Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Child of the clouds (Netashi)
An apt reassurance that love has many faces and friendship being one the...
April 2nd, 2019 13:39 - Stop questioning! (Poetic Dan)
Yes too much questioning can lead to discouragement Dan - hope soon you...
April 2nd, 2019 09:01 - Hopeful (Sylviasearcher)
The chorus appeals as it has musical undertones - and my favourtie verse...
April 2nd, 2019 08:58 - Thirsty Tones (Orchidee)
Faith of the best kind finds first place in this inspiring verse Orchi.
April 2nd, 2019 05:16 - How Can I Fail? (Goldfinch60)
And beautiful words you compose in this ballad to real success dear Goldy...
April 2nd, 2019 05:13 - Hungry Corner (Neville)
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - -...
April 2nd, 2019 04:16 - The missing piece. (Jay123)
A cleverly worded piece of metaphor with a sound message which is very...
April 2nd, 2019 04:07 - MELLOW YELLOW ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 6 DODECET ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
One of the most alluring of dress-colours on the right type of skin is...
April 2nd, 2019 04:02 - The butterfly tree (Crystal Hope)
What a delightful first read of my day - - -I love to see butterflies...
April 2nd, 2019 00:50 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this...
April 1st, 2019 16:13 - Morning and Night (Jeffrey Roy)
Filled with love\'s bounty these warm confessions would comfort any heart...
April 1st, 2019 06:32 - Waiting (Jenny Wren)
A poignancy flows through these lines Jennny -- so telling the message...
April 1st, 2019 06:30 - my heaven (Birddie Jane)
A lovely read bluejay - so colourfully penned - the pink in the...
April 1st, 2019 06:28 - Gone for a Week. (Goldfinch60)
How strong you must be to continue with tending dementia dear Goldy - my...
April 1st, 2019 06:02 - TIME & AGE ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wishing you years of adventure dear Brian - a lovely read on the need to...
April 1st, 2019 04:05
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