Comments received on poems by Dakota
January 1st
Black Walker said:
This is relatable to a level and it is strikingly honest. I hope this year brings you tons of happiness, comfort, memories, peace, content and that all your wishes come true ✨
January 1st, 2019 12:41
Black Walker said:
This is relatable to a level and it is strikingly honest. I hope this year brings you tons of happiness, comfort, memories, peace, content and that all your wishes come true ✨
January 1st, 2019 12:41
mothers nest
Goldfinch60 said:
The strength of Mothers is shown in their love for you as you have shown in your words.
December 20th, 2018 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
The strength of Mothers is shown in their love for you as you have shown in your words.
December 20th, 2018 01:02
paths
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem expands on the fact we have to choose the paths we take in life. Everything is a choice and we fear that we may make the wrong one.
Edit \"undieing\" in line 13. Should be \"undying.\" You may also want to include an apostrophe in \"im.\"
(I\'m meaning I am).
The reader receives your intent.
Nicely written. Keep posting. :-)
November 24th, 2018 17:27
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem expands on the fact we have to choose the paths we take in life. Everything is a choice and we fear that we may make the wrong one.
Edit \"undieing\" in line 13. Should be \"undying.\" You may also want to include an apostrophe in \"im.\"
(I\'m meaning I am).
The reader receives your intent.
Nicely written. Keep posting. :-)
November 24th, 2018 17:27
numb
AlinaVanderson said:
you\'ve got an absolutely wicked way with words, never lose this its phenomenal. Seriously embrace this as much as you can it\'s beautiful.
November 15th, 2018 09:55
AlinaVanderson said:
you\'ve got an absolutely wicked way with words, never lose this its phenomenal. Seriously embrace this as much as you can it\'s beautiful.
November 15th, 2018 09:55
haunted dreams
Christina8 said:
Even though I\'m over it, I know what you mean! I have \"haunted dreams\" once in a while too.....Nice poem!
October 18th, 2018 20:57
Christina8 said:
Even though I\'m over it, I know what you mean! I have \"haunted dreams\" once in a while too.....Nice poem!
October 18th, 2018 20:57
Family is Forever
Goldfinch60 said:
Family certainly is forever, even through trials and tribulations they will always be there for you.
October 10th, 2018 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Family certainly is forever, even through trials and tribulations they will always be there for you.
October 10th, 2018 00:10
Family is Forever
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well written collection of reasons for considering the value of family - thanks Dakota for sharing it.
October 9th, 2018 11:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well written collection of reasons for considering the value of family - thanks Dakota for sharing it.
October 9th, 2018 11:29
Family is Forever
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great writefrom the heart
Good message to everyone
Thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2018 10:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great writefrom the heart
Good message to everyone
Thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2018 10:37
Mrs Cook (Rockledge High 2015-2016)
Laura🌻 said:
Dakota,
This is a beautiful write! I really hope Mrs. Cook knew how much you appreciated her before she was killed!
I appreciate your write!
That’s a great pic!
~Laura~
September 18th, 2018 19:01
Laura🌻 said:
Dakota,
This is a beautiful write! I really hope Mrs. Cook knew how much you appreciated her before she was killed!
I appreciate your write!
That’s a great pic!
~Laura~
September 18th, 2018 19:01
What she should know
Crystal Hope said:
Aww! So beautifully written. A sweet love poem. 🌸🌼🌷
August 10th, 2018 00:13
Crystal Hope said:
Aww! So beautifully written. A sweet love poem. 🌸🌼🌷
August 10th, 2018 00:13
What if
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
YOU ARE SUCH A KIND SOUL..THIS HAD ME TEARY EYED...YOU WILL FIND YOUR HAPPINESS...I PROMISE U THAT...HOW COULD ANY GIRL LOOKING FOR TRUE LOVE RESIST YOU???
August 4th, 2018 07:46
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
YOU ARE SUCH A KIND SOUL..THIS HAD ME TEARY EYED...YOU WILL FIND YOUR HAPPINESS...I PROMISE U THAT...HOW COULD ANY GIRL LOOKING FOR TRUE LOVE RESIST YOU???
August 4th, 2018 07:46
Ready
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man, this is very deep...and really sad...I feel for you...I understand how family can be..my own family has always been, though there is a great del of love, dysfunctional at best and it hurts sometimes...terribly...you are absolutely right, ultimately we don\'t belong here on Earth...this is only the beginning stage...so, when your time comes to travel upward or onward, it will happen naturally...I hope that this sadness in you has been rectified since you wrote this piece...either way, very nice work...I would love to read something of yours that is a bit more log hearted,...best wishes...keep writing..you have the talent, that is obvious...xxxooo
August 3rd, 2018 15:24
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man, this is very deep...and really sad...I feel for you...I understand how family can be..my own family has always been, though there is a great del of love, dysfunctional at best and it hurts sometimes...terribly...you are absolutely right, ultimately we don\'t belong here on Earth...this is only the beginning stage...so, when your time comes to travel upward or onward, it will happen naturally...I hope that this sadness in you has been rectified since you wrote this piece...either way, very nice work...I would love to read something of yours that is a bit more log hearted,...best wishes...keep writing..you have the talent, that is obvious...xxxooo
August 3rd, 2018 15:24
Being honest
FredPeyer said:
Relationships have been, are, and will be difficult sometimes. You expressed it well, Dakota. The last two lines are very telling!
January 20th, 2018 19:13
FredPeyer said:
Relationships have been, are, and will be difficult sometimes. You expressed it well, Dakota. The last two lines are very telling!
January 20th, 2018 19:13
Keep Going
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, we all need to climb that hill of life and once the top is reached we can look back at our achievements.
November 16th, 2017 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, we all need to climb that hill of life and once the top is reached we can look back at our achievements.
November 16th, 2017 01:50
Keep Going
jonnyc1 said:
It\'s a message we all need to hear and feel, I know I do. Very real and to the point, keep sharing can\'t wait to read the next one.
November 15th, 2017 16:25
jonnyc1 said:
It\'s a message we all need to hear and feel, I know I do. Very real and to the point, keep sharing can\'t wait to read the next one.
November 15th, 2017 16:25
What now?
Goldfinch60 said:
Wherever you go you have made a good start here to introduce yourself to the world of the written word.
It is a pleasure to read your writing.
October 29th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wherever you go you have made a good start here to introduce yourself to the world of the written word.
It is a pleasure to read your writing.
October 29th, 2017 01:26
What now?
FredPeyer said:
I like it Dakota! The age old questions: Where are we going and where are we coming from?
I am now introduced to your writing, like it, and want to read more from you.
October 28th, 2017 14:50
FredPeyer said:
I like it Dakota! The age old questions: Where are we going and where are we coming from?
I am now introduced to your writing, like it, and want to read more from you.
October 28th, 2017 14:50
10/08/2017 empty page
Goldfinch60 said:
That empty page can be daunting but if you use your pen as you have in these wonderful words those pages will be filled with glory.
October 9th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That empty page can be daunting but if you use your pen as you have in these wonderful words those pages will be filled with glory.
October 9th, 2017 00:55
My Thoughts
chinaaliciarivera said:
Your writing is interesting and i love the rhyming. Nice. Keep on writing. 💗💕 🌌 😊
October 4th, 2017 16:33
chinaaliciarivera said:
Your writing is interesting and i love the rhyming. Nice. Keep on writing. 💗💕 🌌 😊
October 4th, 2017 16:33
Arrival
orchidee said:
You painting there? Painting your canvas of life?! I tried it, but found I was using invisible ink! doh! heehee.
October 3rd, 2017 11:37
orchidee said:
You painting there? Painting your canvas of life?! I tried it, but found I was using invisible ink! doh! heehee.
October 3rd, 2017 11:37
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