Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You both made the poem shine with all love\'s wonderful stages.
October 27th, 2017 03:16 - bound (Heather T)
The sensuous grandeur of your choice of metaphor is simply breathtaking...
October 26th, 2017 22:44 - FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
wisdom found in each one of these three liners Michael and oh that...
October 26th, 2017 13:35 - ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS (Av)
Passion extraordinaire in this powerful outline of amazing metaphors - ...
October 26th, 2017 13:32 - holding close to beauty (Frank Prem)
Love cannot be love if it changes to total indifference after a while -...
October 26th, 2017 13:28 - Water is Life. (Goldfinch60)
So true your wise words Goldi - thanks for posting a tribute to water.
October 26th, 2017 13:19 - SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What an interesting view of the moon being hollow and not a natural...
October 26th, 2017 13:18 - 00:00 (Poetic Dan)
Excellent reasoning in three little lines my friend.
October 26th, 2017 13:13 - All we can be (FredPeyer)
Ah - love the rhyming and meaning put into this posting Fred - -a perfect...
October 26th, 2017 13:08 - Spirit Showerings (Orchidee)
First rate write again Orchi.
October 26th, 2017 12:58 - Touch of Madness (LukeCoomer)
Writing it our is a good way to clear the head Luke - - a son usually...
October 26th, 2017 12:57 - A Happy Poem (Christina8)
A really good move forward and put so well in poetic terms it makes a...
October 26th, 2017 11:30 - World without you (Myself and me)
A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line...
October 26th, 2017 08:43 - SAVOR THE MOMENT (Lasergraph)
Lines of true wisdom and advice will never grow mundane dear poet friend -...
October 25th, 2017 15:43 - Shield Safety (Orchidee)
Many thanks again for a finely rhymed prayer to the God of salvation -...
October 25th, 2017 13:34 - You Rest in Peace Dear Friendās Mom (Pintu Mahakul)
Such a worthy tribute to your friend\'s Mother and written as acrostic in...
October 25th, 2017 13:29 - ODE TO RARE BEAUTY (Louis Gibbs)
The feel of deep loss after beautiful togetherness wrings through your ...
October 25th, 2017 11:54 - THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE (Michael Edwards)
That second stanza did it for me in this 5 7 5 posting of super quality - ...
October 25th, 2017 11:49 - Angel Dust Curing. (Kevin browne)
A rhyme which words sad between well written lines yet angel dust curing a...
October 25th, 2017 11:42 - Waiting (Myself and me)
So good to see you back posting M&M - - a poignant feel to the read about...
October 25th, 2017 11:34 - Autumn Chill (Christina8)
Enjoying a break in the sun can be so healing - - a bit of pampering too...
October 25th, 2017 11:31 - AFFLICTION (Av)
The power in this piece of erotica sends shivers to each sentence - - ...
October 25th, 2017 05:32 - axeman: await winter (Frank Prem)
I love the way you build up the mood of your subject with the shortest of...
October 24th, 2017 11:15 - Dancing In The Rain (Christina8)
You write about a favourite way of mine to shake off dark moods - go...
October 24th, 2017 11:13 - Starchild (LukeCoomer)
Ah - such a warm message to a well loved son - with a Dad like this I...
October 24th, 2017 10:57 - Around The Farm (W c)
A charming picture of farm life which I am so pleased to have caught - ...
October 24th, 2017 10:53 - Shadow fall (WL Schuett)
Ah a well told tale of days gone by where tender and gentle were love\'s...
October 24th, 2017 10:43 - HOT SPICEY PUMPKIN SOUP ! A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a great way to use pumpkin in soup - a yummy addition to Halloween ...
October 24th, 2017 05:22 - LIKE CORN IN WIND (Michael Edwards)
Another good intro. to a sequel my friend - I love the intrigue of title...
October 24th, 2017 03:44 - THE LITTLE THINGS (Louis Gibbs)
Whatever the form this reads so appealingly with a super last line Louis -...
October 23rd, 2017 16:28 - ANGELA ~ PINK ROSE ~ An Acrostic 6 4 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A beautiful painting to go with your sweet acrostic dear Brian - a sonnet...
October 23rd, 2017 16:25 - Constructive Chastenings (Orchidee)
Fine write my friend.
October 23rd, 2017 16:12 - CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for two excellent pieces of work Michael - a delightful...
October 23rd, 2017 10:54 - Accepting Darkness (Mugsdaddy)
Good advice MD - - that last line did it for me - \"There will be no Beast...
October 22nd, 2017 06:01 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
A pixillated offering if ever I saw one dear Michael and such patience in...
October 22nd, 2017 03:35 - Where Have All The Poems Gone. (Kevin browne)
You create such a flow of good interconnection here Kevin - a rare piece...
October 21st, 2017 13:28 - Romeo and Juliet the final curtain (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Oh the combination of that music and your words go straight to the heart...
October 21st, 2017 13:22 - Memory of love (WL Schuett)
Such powerful words and so meaningful when memory takes the place of real...
October 21st, 2017 11:01 - THE MARTYRS CROWN (Michael Edwards)
A super-good read from your poetic pen Michael plus an exquisitely brushed...
October 21st, 2017 09:02 - lumpen (Frank Prem)
Dancing with joy amid light from the flames - your lumpen man knows how to...
October 21st, 2017 08:58 - Poets Touch. Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
I just love this true and clever conclusion dear Goldi.
October 21st, 2017 08:55 - CHRISTMAS CARDS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen to putting Christ back into the celebration of Christmas - with your...
October 21st, 2017 08:54 - REMEMBERING (Lauraš»)
Your tender words and beautiful sentiments make a father much loved and...
October 21st, 2017 08:44 - The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60)
A love for past happy times can help us through troubles we have to face....
October 20th, 2017 16:15 - Priestly Propitiation (Orchidee)
The gift of divine forgiveness made clear through these lines - such a...
October 20th, 2017 16:11 - My Mountain (Christina8)
And with your gratitude for friends and their in put those doubts and...
October 20th, 2017 16:10 - Sweet Dreams (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Tenderly gentle this sweetest of reads - - a lovely number and picture...
October 20th, 2017 16:03 - Submerge in eternal bliss (Poetic Dan)
Wishing that bliss stays with you from now and forever my friend - a most...
October 20th, 2017 13:58 - A GLANCE (Louis Gibbs)
Yes Louis - meeting with sudden eye contact can give a connection sans...
October 20th, 2017 11:56 - THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards)
Super artwork and love the form used
- it reads like the beginning...
October 20th, 2017 11:53 - Bliss (Christina8)
A beautiful love poem to your other half dear Christina - hope when he...
October 19th, 2017 08:46 - Poetic Mosaic Perfection. (Kevin browne)
Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the...
October 19th, 2017 05:45 - TRUE LOVE ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A perfect form for describing Love - - you write with such feeling...
October 19th, 2017 05:42 - The Ones I\'ve Kissed (Rrodriguez)
A fine ensemble of first kisses here Rrodriguez - a very apt Plath quote...
October 18th, 2017 13:40 - BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sun and Moon as kith and kin and brought to our eyes in tanka form too -...
October 18th, 2017 12:43 - In The Still Of The Night (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Every tender word shows your warm heart and love for a special person - a...
October 17th, 2017 13:43 - THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs)
All we can reasonably handle is the now and you have versed this so...
October 16th, 2017 16:47 - Dancing to the Music. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful write and reminder that dancing to the music of life makes all...
October 16th, 2017 16:45 - THE LOVE OF GOD (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So so true those three little words mean all the world to human believers...
October 16th, 2017 16:43 - Know your force (Poetic Dan)
An apt piece of imagery brings the right feel to this verse on using our...
October 16th, 2017 14:38 - Your Worth (Christina8)
A glowing love letter to a special person who I hope loved every word. - ...
October 16th, 2017 14:36 - stronghold (Heather T)
Ooooh you have been missed dear clever wordsmith - this verse is amazingly...
October 16th, 2017 06:44 - Rose Petals (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A wonderfully romantic read Ron - the start of a lifetime of love...
October 16th, 2017 02:06 - No body knows (Joseph M Marion)
An admission of love which takes in all life on earth - your pen shows...
October 15th, 2017 12:30 - THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely and upbuilding read for today - thanks for the reminder of the...
October 15th, 2017 05:10 - arthur and alice (Frank Prem)
Love as perfectly written to catch readers\' attention and a tale to bring...
October 15th, 2017 05:06 - All of the Above (FredPeyer)
An absolutely lovely read Fred - this goes staightway into my favs. A...
October 15th, 2017 05:03 - single male shopper (Frank Prem)
Ha ha - could it have been you were peeking at someone\'s purchases Frank...
October 14th, 2017 05:46 - Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60)
This raised a Saturday smile Goldi - glad you found eyes closed with that...
October 14th, 2017 05:43 - Days like this (Poetic Dan)
Love this break-down and build-up again of what most experience some time...
October 14th, 2017 05:39 - Raising the Bar (FredPeyer)
Ah - this explains in a few simple lines what brings us enlightenment Fred...
October 14th, 2017 05:35 - OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great poem to inspire all writers - thanks dear Brian for your constant...
October 14th, 2017 04:08 - My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez)
A mournful and most moving scene you paint of an area which could never...
October 13th, 2017 16:14 - I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan)
A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to...
October 13th, 2017 14:49 - COASTAL EROSION ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A warm welcome home to this lovely poetry site Brian my friend - a sad...
October 13th, 2017 14:46 - Faded Flower (WL Schuett)
Fantastic talent for brushwork and poetry - very poignant both picture...
October 13th, 2017 10:42 - difficult departure (Frank Prem)
You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky...
October 12th, 2017 10:33 - walk in the woods (Tony36)
The last line of this verse made me sit up and think - finding lion tracks...
October 11th, 2017 14:01 - These vary words i speak. (Joseph M Marion)
Such an appealing read and so well expressed - the heart which feels...
October 11th, 2017 13:58 - Halloween Will Soon Be Here (Christina8)
Halloween soon comes around again Christina and your lovely imagery makes...
October 11th, 2017 10:03 - White Lie (FredPeyer)
A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished...
October 11th, 2017 05:57 - Hill of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A tribute to courage as taught from the cradle and put into a poem worthy...
October 11th, 2017 05:52 - His and hers (Poetic Dan)
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked...
October 10th, 2017 08:24 - Love of my life...........the beat goes on (Ray ray)
A lovely message of future intent - well wishes to you and to your beloved...
October 10th, 2017 08:17 - With You (Christina8)
A beautiful confession of realized love Christina - - a lovely read.
October 10th, 2017 08:12 - All seasons (Malubotelho)
A lovely read Malu - - so tender and appealing.
October 10th, 2017 08:10 - God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60)
A good reminder here Goldi - fun is the gift which we often forget.
October 9th, 2017 05:24 - The love can never change (David)
The truth of love is expressed so eloquently in this poignant read David...
October 9th, 2017 05:23 - Last Row (FredPeyer)
Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can...
October 8th, 2017 04:50 - A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with...
October 8th, 2017 02:42 - KIPPERED (Michael Edwards)
B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love...
October 7th, 2017 11:38 - Perpetual Presence (Orchidee)
a lovely prayerful read Steve - thanks for sharing the comfort such...
October 7th, 2017 10:22 - On Line Love (Mugsdaddy)
Love this admission of good on-line love - - a beautiful read.
October 7th, 2017 10:20 - perfect time (Frank Prem)
Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em...
October 7th, 2017 08:45 - Is Opera For Me? (Goldfinch60)
I have to agree with Michael here - opera has ever been fighting to get...
October 7th, 2017 08:41 - Missed (FredPeyer)
Ooooh now this I can relate to Fred - - a missed train stands for so much...
October 7th, 2017 08:38 - Consequences are free (Poetic Dan)
Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had...
October 7th, 2017 08:30 - MAKE ME MORE LIKE AN APPLE TREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a charming comparison you make here Brian - being likened to a tree...
October 7th, 2017 08:23 - tide (Dusk arising)
So vividly portrayed the change autumn brings to both tide and shore - ...
October 6th, 2017 11:18 - PTSD (Christina8)
Such a tragic disease is that called theses days as PTSD when from...
October 6th, 2017 11:09
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