wisdom and advice will never grow mundane dear poet friend -...
  October 25th, 2017 15:43
• Shield Safety (Orchidee) Many thanks again for a finely rhymed prayer to the God of salvation -...
  October 25th, 2017 13:34
• You Rest in Peace Dear Friend’s Mom (Pintu Mahakul) Such a worthy tribute to your friend\'s Mother and written as acrostic in...
  October 25th, 2017 13:29
• ODE TO RARE BEAUTY (Louis Gibbs) The feel of deep loss after beautiful togetherness wrings through your ...
  October 25th, 2017 11:54
• THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE (Michael Edwards) That second stanza did it for me in this 5 7 5 posting of super quality - ...
  October 25th, 2017 11:49
• Angel Dust Curing. (Kevin browne) A rhyme which words sad between well written lines yet angel dust curing a...
  October 25th, 2017 11:42
• Waiting (Myself and me) So good to see you back posting M&M - - a poignant feel to the read about...
  October 25th, 2017 11:34
• Autumn Chill (Christina8) Enjoying a break in the sun can be so healing - - a bit of pampering too...
  October 25th, 2017 11:31
• AFFLICTION (Av) The power in this piece of erotica sends shivers to each sentence - - ...
  October 25th, 2017 05:32
• axeman: await winter (Frank Prem) I love the way you build up the mood of your subject with the shortest of...
  October 24th, 2017 11:15
• Dancing In The Rain (Christina8) You write about a favourite way of mine to shake off dark moods - go...
  October 24th, 2017 11:13
• Starchild (LukeCoomer) Ah - such a warm message to a well loved son - with a Dad like this I...
  October 24th, 2017 10:57
• Around The Farm (W c) A charming picture of farm life which I am so pleased to have caught - ...
  October 24th, 2017 10:53
• Shadow fall (WL Schuett) Ah a well told tale of days gone by where tender and gentle were love\'s...
  October 24th, 2017 10:43
• HOT SPICEY PUMPKIN SOUP ! A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) What a great way to use pumpkin in soup - a yummy addition to Halloween ...
  October 24th, 2017 05:22
• LIKE CORN IN WIND (Michael Edwards) Another good intro. to a sequel my friend - I love the intrigue of title...
  October 24th, 2017 03:44
• THE LITTLE THINGS (Louis Gibbs) Whatever the form this reads so appealingly with a super last line Louis -...
  October 23rd, 2017 16:28
• ANGELA ~ PINK ROSE ~ An Acrostic 6 4 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A beautiful painting to go with your sweet acrostic dear Brian - a sonnet...
  October 23rd, 2017 16:25
• Constructive Chastenings (Orchidee) Fine write my friend.
  October 23rd, 2017 16:12
• CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS (Michael Edwards) Loud applause for two excellent pieces of work Michael - a delightful...
  October 23rd, 2017 10:54
• Accepting Darkness (Mugsdaddy) Good advice MD - - that last line did it for me - \"There will be no Beast...
  October 22nd, 2017 06:01
• A COUPLE OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) A pixillated offering if ever I saw one dear Michael and such patience in...
  October 22nd, 2017 03:35
• Where Have All The Poems Gone. (Kevin browne) You create such a flow of good interconnection here Kevin - a rare piece...
  October 21st, 2017 13:28
• Romeo and Juliet the final curtain (Ron parrish aka wordman) Oh the combination of that music and your words go straight to the heart...
  October 21st, 2017 13:22
• Memory of love (WL Schuett) Such powerful words and so meaningful when memory takes the place of real...
  October 21st, 2017 11:01
• THE MARTYRS CROWN (Michael Edwards) A super-good read from your poetic pen Michael plus an exquisitely brushed...
  October 21st, 2017 09:02
• lumpen (Frank Prem) Dancing with joy amid light from the flames - your lumpen man knows how to...
  October 21st, 2017 08:58
• Poets Touch. Senryu. (Goldfinch60) I just love this true and clever conclusion dear Goldi.
  October 21st, 2017 08:55
• CHRISTMAS CARDS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Amen to putting Christ back into the celebration of Christmas - with your...
  October 21st, 2017 08:54
• REMEMBERING (Laura🌻) Your tender words and beautiful sentiments make a father much loved and...
  October 21st, 2017 08:44
• The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60) A love for past happy times can help us through troubles we have to face....
  October 20th, 2017 16:15
• Priestly Propitiation (Orchidee) The gift of divine forgiveness made clear through these lines - such a...
  October 20th, 2017 16:11
• My Mountain (Christina8) And with your gratitude for friends and their in put those doubts and...
  October 20th, 2017 16:10
• Sweet Dreams (Ron parrish aka wordman) Tenderly gentle this sweetest of reads - - a lovely number and picture...
  October 20th, 2017 16:03
• Submerge in eternal bliss (Poetic Dan) Wishing that bliss stays with you from now and forever my friend - a most...
  October 20th, 2017 13:58
• A GLANCE (Louis Gibbs) Yes Louis - meeting with sudden eye contact can give a connection sans...
  October 20th, 2017 11:56
• THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards) Super artwork and love the form used - it reads like the beginning...
  October 20th, 2017 11:53
• Bliss (Christina8) A beautiful love poem to your other half dear Christina - hope when he...
  October 19th, 2017 08:46
• Poetic Mosaic Perfection. (Kevin browne) Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the...
  October 19th, 2017 05:45
• TRUE LOVE ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA) A perfect form for describing Love - - you write with such feeling...
  October 19th, 2017 05:42
• The Ones I\'ve Kissed (Rrodriguez) A fine ensemble of first kisses here Rrodriguez - a very apt Plath quote...
  October 18th, 2017 13:40
• BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas (BRIAN & ANGELA) Sun and Moon as kith and kin and brought to our eyes in tanka form too -...
  October 18th, 2017 12:43
• In The Still Of The Night (Ron parrish aka wordman) Every tender word shows your warm heart and love for a special person - a...
  October 17th, 2017 13:43
• THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs) All we can reasonably handle is the now and you have versed this so...
  October 16th, 2017 16:47
• Dancing to the Music. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful write and reminder that dancing to the music of life makes all...
  October 16th, 2017 16:45