Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- up and atom (Onepauly)
A power-packed write Paul - - love the twist and play on words which add...
April 28th, 2018 02:26 - LOVERS ON THE SHORE ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You fill the experience with happy romance - to be with a loved one in...
April 27th, 2018 03:10 - The Great Escape (Lorna)
I love this write Lorna - the feel of this tribute to sleep soothes as it...
April 26th, 2018 16:01 - Barn Fire (W c)
A telling story of the power of flames - - - a great scene your lines set...
April 26th, 2018 13:48 - POWER OF THE CROSS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
To adorn your passionate words you chose my father\'s favourite hymn and...
April 26th, 2018 13:46 - LIMERICK No54 (Michael Edwards)
I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for...
April 26th, 2018 03:42 - Child Of Change (Syd)
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53 - Buy By All Means (Lorna)
This verse says it all in these crazy times of materialism\'s allure - a...
April 24th, 2018 08:53 - WILLIAM AND KATE ~ An Aristocratic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A precious happening is the birth of a child and this one being so special...
April 24th, 2018 03:34 - Dismay (Aa Harvey)
A true message of love which will never fade despite the dismay of not yet...
April 23rd, 2018 16:11 - Little Tiny White Things (Lorna)
A lovely piece of gratitude for all things little and white at this time...
April 23rd, 2018 16:08 - create (Onepauly)
I truly agree with these clever lines on the power of mindfulness Pauly.
April 23rd, 2018 16:05 - The Dance (Lasergraph)
Oh how wonderful for you be there when your five year old grandchild...
April 23rd, 2018 16:03 - SHE SHOPPED AT LIDL (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - I have seen that done Michael - - bags by the load are needed...
April 23rd, 2018 05:47 - EARTH ~ AIR ~ FIRE ~ WATER ~ TANKAS (57577) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Four seems enough when addressing the elements needed for gratitude to ...
April 23rd, 2018 05:44
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