Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- SEASONS OF MY MIND : COLUMNETTE : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine new structure Angela and you have presented it well
in columnar...
November 16th, 2018 06:13 - Seasonals (Michael Edwards)
A fine array of the follow-ups as season gives way to season in these...
November 15th, 2018 06:26 - PRAY FOR CALIFORNIA ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Awful the devastation described by your sonnet as California burns right...
November 14th, 2018 06:22 - FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards)
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed...
November 13th, 2018 10:39 - NATURE LOVES HEXAGONS : ANGELA : A Form Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your choice of the hexagon shape is one I can really relate to for it is...
November 13th, 2018 04:06 - AND SO TO BED (Michael Edwards)
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha -...
November 12th, 2018 03:23 - Midnight Melody (Netashi)
A good mantra for looking at life\'s surprises and learn from them all - ...
November 9th, 2018 13:15 - Time\'s Bouquet (Lorna)
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old...
November 8th, 2018 05:46 - All Along (Christina K)
A heartfelt prayer which is so honest and appealing dear Christina - -...
November 8th, 2018 03:41 - O LORD MY GOD : HOW GREAT YOU ARE : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely confession of faith in these compelling lines Angela - -...
November 8th, 2018 03:35 - oh heart (Frank Prem)
Powerful feel to these short lines Frank - a timely reminder that peace...
November 8th, 2018 03:28 - River (Sylviasearcher)
A write to make readers want more of this warm and inviting stream of...
November 7th, 2018 16:16 - Autumn (Lorna)
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well...
November 7th, 2018 15:46 - Battle of Cambrai 1917 (John f skinner)
A haunt of a read and a memorable lament of the victims who left their...
November 7th, 2018 15:03 - BUT I CAN WRITE (Michael Edwards)
So good you are home again after the op. Michael - resting now is the...
November 7th, 2018 09:06
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