Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Man Flu (The Retired Bloke)
Ah - a good twist to the tale in those final lines RB - - \"man-flue\" is...
December 12th, 2018 05:46 - BLACK & WHITE ~ A REVERSE ABCDARIAN POEM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks for the honesty in these wonderful lines Brian .A beautiful list of...
December 11th, 2018 17:05 - SHORTIE TWO (Michael Edwards)
Yes seal it is Michael - perceptive write and gorgeous water-colour.
December 11th, 2018 04:35 - Malfunctioning (Poetic Dan)
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend -...
December 10th, 2018 11:39 - SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards)
Short line wise advice Michael - - love the mysterious path leading to -...
December 10th, 2018 03:29 - TWELVE GIFTS OF CHRISTMAS : BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Bravo to both of you - -Excellent and very original twelve-day Christmas...
December 10th, 2018 03:28 - ORCHESTRATEY (Michael Edwards)
A fantastic re-assembly of language we now rarely hear yet remember well -...
December 9th, 2018 04:19 - Afterwards (Neville)
Ah - the blissful feeling of sexual contentment this read with its honest...
December 9th, 2018 04:14 - Autumn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely first read of my day - thank you or such an honest tribute to...
December 9th, 2018 04:02 - IF I CAN HELP SOMEBODY ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautiful confession of love by you two lovely people - good to read...
December 8th, 2018 13:06 - What Do I Want From You (Neville)
So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away -...
December 7th, 2018 04:02 - The Other Side of Fear. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent piece of advice dear Goldi - yes a fearless approach to life...
December 7th, 2018 04:00 - CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - my favourite of these couplets has to be the one about Noah and...
December 7th, 2018 02:56 - THE PERFECT CUP OF COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
Michael - Flavours are nonsense when serving good coffee - I love the...
December 6th, 2018 17:43 - The Promise of a Shower (The Retired Bloke)
A place of sheer silence that oozes gross fear -- no space is daubed...
December 6th, 2018 17:34
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