Comments received on poems by Dakota
The art of pain
Goldfinch60 said:
Pain can be in our lives in many forms but your strength comes through in your words and with that strength you will be able to move on and eventually conquer pain.
Andy
March 24th, 2020 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Pain can be in our lives in many forms but your strength comes through in your words and with that strength you will be able to move on and eventually conquer pain.
Andy
March 24th, 2020 02:07
A song stuck in my head
Narcisa said:
This reminds me of the poem I wrote called my beautiful secret did you read it 👀
March 15th, 2020 21:14
Narcisa said:
This reminds me of the poem I wrote called my beautiful secret did you read it 👀
March 15th, 2020 21:14
Authenticity
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This was very different..it takes on a journey in a way...i liked the parts about how your significant other lives in cy er space instead ifin the real world..social media addicts are not relation ship worthy if u ask me...they live in a fantasy land which can be extremely detrimental in a relationship and usually ends up being so
March 1st, 2020 18:10
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This was very different..it takes on a journey in a way...i liked the parts about how your significant other lives in cy er space instead ifin the real world..social media addicts are not relation ship worthy if u ask me...they live in a fantasy land which can be extremely detrimental in a relationship and usually ends up being so
March 1st, 2020 18:10
Authenticity
dusk arising said:
Lack of and inappropriately placed punctuation has left me confuse about this piece. Use of commas would have helped i think. Placing question marks in strange places e.g. \"take a look how much money?\" just led to several re-reads in a failed attempt to understand.
Gave up trying to make sense of this thinking it is probably just a rant written in the heat of the moment.
March 1st, 2020 08:38
dusk arising said:
Lack of and inappropriately placed punctuation has left me confuse about this piece. Use of commas would have helped i think. Placing question marks in strange places e.g. \"take a look how much money?\" just led to several re-reads in a failed attempt to understand.
Gave up trying to make sense of this thinking it is probably just a rant written in the heat of the moment.
March 1st, 2020 08:38
V-day
Barry Hodges said:
I fail to see the point of all the bad grammar and intentional mis-spellings.
February 13th, 2020 13:56
Barry Hodges said:
I fail to see the point of all the bad grammar and intentional mis-spellings.
February 13th, 2020 13:56
New day
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day is special, may your new days lead you into your good life.
February 2nd, 2020 03:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day is special, may your new days lead you into your good life.
February 2nd, 2020 03:17
Break these bonds
kevin browne said:
I\'m quite sure there must be a way out of the position your poignant voice must be. Living amongst life and the people who surround you and your goals are obviously a tricky situation for you and your loved ones. You extract the emotions of what it\'s like to be alone, but trust in the beleif that one day the clouds of confusion will clear to reveal a landscape of thought so beautiful and real that you will almost delcare yourself a pur godess of solving the problems within you art of writing poetry. A big well done for being so honest and truthful a thought you brng to the heart.
January 19th, 2020 20:21
kevin browne said:
I\'m quite sure there must be a way out of the position your poignant voice must be. Living amongst life and the people who surround you and your goals are obviously a tricky situation for you and your loved ones. You extract the emotions of what it\'s like to be alone, but trust in the beleif that one day the clouds of confusion will clear to reveal a landscape of thought so beautiful and real that you will almost delcare yourself a pur godess of solving the problems within you art of writing poetry. A big well done for being so honest and truthful a thought you brng to the heart.
January 19th, 2020 20:21
Break these bonds
Nicholas Browning said:
This hit me like a brick. Sometimes we have to be alone to see the point of everything else. Kind of hard to find the meaning in things when you\'re surrounded by people that have already found theirs, or people that don\'t care to look.
January 19th, 2020 11:10
Nicholas Browning said:
This hit me like a brick. Sometimes we have to be alone to see the point of everything else. Kind of hard to find the meaning in things when you\'re surrounded by people that have already found theirs, or people that don\'t care to look.
January 19th, 2020 11:10
Head up (me to me)
Goldfinch60 said:
Stick with it Dakota, your life is ahead, every time you are knocked back just put it down to experience and move on.
December 9th, 2019 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Stick with it Dakota, your life is ahead, every time you are knocked back just put it down to experience and move on.
December 9th, 2019 01:51
Words thought not spoken
Thoughts In Time said:
Self love is the biggest achievement ...don’t doubt yourself🌹
October 16th, 2019 10:28
Thoughts In Time said:
Self love is the biggest achievement ...don’t doubt yourself🌹
October 16th, 2019 10:28
My Thoughts
Poetic Dan said:
You tested the water and threw in a rock, the ripples will go on as much as you thought! We all need to fix our own houses before looking to help anyone else, it\'s like the 5th November has become a joke.
But in this age of information are we not each the firework.... O think I\'ll be writing that one down lol.
Much peace and respect
Pen warriors are need!
October 16th, 2019 10:28
Poetic Dan said:
You tested the water and threw in a rock, the ripples will go on as much as you thought! We all need to fix our own houses before looking to help anyone else, it\'s like the 5th November has become a joke.
But in this age of information are we not each the firework.... O think I\'ll be writing that one down lol.
Much peace and respect
Pen warriors are need!
October 16th, 2019 10:28
A dead poet
Poetic Dan said:
What a soulful outpouring of your heart, every day you are different piece of art!
October 16th, 2019 10:21
Poetic Dan said:
What a soulful outpouring of your heart, every day you are different piece of art!
October 16th, 2019 10:21
Words thought not spoken
Poetic Dan said:
Took a while to absorb your last line, I heard the words (Bruce Lee) don\'t think, feel! So you are probably right.
Great flow and style
Keep up the write
October 16th, 2019 10:18
Poetic Dan said:
Took a while to absorb your last line, I heard the words (Bruce Lee) don\'t think, feel! So you are probably right.
Great flow and style
Keep up the write
October 16th, 2019 10:18
Empty hallways
Goldfinch60 said:
That life may be dark but if you look in that mirror there will be a light, look for the light and walk on towards it, all will be well.
September 10th, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That life may be dark but if you look in that mirror there will be a light, look for the light and walk on towards it, all will be well.
September 10th, 2019 00:29
Empty hallways
Bragee said:
Good writing. Strong sense of an eerie type of vibe that really helps drive the point home.
September 9th, 2019 10:10
Bragee said:
Good writing. Strong sense of an eerie type of vibe that really helps drive the point home.
September 9th, 2019 10:10
A sip of reality
dusk arising said:
OK good message.
But too long.... \"less is more\" try to say it in less words.... alternatively...consider covering less ground in each of several pieces/poems. It will get you more readers
Please don\'t misunderstand my words... i\'m not disrespecting your work... no, i\'m trying to offer you constructive help... it\'s easy to see you have a lot to say - but you can\'t say it ALL in one hit sir!
August 8th, 2019 14:47
dusk arising said:
OK good message.
But too long.... \"less is more\" try to say it in less words.... alternatively...consider covering less ground in each of several pieces/poems. It will get you more readers
Please don\'t misunderstand my words... i\'m not disrespecting your work... no, i\'m trying to offer you constructive help... it\'s easy to see you have a lot to say - but you can\'t say it ALL in one hit sir!
August 8th, 2019 14:47
Fools gold
D. K. Heqet said:
Jheeeze. What a read. Very emotive. I hope you’re okay haha.
May 29th, 2019 15:36
D. K. Heqet said:
Jheeeze. What a read. Very emotive. I hope you’re okay haha.
May 29th, 2019 15:36
Out of body
Nicholas Browning said:
The question that no one on this earth can answer except for you.
Best of luck finding the answer.
March 18th, 2019 00:39
Nicholas Browning said:
The question that no one on this earth can answer except for you.
Best of luck finding the answer.
March 18th, 2019 00:39
curly headed cutie
Goldfinch60 said:
Take hat step into her life, all will be well.
March 1st, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Take hat step into her life, all will be well.
March 1st, 2019 01:44
curly headed cutie
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Faint heart never won fair maiden D... carpe diem and all that?
Great write
February 28th, 2019 05:59
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Faint heart never won fair maiden D... carpe diem and all that?
Great write
February 28th, 2019 05:59
My heart
dusk arising said:
No you\'re not lost. Your heart just needs to learn to be happy enjoying all the nice things in life as well as the getting involved in romantic stuff which can be hurtful as well as ecstatic.
February 8th, 2019 21:54
dusk arising said:
No you\'re not lost. Your heart just needs to learn to be happy enjoying all the nice things in life as well as the getting involved in romantic stuff which can be hurtful as well as ecstatic.
February 8th, 2019 21:54
Loose ends
kevin browne said:
Change is one of the greatest abilities you can have. Make those changes happen, Dakota and step on to the new uncertain paths you walk to experience a brand new start. Go for it, my friend,
January 27th, 2019 11:05
kevin browne said:
Change is one of the greatest abilities you can have. Make those changes happen, Dakota and step on to the new uncertain paths you walk to experience a brand new start. Go for it, my friend,
January 27th, 2019 11:05
escape
BoxMyHeart said:
Escaping the confines of religion?
I liked it! Thanks for writing.
January 20th, 2019 04:05
BoxMyHeart said:
Escaping the confines of religion?
I liked it! Thanks for writing.
January 20th, 2019 04:05
Matter
Fay Slimm. said:
The appeal of questions on life\'s unfairness and brevity comes through each line in this powerful read. Positive hopes bring a light note to your final lines making the write even more helpful to those feeling broken. Well done Dakota.
January 10th, 2019 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
The appeal of questions on life\'s unfairness and brevity comes through each line in this powerful read. Positive hopes bring a light note to your final lines making the write even more helpful to those feeling broken. Well done Dakota.
January 10th, 2019 04:56
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