Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Omniscient Observations (Orchidee)
Our Creator know all our hearts and this lovely observation of how cared...
February 16th, 2018 17:14 - Love can never be denied (FredPeyer)
Love the imagery you use in this confession of love\'s captive hold - ...
February 16th, 2018 17:11 - Bridges. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely description of life\'s different stages when searching for...
February 16th, 2018 17:09 - hate me love (Heather T)
Your use of metaphor slips between accepted word-meanings with such ease...
February 16th, 2018 16:42 - unprepared (Dusk arising)
A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
February 16th, 2018 16:27 - What If… (Accidental Poet)
Good question to describe such a longing A.P - - an engaging read.
February 16th, 2018 07:04 - IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards)
Clipped and powerful these lines complete the circle of wisdom Michael. -...
February 16th, 2018 04:01 - Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer)
Ah - your pen describes perfectly the feeling of being at one with nature...
February 15th, 2018 14:16 - WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards)
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey...
February 15th, 2018 05:51 - HIGHWAY TO HAWAII (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Still grinning at this one Brian - Fred will be over the moon. Ha ha - ...
February 15th, 2018 05:48 - Just for You (Lorna)
Superb poetry here Lorna - must put this appealing few lines into my...
February 15th, 2018 05:45 - tease (Heather T)
Ah - - tease indeed in this place too Heather - so unpredictable from high...
February 14th, 2018 17:29 - For Valentine’s Day (Malubotelho)
Good to see you back posting again Malu and these lovely Valentine wishes...
February 14th, 2018 14:37 - My Red Arrow (Lorna)
Such a fresh and vibrant approach to Valentine\'s Day dear Lorna - I love...
February 14th, 2018 06:23 - I JUST PRAY THAT I\'LL SURVIVE ~ Title Progression Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the flow of this poem and its Title Chase form Brian - along with...
February 13th, 2018 15:01
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