Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- COLD CRABS (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - love this play on words Michael
-- by the addition of one letter...
January 13th, 2018 17:25 - NESSUN DORMA (Michael Edwards)
Beauty in both the song and the writing here Michael - still trying to...
January 12th, 2018 11:05 - Edge - Co-Written by Goldfinch and Hood. (Goldfinch60)
A really good co-write on the light-dark difference - well done you two.
January 12th, 2018 11:01 - FUNKY FOOTWEAR ~ TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Filled with funky fun in the shoe-line is this tanka dear Brian - - with...
January 12th, 2018 11:00 - A little respect (Aa Harvey)
A telling rhyme of how fickle some treat that gem called love - - thanks...
January 12th, 2018 10:56 - Rapturous Rose (Orchidee)
A true statement that final one in this excellent write on the nature of...
January 12th, 2018 10:54 - Open your heart (Tony36)
Such good advice here Tony - - giving love another chance in the best...
January 12th, 2018 10:47 - Saved by the Light (FredPeyer)
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly...
January 11th, 2018 17:20 - Another One (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never...
January 11th, 2018 13:31 - TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING (Louis Gibbs)
A wisdom-packed bundle of truths in this tribute to a precious newly-born...
January 11th, 2018 13:19 - THE BEAST (Louis Gibbs)
Reading this makes my heart expand in sympathy for all such young victims...
January 11th, 2018 06:15 - 2018 ~ THE EXPECTATIONS ~ An Acrostic 3 11 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen to these inspiring words dear Brian. Togetherness is really...
January 10th, 2018 09:40 - SHUT UP (Michael Edwards)
Ah clever use of clerical terms in this reminder that danger lies in...
January 10th, 2018 05:33 - Double Doors (FredPeyer)
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of...
January 9th, 2018 13:22 - In Search Of Me (Accidental Poet)
Thanks for these words of wisdom A.P. - I relate especially to the...
January 9th, 2018 13:19
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