Comments received on poems by ShannonXx
Just say sorry
kevin browne said:
people say sorry mostly just because it gets them away from the real matter of the issue. they say when actually they don\'t even mean it.having the ability to own up to ones own mistakes takes you on to another level of thought. meaning that if you want to deny yourself as a good human being then carry on denying then it\'s the real shame of that which happening. only apoligize if you know you are right. thanks for bringing this up, its really important x
July 9th, 2017 14:46
kevin browne said:
people say sorry mostly just because it gets them away from the real matter of the issue. they say when actually they don\'t even mean it.having the ability to own up to ones own mistakes takes you on to another level of thought. meaning that if you want to deny yourself as a good human being then carry on denying then it\'s the real shame of that which happening. only apoligize if you know you are right. thanks for bringing this up, its really important x
July 9th, 2017 14:46
More than perfect
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write and message. All children surprise you and all deserve our love and respect.
July 7th, 2017 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write and message. All children surprise you and all deserve our love and respect.
July 7th, 2017 01:09
More than perfect
P.H.Rose said:
Oh!! Shannon this is lovely
Really good story in it.
I love it.. well done..
July 6th, 2017 17:16
P.H.Rose said:
Oh!! Shannon this is lovely
Really good story in it.
I love it.. well done..
July 6th, 2017 17:16
More than perfect
Hopey_xx said:
Wow, so beautiful. Keep writing things that you don\'t see written about as often, you did such a great job!
July 6th, 2017 16:26
Hopey_xx said:
Wow, so beautiful. Keep writing things that you don\'t see written about as often, you did such a great job!
July 6th, 2017 16:26
More than perfect
Confused kid said:
I haven\'t had the privilege of becoming a parent but I hope to feel what you feel one day, really lovely work
July 6th, 2017 15:10
Confused kid said:
I haven\'t had the privilege of becoming a parent but I hope to feel what you feel one day, really lovely work
July 6th, 2017 15:10
More than perfect
Michael Edwards said:
These are such lovely sensitive people and you have written the tale with such understanding and compassion - great write Shannon.
July 6th, 2017 13:48
Michael Edwards said:
These are such lovely sensitive people and you have written the tale with such understanding and compassion - great write Shannon.
July 6th, 2017 13:48
More than perfect
FredPeyer said:
The previous comments already said it, your poem is beautiful. But it is also courageous to take on a subject many people would shy away from. Beside the beautiful language you infused this poem with so much understanding and love. You described the girl in such a perfect way, ending with a fact: EVERY child is beautiful, EVERY child is perfect.
July 6th, 2017 13:31
FredPeyer said:
The previous comments already said it, your poem is beautiful. But it is also courageous to take on a subject many people would shy away from. Beside the beautiful language you infused this poem with so much understanding and love. You described the girl in such a perfect way, ending with a fact: EVERY child is beautiful, EVERY child is perfect.
July 6th, 2017 13:31
More than perfect
burning-embers said:
Just read your notes about this and realised i got things a bit wrong. However the sentiment is genuine so let it be. ooppss.
July 6th, 2017 11:38
burning-embers said:
Just read your notes about this and realised i got things a bit wrong. However the sentiment is genuine so let it be. ooppss.
July 6th, 2017 11:38
More than perfect
burning-embers said:
Wonderful expression of mothers love for a special being. I have a special daughter in her late 30\'s and i\'m well aware of the hoops and hurdles of emotion that brings. Big respect to you for finding beautiful words you could share. I havent found them yet.
July 6th, 2017 11:36
burning-embers said:
Wonderful expression of mothers love for a special being. I have a special daughter in her late 30\'s and i\'m well aware of the hoops and hurdles of emotion that brings. Big respect to you for finding beautiful words you could share. I havent found them yet.
July 6th, 2017 11:36
They would say
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, what powerful weapons our words can be. Well related here in your wise poem, Shannon!
July 3rd, 2017 12:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, what powerful weapons our words can be. Well related here in your wise poem, Shannon!
July 3rd, 2017 12:39
They would say
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, your poem is incredible. Not only very well written, but the way you lead us to look at it from two different angles. How a person can so easily be misunderstood because we do not take the time and do not make the effort to understand. We so easily assume the wrong things. And then the surprising and unexpected happens at the end exposing all the above as false.
Great poem. I really enjoyed it.
July 3rd, 2017 12:29
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, your poem is incredible. Not only very well written, but the way you lead us to look at it from two different angles. How a person can so easily be misunderstood because we do not take the time and do not make the effort to understand. We so easily assume the wrong things. And then the surprising and unexpected happens at the end exposing all the above as false.
Great poem. I really enjoyed it.
July 3rd, 2017 12:29
Ignored
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. Move on there is someone out there for you.
July 2nd, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. Move on there is someone out there for you.
July 2nd, 2017 01:23
Ignored
Heather T said:
One day, the right someone will not. Lovely share, beauty.
July 1st, 2017 18:41
Heather T said:
One day, the right someone will not. Lovely share, beauty.
July 1st, 2017 18:41
Ignored
malubotelho said:
I felt this poem like a give up from your heart. Some times it is better this way. It is always another path to take, another love to make.
July 1st, 2017 15:50
malubotelho said:
I felt this poem like a give up from your heart. Some times it is better this way. It is always another path to take, another love to make.
July 1st, 2017 15:50
Ignored
FredPeyer said:
As Neil Sedaka said long before your time: Breaking up is hard to do...
You are saying it so much more eloquently. Love the last line \"But my feelings would have to die\". \"Would have to...\" is the key. They (the feelings) don\'t \"want to\". To me, this last line of only seven well chosen words is the key to the whole poem. Wonderful writing Shannon!
July 1st, 2017 13:21
FredPeyer said:
As Neil Sedaka said long before your time: Breaking up is hard to do...
You are saying it so much more eloquently. Love the last line \"But my feelings would have to die\". \"Would have to...\" is the key. They (the feelings) don\'t \"want to\". To me, this last line of only seven well chosen words is the key to the whole poem. Wonderful writing Shannon!
July 1st, 2017 13:21
Ignored
Edthepoet said:
All that glitters is not always Gold. You turn emotion into art so well. I agree with DSKS your writing is getting better and better x
July 1st, 2017 12:34
Edthepoet said:
All that glitters is not always Gold. You turn emotion into art so well. I agree with DSKS your writing is getting better and better x
July 1st, 2017 12:34
Ignored
P.H.Rose said:
This is very good Shannon
By the sounds of it you
Are well rid......
Youth and romance
A sometimes
Toxic mixture!!!!!!
July 1st, 2017 10:10
P.H.Rose said:
This is very good Shannon
By the sounds of it you
Are well rid......
Youth and romance
A sometimes
Toxic mixture!!!!!!
July 1st, 2017 10:10
\'I Win\'
malubotelho said:
I really liked reading your poem. You might play selfish but love is in your heart.
June 29th, 2017 13:00
malubotelho said:
I really liked reading your poem. You might play selfish but love is in your heart.
June 29th, 2017 13:00
Daddy
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
The path your words made lead me to a fork, I thought he walked out, but as I reached the paths end, I realized I took the wrong turn at the fork, but it all left me realizing how horrible merely leaving your family behind would be, it would be as if you had died, of course, if it wasn\'t death the emotion of the remainder could be anger as well. Thank you for sharing this poem, it was well worth the read!
June 29th, 2017 12:18
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
The path your words made lead me to a fork, I thought he walked out, but as I reached the paths end, I realized I took the wrong turn at the fork, but it all left me realizing how horrible merely leaving your family behind would be, it would be as if you had died, of course, if it wasn\'t death the emotion of the remainder could be anger as well. Thank you for sharing this poem, it was well worth the read!
June 29th, 2017 12:18
\'I Win\'
FredPeyer said:
A very well written poem to honor a very special person, and in a lifetime there may only be one, maybe two, if you are really lucky, three of these.
June 28th, 2017 13:36
FredPeyer said:
A very well written poem to honor a very special person, and in a lifetime there may only be one, maybe two, if you are really lucky, three of these.
June 28th, 2017 13:36
Rehearsal
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Venturing into the macabre! There is however, one quite beautiful line that strikes me with love: \"The hunger and vulnerability in your eyes speaks what we know.\" My heart immediately melts when I see \"vulnerability\" in another; one of the purest qualities I can imagine - parallels with the beauty of \"innocence\" ...something that inspires me to protect this person; to love them...
June 26th, 2017 22:33
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Venturing into the macabre! There is however, one quite beautiful line that strikes me with love: \"The hunger and vulnerability in your eyes speaks what we know.\" My heart immediately melts when I see \"vulnerability\" in another; one of the purest qualities I can imagine - parallels with the beauty of \"innocence\" ...something that inspires me to protect this person; to love them...
June 26th, 2017 22:33
Rehearsal
Heather T said:
One of your better works. A visceral penning that hits the gut.
June 26th, 2017 18:15
Heather T said:
One of your better works. A visceral penning that hits the gut.
June 26th, 2017 18:15
You call yourself naive
alisha said:
this poem is so beautiful, i always love your work keep it up! ♥
June 25th, 2017 05:41
alisha said:
this poem is so beautiful, i always love your work keep it up! ♥
June 25th, 2017 05:41
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