Comments received on poems by ShannonXx
My grave
P.H.Rose said:
I think it is
Very good Shannon
It\'s a difficult topic
To cover especially
When it\'s about
Yourself but you
Have done it justice
Well done....
May 30th, 2017 10:37
P.H.Rose said:
I think it is
Very good Shannon
It\'s a difficult topic
To cover especially
When it\'s about
Yourself but you
Have done it justice
Well done....
May 30th, 2017 10:37
Marriage
swingline said:
A marriage without God binding everything together runs a doubtful course . I married twice , and am twice divorced . I chose wives , not Godly women . Now if I ever remarry again I promised God he could pick my wife as I certainly failed .
May 29th, 2017 16:46
swingline said:
A marriage without God binding everything together runs a doubtful course . I married twice , and am twice divorced . I chose wives , not Godly women . Now if I ever remarry again I promised God he could pick my wife as I certainly failed .
May 29th, 2017 16:46
Marriage
IAmBeu said:
Very beautiful,well done. There is a church, I believe to be true, that holds that maarraige is forever, that death is only the lifting of the veil.....not till death do us part, but forever. It seems that the same spirit inspires you, consciously or unconsciously. Keep expressing yourself! 😆
May 29th, 2017 14:05
IAmBeu said:
Very beautiful,well done. There is a church, I believe to be true, that holds that maarraige is forever, that death is only the lifting of the veil.....not till death do us part, but forever. It seems that the same spirit inspires you, consciously or unconsciously. Keep expressing yourself! 😆
May 29th, 2017 14:05
Marriage
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I am a straight MAN so I am attracted to Ladies ~ because you are beautiful & fragrant ! I have met several Ladies whose skills complement mine and of course being YIN & YANG we would be able to (sometime after marriage) ~ to share our GENES and start a Family etc. For me ~ personality ~ the inner lady ~ is the most important thing ~ more important that color ~ class or culture ! If we got married ~ I hope and pray it would be forever (or until parted by DEATH). It is very serious step ~ and if children are involved DIVORCE can blight their lives. I think some get married too YOUNG ? For a MAN over 25 would be sensible and for a LADY over 20 we need to be ADULT and RESPONSIBLE ~ I do have a GF and we are in Love and hope to be married sometime. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN XX
May 29th, 2017 13:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I am a straight MAN so I am attracted to Ladies ~ because you are beautiful & fragrant ! I have met several Ladies whose skills complement mine and of course being YIN & YANG we would be able to (sometime after marriage) ~ to share our GENES and start a Family etc. For me ~ personality ~ the inner lady ~ is the most important thing ~ more important that color ~ class or culture ! If we got married ~ I hope and pray it would be forever (or until parted by DEATH). It is very serious step ~ and if children are involved DIVORCE can blight their lives. I think some get married too YOUNG ? For a MAN over 25 would be sensible and for a LADY over 20 we need to be ADULT and RESPONSIBLE ~ I do have a GF and we are in Love and hope to be married sometime. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN XX
May 29th, 2017 13:56
Gamble
Augustus said:
Like daydreaming a relation. I like the meter. It reads effortlessly. Kudos.
May 28th, 2017 14:35
Augustus said:
Like daydreaming a relation. I like the meter. It reads effortlessly. Kudos.
May 28th, 2017 14:35
Gamble
kevin browne said:
life is forever so use it to your best ability. your work is good and thought provoking so keep your head up whilst the rest of us try to x
May 28th, 2017 08:34
kevin browne said:
life is forever so use it to your best ability. your work is good and thought provoking so keep your head up whilst the rest of us try to x
May 28th, 2017 08:34
Chaos in my brain
Dodger312 said:
Wow! Very powerful writing Shan keep up the good work!👌
May 27th, 2017 23:18
Dodger312 said:
Wow! Very powerful writing Shan keep up the good work!👌
May 27th, 2017 23:18
Chaos in my brain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANNON for another ~ really viiibrant from your heart poem ~ but about you brain ! Whenever I can\'t make sense of things ~ like you ~ what I need most is a HUG ! I am sending you a CYBER HUG to exorcise your Demons and I\'ll risk getting my heart broken in CYBER SPACE ! Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN XOX
May 27th, 2017 15:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANNON for another ~ really viiibrant from your heart poem ~ but about you brain ! Whenever I can\'t make sense of things ~ like you ~ what I need most is a HUG ! I am sending you a CYBER HUG to exorcise your Demons and I\'ll risk getting my heart broken in CYBER SPACE ! Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS BRIAN XOX
May 27th, 2017 15:07
Chaos in my brain
P.H.Rose said:
Another really good poem
Shannon...
In the U.K. We\'d call it
\"Bang on\"... means
Spot on...
May 27th, 2017 13:34
P.H.Rose said:
Another really good poem
Shannon...
In the U.K. We\'d call it
\"Bang on\"... means
Spot on...
May 27th, 2017 13:34
Alien
P.H.Rose said:
Very well written Shannon.
I\'m a space fanatic also.
Well done...
May 25th, 2017 11:23
P.H.Rose said:
Very well written Shannon.
I\'m a space fanatic also.
Well done...
May 25th, 2017 11:23
Unreal Fairy tales
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your poem SHANNON with its metaphoric glimpses of fantasy love. In my experience all my best experiences of LOVE are best remembered a UNREAL FAIRY TALES ~ AMEN. THANKS FOR SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN Xx
May 24th, 2017 14:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your poem SHANNON with its metaphoric glimpses of fantasy love. In my experience all my best experiences of LOVE are best remembered a UNREAL FAIRY TALES ~ AMEN. THANKS FOR SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN Xx
May 24th, 2017 14:34
Judgement
Edthepoet said:
I like the flow and pace of this piece. Good writing. I bet few if any of those who judged you could turn emotion into art as well as you have done here.
May 23rd, 2017 17:08
Edthepoet said:
I like the flow and pace of this piece. Good writing. I bet few if any of those who judged you could turn emotion into art as well as you have done here.
May 23rd, 2017 17:08
Judgement
orchidee said:
A fine write S. Sometimes we may imagine this, unless people actually DO or SAY something hurtful to us. Most people really are too wrapped up with what they are doing, their own business, etc.
May 23rd, 2017 10:04
orchidee said:
A fine write S. Sometimes we may imagine this, unless people actually DO or SAY something hurtful to us. Most people really are too wrapped up with what they are doing, their own business, etc.
May 23rd, 2017 10:04
Judgement
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
PLEASE DON\'T JUDGE ~ AND YOU WON\'T BE JUDGED ! Trouble is SHANNON ~ Good people like you and don\'t go round judging people and yet we get judged ~ often for the smallest thing. I just ignore their rantings and get on with my Life but (as you say) IT HURTS. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Your Friend BRIAN Xx Please check my Poems ~ a sad one todya ~ Thamks B.
May 23rd, 2017 08:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
PLEASE DON\'T JUDGE ~ AND YOU WON\'T BE JUDGED ! Trouble is SHANNON ~ Good people like you and don\'t go round judging people and yet we get judged ~ often for the smallest thing. I just ignore their rantings and get on with my Life but (as you say) IT HURTS. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Your Friend BRIAN Xx Please check my Poems ~ a sad one todya ~ Thamks B.
May 23rd, 2017 08:27
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