Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- SUNRISE : SUNSET : AUCKLAND : ANGELA : Rhyming 644 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your zeal for the wondrous rise and fall of the sun on the island fills...
October 24th, 2018 20:39 - EXERCISE : ESSENTIAL TO EXIST ! : AN ACROSTIC : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mobility with lots of regular walks is the key which this fine poem brings...
October 23rd, 2018 06:48 - ONE FOOT IN THE GRAVE (The Poet Doctor)
Such a sad and familiar happening n this poorly world - a verse which...
October 23rd, 2018 06:46 - Cupid\'s Arrows (W c)
A charm of a write and delight to read too W.C. - - thank you for sharing.
October 23rd, 2018 03:04 - FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards)
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the...
October 23rd, 2018 02:44 - The morning after (H. Ray Davis)
Love expressed like this will thrill the fortunate lady - - a beautiful...
October 22nd, 2018 12:52 - A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - Love all the apt rhyming words in this poetic warning against...
October 19th, 2018 11:16 - Half Moon (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful description in poetic terms of the moon\'s striking radiance...
October 19th, 2018 07:05 - My Everything (Christina8)
Such a heart-warming feel in this lovely ballad dear Christina - your poem...
October 19th, 2018 03:43 - Icarus (Powder Blue) (Syd)
A forceful warning on drug-use and the fall that precedes flights to more...
October 16th, 2018 16:07 - ...and so it is (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The well-chosen image speaks loudly in accord with your powerful words in...
October 16th, 2018 15:58 - You will live on beside me. (EliDagger)
A lament which only those know who have loved much and lost to death - - -...
October 16th, 2018 15:48 - Seville Stunner (The Retired Bloke)
You have instilled an ardour for football viewing with this fervent...
October 16th, 2018 05:31 - MY EWER (Michael Edwards)
Yes I agree the words are special my friend - - I see appreciation for...
October 16th, 2018 02:46 - Inspirational Drought (The Retired Bloke)
Ah - we who daily put pen to poetic paper get the same blockage from...
October 15th, 2018 08:26
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