Comments received on poems by ShannonXx
\'I Win\'
FredPeyer said:
A very well written poem to honor a very special person, and in a lifetime there may only be one, maybe two, if you are really lucky, three of these.
June 28th, 2017 13:36
FredPeyer said:
A very well written poem to honor a very special person, and in a lifetime there may only be one, maybe two, if you are really lucky, three of these.
June 28th, 2017 13:36
Rehearsal
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Venturing into the macabre! There is however, one quite beautiful line that strikes me with love: \"The hunger and vulnerability in your eyes speaks what we know.\" My heart immediately melts when I see \"vulnerability\" in another; one of the purest qualities I can imagine - parallels with the beauty of \"innocence\" ...something that inspires me to protect this person; to love them...
June 26th, 2017 22:33
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Venturing into the macabre! There is however, one quite beautiful line that strikes me with love: \"The hunger and vulnerability in your eyes speaks what we know.\" My heart immediately melts when I see \"vulnerability\" in another; one of the purest qualities I can imagine - parallels with the beauty of \"innocence\" ...something that inspires me to protect this person; to love them...
June 26th, 2017 22:33
Rehearsal
Heather T said:
One of your better works. A visceral penning that hits the gut.
June 26th, 2017 18:15
Heather T said:
One of your better works. A visceral penning that hits the gut.
June 26th, 2017 18:15
You call yourself naive
alisha said:
this poem is so beautiful, i always love your work keep it up! ♥
June 25th, 2017 05:41
alisha said:
this poem is so beautiful, i always love your work keep it up! ♥
June 25th, 2017 05:41
My Green Hoodie
Heather T said:
There ain\'t nothing like a well worn hoodie. Especially if it smells like someone. I kept a sweater for a time that belonged to a lost love. I could smell his clean skin and faint cologne.
June 24th, 2017 20:09
Heather T said:
There ain\'t nothing like a well worn hoodie. Especially if it smells like someone. I kept a sweater for a time that belonged to a lost love. I could smell his clean skin and faint cologne.
June 24th, 2017 20:09
My Green Hoodie
FredPeyer said:
What a wonderful poem. Full of love, intimacy, longing. A shared hoodie as a symbol of togetherness. Love it!
June 24th, 2017 18:35
FredPeyer said:
What a wonderful poem. Full of love, intimacy, longing. A shared hoodie as a symbol of togetherness. Love it!
June 24th, 2017 18:35
My Green Hoodie
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a comfort blanket - a real token - enjoyed this immensely.
June 24th, 2017 12:22
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a comfort blanket - a real token - enjoyed this immensely.
June 24th, 2017 12:22
The one with two faces
ron parrish aka wordman said:
never let any bodies stupidity bring you down,just look where it comes from,not the person so much as where they are in their lives
June 23rd, 2017 16:14
ron parrish aka wordman said:
never let any bodies stupidity bring you down,just look where it comes from,not the person so much as where they are in their lives
June 23rd, 2017 16:14
The one with two faces
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, there are many people about with two faces but there are alo many who are good and you see them for the goodness that they have.
June 23rd, 2017 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, there are many people about with two faces but there are alo many who are good and you see them for the goodness that they have.
June 23rd, 2017 01:21
The one with two faces
malubotelho said:
It always happens. Very beautiful write.
June 22nd, 2017 21:47
malubotelho said:
It always happens. Very beautiful write.
June 22nd, 2017 21:47
The one with two faces
Lars Persson said:
Great writing! Even visually, this poems speaks to the fine line between the face of good and the \"other\" face...sad that cruelty comes so easily to so many...keep writing! You will only add to the good!
June 22nd, 2017 18:44
Lars Persson said:
Great writing! Even visually, this poems speaks to the fine line between the face of good and the \"other\" face...sad that cruelty comes so easily to so many...keep writing! You will only add to the good!
June 22nd, 2017 18:44
The one with two faces
FredPeyer said:
A very nice poem about a jekyll and hyde type of person. Unfortunately there are too many of them around and we usually find out only after it is too late. Good writing as far as I am concerned.
June 22nd, 2017 18:37
FredPeyer said:
A very nice poem about a jekyll and hyde type of person. Unfortunately there are too many of them around and we usually find out only after it is too late. Good writing as far as I am concerned.
June 22nd, 2017 18:37
The one with two faces
P.H.Rose said:
Everyone has a reason
For what they do
Some it\'s because of
What\'s happened in
Their lives and are not
Strong enough to get past
It, others, well it\'s just in
Their DNA.... if you don\'t
Let anyone hurt you
They never will...
Great poem Shannon
June 22nd, 2017 18:20
P.H.Rose said:
Everyone has a reason
For what they do
Some it\'s because of
What\'s happened in
Their lives and are not
Strong enough to get past
It, others, well it\'s just in
Their DNA.... if you don\'t
Let anyone hurt you
They never will...
Great poem Shannon
June 22nd, 2017 18:20
The one with two faces
Heather T said:
Not everyone is worth your attention, and I\'m thankful you saw through it.
June 22nd, 2017 18:12
Heather T said:
Not everyone is worth your attention, and I\'m thankful you saw through it.
June 22nd, 2017 18:12
The one with two faces
kevin browne said:
spot on write here ShannonXx. there is only one answer to this, only ever trust in your own self and don\'t allow other peoples reflections land upon your plate. that\'s where the trouble starts x
June 22nd, 2017 17:05
kevin browne said:
spot on write here ShannonXx. there is only one answer to this, only ever trust in your own self and don\'t allow other peoples reflections land upon your plate. that\'s where the trouble starts x
June 22nd, 2017 17:05
You call yourself naive
Magic Maker said:
Sounds like you\'ve learned a lot from her experience, I wish you and her the best.
June 20th, 2017 13:09
Magic Maker said:
Sounds like you\'ve learned a lot from her experience, I wish you and her the best.
June 20th, 2017 13:09
Daddy
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice job Shannon. The \"Daddy\" anaphora with liberal doses of \"Mummy\" and \"I\" firmly ground your family poem alongside God\'s greatest masterpiece: the traditional human family.
June 19th, 2017 22:52
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice job Shannon. The \"Daddy\" anaphora with liberal doses of \"Mummy\" and \"I\" firmly ground your family poem alongside God\'s greatest masterpiece: the traditional human family.
June 19th, 2017 22:52
Daddy
little lay lay said:
This. This is highly astounding. I am absolutely voiceless. Wonderful
June 19th, 2017 22:27
little lay lay said:
This. This is highly astounding. I am absolutely voiceless. Wonderful
June 19th, 2017 22:27
Olive Green Eyes
swingline said:
Does he wear tinted contacts ? A glowing account of a star on the rise .
June 17th, 2017 14:45
swingline said:
Does he wear tinted contacts ? A glowing account of a star on the rise .
June 17th, 2017 14:45
Olive Green Eyes
John Gover said:
I love the words \"focus\" in this.
You tell the subject to focus on life which is perfect because they are a personification of light, which can be focused to make light brighter.
Well done.
June 17th, 2017 12:27
John Gover said:
I love the words \"focus\" in this.
You tell the subject to focus on life which is perfect because they are a personification of light, which can be focused to make light brighter.
Well done.
June 17th, 2017 12:27
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