Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN ~ G U I T A R Acrostet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine acrostic and oh those guitars - a truly favourite instrument with me...
February 7th, 2019 13:58 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
An enjoyable and informative read with lessons to learn Orchi.
February 7th, 2019 13:55 - Spilled milk (Netashi)
An engaging read and warning on what rage can taint and spoil - - ...
February 7th, 2019 13:52 - Evergreen pastures (Caleb.A)
Expression, metre and pace make this tale of pre-birth a special read...
February 7th, 2019 13:41 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
Labels are often meant to be negative where people who have them attached...
February 7th, 2019 09:47 - C stands for calligraphy (Netashi)
Sincere thanks for this cascade of reasons that a real poet has to...
February 7th, 2019 03:17 - UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good observations on the state of some relationship;s when love is a word...
February 6th, 2019 16:13 - Your Hand (Rrodriguez)
A powerful scene your words set when time of death draws near to a loved...
February 6th, 2019 14:56 - A Day Changes (W c)
Vividly worded this poetic change from season to season. A first rate...
February 6th, 2019 14:53 - My core (Joseph M Marion)
So very romantic and honestly written this read touches the core of true...
February 6th, 2019 14:51 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad...
February 6th, 2019 14:47 - At least, that\'s me. (Siranswerer)
Excellent poetic description of the ins and outs when counting the cost of...
February 6th, 2019 12:03 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
An outpour of needed words in this revolt against pharma-control - -...
February 6th, 2019 03:25 - The Hunter (CindyB)
A mysterious feel in every line of this intriguing write Cindy - - a haunt...
February 5th, 2019 07:16 - 575s - SERIOUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
The short but punchy lines you use stay with this reader long after the...
February 5th, 2019 07:09
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