Comments received on poems by ShannonXx
Dreams
swingline said:
The ability to reach out to others goes way beyond physical touch .
June 13th, 2017 12:22
swingline said:
The ability to reach out to others goes way beyond physical touch .
June 13th, 2017 12:22
You call yourself naive
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, she is a good lady but needs to have a better husband. Trust in marriage is only second to love.
June 13th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, she is a good lady but needs to have a better husband. Trust in marriage is only second to love.
June 13th, 2017 00:40
You call yourself naive
The Invisible said:
This is really great. It\'s story is really powerful and you did a great job express that.
June 12th, 2017 19:12
The Invisible said:
This is really great. It\'s story is really powerful and you did a great job express that.
June 12th, 2017 19:12
You call yourself naive
swingline said:
A head on collision waiting to happen .
June 12th, 2017 15:16
swingline said:
A head on collision waiting to happen .
June 12th, 2017 15:16
You call yourself naive
Rajkumar said:
You don\'t want your marriage to die
Nice choice of words,nicely written
June 12th, 2017 13:29
Rajkumar said:
You don\'t want your marriage to die
Nice choice of words,nicely written
June 12th, 2017 13:29
Prom Night
Heather T said:
The real ones always come out when we are down, that\'s for sure. Write on, Shannon.
June 10th, 2017 07:47
Heather T said:
The real ones always come out when we are down, that\'s for sure. Write on, Shannon.
June 10th, 2017 07:47
Prom Night
Goldfinch60 said:
The person for you sometimes is there without you knowing it. Good write.
June 10th, 2017 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The person for you sometimes is there without you knowing it. Good write.
June 10th, 2017 00:45
Prom Night
swingline said:
I keep trying to say something that won\'t embarrass me so I think all I\'ll say is all turns out for the best .
June 9th, 2017 18:43
swingline said:
I keep trying to say something that won\'t embarrass me so I think all I\'ll say is all turns out for the best .
June 9th, 2017 18:43
Prom Night
Poetic Dan said:
An awesome FLOW, Enjoyable read, thank you for sharing.
June 9th, 2017 17:36
Poetic Dan said:
An awesome FLOW, Enjoyable read, thank you for sharing.
June 9th, 2017 17:36
Little one
orchidee said:
Ahhh lovely write. It\'s terrible though when some feel they don\'t want to bring a child into the world because of the stat it\'s in. Yet we only get to hear the worst things in \'news\'.
June 7th, 2017 08:30
orchidee said:
Ahhh lovely write. It\'s terrible though when some feel they don\'t want to bring a child into the world because of the stat it\'s in. Yet we only get to hear the worst things in \'news\'.
June 7th, 2017 08:30
Little one
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I hope she follows your path of happiness.
June 7th, 2017 08:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I hope she follows your path of happiness.
June 7th, 2017 08:26
Highcliffe Beach
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Shannon, may you have many more memorable days.
June 7th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Shannon, may you have many more memorable days.
June 7th, 2017 00:53
Highcliffe Beach
Michael Edwards said:
You do write some good stuff and this is up there with them.
June 6th, 2017 11:14
Michael Edwards said:
You do write some good stuff and this is up there with them.
June 6th, 2017 11:14
Teachers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. Your teachers have given you not only love but strength, take that strength and move through life. Your life is ahead of you and enjoy every moment.
June 6th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. Your teachers have given you not only love but strength, take that strength and move through life. Your life is ahead of you and enjoy every moment.
June 6th, 2017 01:00
Teachers
swingline said:
Sounds like you had quality teachers . That makes a huge difference in a child\'s life . In America the quality is not static but up and down like a stormy sea . And the results show .
June 5th, 2017 15:20
swingline said:
Sounds like you had quality teachers . That makes a huge difference in a child\'s life . In America the quality is not static but up and down like a stormy sea . And the results show .
June 5th, 2017 15:20
Teachers
Michael Edwards said:
A most touching read - I sense that you have pulled through even though the going can\'t be easy - you deserve all the best in life and I am sure it will come your way.
June 5th, 2017 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
A most touching read - I sense that you have pulled through even though the going can\'t be easy - you deserve all the best in life and I am sure it will come your way.
June 5th, 2017 10:34
Coffee brown eyes
P.H.Rose said:
This is so good Shannon
Just a really good read..
June 4th, 2017 14:17
P.H.Rose said:
This is so good Shannon
Just a really good read..
June 4th, 2017 14:17
Coffee brown eyes
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
June 4th, 2017 10:12
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
June 4th, 2017 10:12
\'Mum\'
swingline said:
Beautifully said Shandon . I rarely say anything about spelling , mainly because I haven\'t learned English yet , but two critical words in my opinion disrupt the flow of the poem because of the spelling . Comprimisee should be compromise and ore should be aura . But after getting over that I very much enjoyed the warmth and appreciation you give us in your poem .
June 4th, 2017 09:33
swingline said:
Beautifully said Shandon . I rarely say anything about spelling , mainly because I haven\'t learned English yet , but two critical words in my opinion disrupt the flow of the poem because of the spelling . Comprimisee should be compromise and ore should be aura . But after getting over that I very much enjoyed the warmth and appreciation you give us in your poem .
June 4th, 2017 09:33
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