Comments received on poems by ShannonXx
Coffee brown eyes
P.H.Rose said:
This is so good Shannon
Just a really good read..
June 4th, 2017 14:17
P.H.Rose said:
This is so good Shannon
Just a really good read..
June 4th, 2017 14:17
Coffee brown eyes
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
June 4th, 2017 10:12
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
June 4th, 2017 10:12
\'Mum\'
swingline said:
Beautifully said Shandon . I rarely say anything about spelling , mainly because I haven\'t learned English yet , but two critical words in my opinion disrupt the flow of the poem because of the spelling . Comprimisee should be compromise and ore should be aura . But after getting over that I very much enjoyed the warmth and appreciation you give us in your poem .
June 4th, 2017 09:33
swingline said:
Beautifully said Shandon . I rarely say anything about spelling , mainly because I haven\'t learned English yet , but two critical words in my opinion disrupt the flow of the poem because of the spelling . Comprimisee should be compromise and ore should be aura . But after getting over that I very much enjoyed the warmth and appreciation you give us in your poem .
June 4th, 2017 09:33
Coffee brown eyes
swingline said:
Indepth observation of your friend equates to your poetic skills . Ever watchful and observant , always eagle eyed for discernment .
June 4th, 2017 09:23
swingline said:
Indepth observation of your friend equates to your poetic skills . Ever watchful and observant , always eagle eyed for discernment .
June 4th, 2017 09:23
Coffee brown eyes
orchidee said:
Ohh boo-hoo, did you leave out the \'intellectual\' line then, writing abut me?! lol.
June 4th, 2017 09:17
orchidee said:
Ohh boo-hoo, did you leave out the \'intellectual\' line then, writing abut me?! lol.
June 4th, 2017 09:17
Coffee brown eyes
orchidee said:
Good write S. You writing it about me? Except for \'intelligent\'? heehee!
June 4th, 2017 09:08
orchidee said:
Good write S. You writing it about me? Except for \'intelligent\'? heehee!
June 4th, 2017 09:08
Salisbury City
kevin browne said:
my birthplace was in Salisbury in a hospital called odstock which has always stuck in my mind for some reason. you have written a superb piece here and I loved reading it. thank you x
June 4th, 2017 05:45
kevin browne said:
my birthplace was in Salisbury in a hospital called odstock which has always stuck in my mind for some reason. you have written a superb piece here and I loved reading it. thank you x
June 4th, 2017 05:45
Salisbury City
ShannonXx said:
Ah wow that\'s cool. It is a shame you didn\'t get to look around, it is a lovely city. And thank
You
June 4th, 2017 05:19
ShannonXx said:
Ah wow that\'s cool. It is a shame you didn\'t get to look around, it is a lovely city. And thank
You
June 4th, 2017 05:19
Salisbury City
Goldfinch60 said:
Before I retired I worked for a computer software company and part of my job was to install our software on Council computers and Salisbury Council was one I used to help. I never did get a chance to look around the city which was a shame.
Good write.
June 4th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Before I retired I worked for a computer software company and part of my job was to install our software on Council computers and Salisbury Council was one I used to help. I never did get a chance to look around the city which was a shame.
Good write.
June 4th, 2017 00:50
Salisbury City
Augustus said:
Great visual. I had a buddy I used to hang ou with when I was single. There were several places to go \"girl watching.\"
June 3rd, 2017 13:56
Augustus said:
Great visual. I had a buddy I used to hang ou with when I was single. There were several places to go \"girl watching.\"
June 3rd, 2017 13:56
Salisbury City
orchidee said:
I\'ve a slight link with the current Bishop of Salisbury. He was once a Vicar at a London church that I visited a couple of times. Though I don\'t live in Salisbury or London!
Am I \'in\' with the house of Lords, and their waffle?! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:19
orchidee said:
I\'ve a slight link with the current Bishop of Salisbury. He was once a Vicar at a London church that I visited a couple of times. Though I don\'t live in Salisbury or London!
Am I \'in\' with the house of Lords, and their waffle?! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:19
Salisbury City
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s been a long time since I was in Salisbury - as an artist whenever I think of the Cathedral I think of Constable - great write Shannon.
June 3rd, 2017 10:40
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s been a long time since I was in Salisbury - as an artist whenever I think of the Cathedral I think of Constable - great write Shannon.
June 3rd, 2017 10:40
Breathe
orchidee said:
A fine write. Erm, I tried giving up breathing for 24 hours one day (??). Did I? How come I\'m still here?! heehee.
But we can get in a hyper-state where we \'forget\' to breathe, i.e. we don\'t breathe properly.
June 3rd, 2017 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write. Erm, I tried giving up breathing for 24 hours one day (??). Did I? How come I\'m still here?! heehee.
But we can get in a hyper-state where we \'forget\' to breathe, i.e. we don\'t breathe properly.
June 3rd, 2017 01:43
Breathe
Augustus said:
Breathing can be very therapeutic. Breathe in the goodness and breathe out all the bad. Nicely done.
June 2nd, 2017 16:28
Augustus said:
Breathing can be very therapeutic. Breathe in the goodness and breathe out all the bad. Nicely done.
June 2nd, 2017 16:28
\'Mum\'
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. \'Mum\' is always there for you and aways will be.
June 2nd, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. \'Mum\' is always there for you and aways will be.
June 2nd, 2017 01:30
\'Mum\'
P.H.Rose said:
I got it straight away
Shannon.. it is really
Very good... great ending
June 1st, 2017 16:33
P.H.Rose said:
I got it straight away
Shannon.. it is really
Very good... great ending
June 1st, 2017 16:33
\'Mum\'
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for this POEM Shannon ~ and thanks for the explanation you have given to DS ! I\'m in my 30\'s and my Mum still treats me like I\'m still a Baby ! The fact that you had to rely on Surrogate and Fantasy Mums ~ makes me sad and it explains some of the angst in some of your poems. I have promised to pray for you (you know I am a Christian) and my Sunday Poems are written for you and and all my MPS Friends. Love your poems Shannon because they are very honest and in each one your share a bit more of your \"soul\" with us ! HUGS BRIAN XX
June 1st, 2017 15:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for this POEM Shannon ~ and thanks for the explanation you have given to DS ! I\'m in my 30\'s and my Mum still treats me like I\'m still a Baby ! The fact that you had to rely on Surrogate and Fantasy Mums ~ makes me sad and it explains some of the angst in some of your poems. I have promised to pray for you (you know I am a Christian) and my Sunday Poems are written for you and and all my MPS Friends. Love your poems Shannon because they are very honest and in each one your share a bit more of your \"soul\" with us ! HUGS BRIAN XX
June 1st, 2017 15:18
My grave
alisha said:
this is so well written, like tears are flowing out of my eyes. you are such an amazing writer keep up the good work!
May 31st, 2017 15:15
alisha said:
this is so well written, like tears are flowing out of my eyes. you are such an amazing writer keep up the good work!
May 31st, 2017 15:15
My grave
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, this body that we live in only lasts for a blink of an eye but our Spirit goes on for eternity.
May 31st, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, this body that we live in only lasts for a blink of an eye but our Spirit goes on for eternity.
May 31st, 2017 01:07
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