Comments received on poems by ShannonXx
Unknown lover
FredPeyer said:
So well written, and so powerfully emotional. While I am one of the lucky ones, through your incredible poem I can feel the loneliness, the rejection and hurt.
\'The one he brings harmony and peace\' but to you he brings pain and sorrow.
Great poem, Shannon!
August 25th, 2017 13:44
FredPeyer said:
So well written, and so powerfully emotional. While I am one of the lucky ones, through your incredible poem I can feel the loneliness, the rejection and hurt.
\'The one he brings harmony and peace\' but to you he brings pain and sorrow.
Great poem, Shannon!
August 25th, 2017 13:44
Unknown lover
myself and me said:
It is such a torment after the one you used to love and still love (maybe) turn away. The ache, the emptiness, the wonder get you choked. Time, let time heal the wounds.
The feeling is sad, the writing is beautiful.
August 25th, 2017 11:30
myself and me said:
It is such a torment after the one you used to love and still love (maybe) turn away. The ache, the emptiness, the wonder get you choked. Time, let time heal the wounds.
The feeling is sad, the writing is beautiful.
August 25th, 2017 11:30
Unknown lover
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANNON for very evocative poem. It happens and as we get older more than once ~ to Men as well as Ladies. My present GF Angela and I are safe ~ in and out of each others arms ! BUT when i saw a \"lost love\" in someone else\'s ARMS ~ my PAIN was the same as you describe in your poignant poem ! Its the SAD side of LOVE ~ Blessings ~ Big Hugs ~ BRIAN XX
August 25th, 2017 11:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANNON for very evocative poem. It happens and as we get older more than once ~ to Men as well as Ladies. My present GF Angela and I are safe ~ in and out of each others arms ! BUT when i saw a \"lost love\" in someone else\'s ARMS ~ my PAIN was the same as you describe in your poignant poem ! Its the SAD side of LOVE ~ Blessings ~ Big Hugs ~ BRIAN XX
August 25th, 2017 11:00
A broken mind
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, you scared the you know what out of me! For your sake I hope this comes from your imagination and is not an actual description of yourself.
As a poem though, it is really well written. Draws you in and doesn\'t let you go. Strong writing!
August 17th, 2017 17:11
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, you scared the you know what out of me! For your sake I hope this comes from your imagination and is not an actual description of yourself.
As a poem though, it is really well written. Draws you in and doesn\'t let you go. Strong writing!
August 17th, 2017 17:11
Things didn\'t work out
Alf W said:
I sense that your poem speaks from the heart, and with words full of meaning and desire. Love it.
August 14th, 2017 11:05
Alf W said:
I sense that your poem speaks from the heart, and with words full of meaning and desire. Love it.
August 14th, 2017 11:05
Things didn\'t work out
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, hope should always be there and sometimes it can be quite surprising.
August 8th, 2017 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, hope should always be there and sometimes it can be quite surprising.
August 8th, 2017 00:34
Things didn\'t work out
Heather T said:
Great bit of writing, sweetheart. Telling, too, when you look at the last lines.
\"I want you to hold a flame for me
Nothing more\"
August 7th, 2017 19:37
Heather T said:
Great bit of writing, sweetheart. Telling, too, when you look at the last lines.
\"I want you to hold a flame for me
Nothing more\"
August 7th, 2017 19:37
Things didn\'t work out
malubotelho said:
Beautiful expression of love and friendship. Great writing.
August 7th, 2017 15:46
malubotelho said:
Beautiful expression of love and friendship. Great writing.
August 7th, 2017 15:46
Things didn\'t work out
Hopey_xx said:
Lovely write Shannon, I enjoyed it a lot
August 7th, 2017 15:06
Hopey_xx said:
Lovely write Shannon, I enjoyed it a lot
August 7th, 2017 15:06
Things didn\'t work out
jonnyc1 said:
To feel these things is one thing, butt to put pen to paper and share it is another. Thanks for sharing that and keep writing, I agree the last lines flow really well and are really strong.
August 7th, 2017 10:30
jonnyc1 said:
To feel these things is one thing, butt to put pen to paper and share it is another. Thanks for sharing that and keep writing, I agree the last lines flow really well and are really strong.
August 7th, 2017 10:30
Things didn\'t work out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love LADIES Shannon ~ because often all they need is to be adored and flattered for how they look an act ~ not just because of the favours they can bestow ! So I am always nice to ladies and always treat them with TLC because \"They are worth it !\" For the record \"I adore you Shannon !\" Love BRIAN XX
August 7th, 2017 08:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love LADIES Shannon ~ because often all they need is to be adored and flattered for how they look an act ~ not just because of the favours they can bestow ! So I am always nice to ladies and always treat them with TLC because \"They are worth it !\" For the record \"I adore you Shannon !\" Love BRIAN XX
August 7th, 2017 08:37
My Small Silent Child
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, so full of emotion, but also with hope.
August 3rd, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, so full of emotion, but also with hope.
August 3rd, 2017 00:57
My Small Silent Child
Michael Edwards said:
Sensitive yet powerful - great work.
August 2nd, 2017 23:19
Michael Edwards said:
Sensitive yet powerful - great work.
August 2nd, 2017 23:19
My Small Silent Child
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANNON ~ This is beautifully penned Poem but filled with such PATHOS. Several people in my extended Family ~ and Friends ~ have suffered such loss and it is a pain and a loss they carry with them the whole of their lives ! Today the Parents are encourged to have a service and a burial to give the stillborn baby dignity. Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN XX
August 2nd, 2017 14:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHANNON ~ This is beautifully penned Poem but filled with such PATHOS. Several people in my extended Family ~ and Friends ~ have suffered such loss and it is a pain and a loss they carry with them the whole of their lives ! Today the Parents are encourged to have a service and a burial to give the stillborn baby dignity. Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN XX
August 2nd, 2017 14:03
My Small Silent Child
malubotelho said:
I could feel the desperation of a mother hopping for her baby to participate with her. Beautiful writing.
August 2nd, 2017 14:01
malubotelho said:
I could feel the desperation of a mother hopping for her baby to participate with her. Beautiful writing.
August 2nd, 2017 14:01
My Small Silent Child
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, you are an incredible poet. Your writing is exquisite and this poem is so full of love, tenderness, and yes, even hope in a time of hopelessness and sadness.
August 2nd, 2017 13:36
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, you are an incredible poet. Your writing is exquisite and this poem is so full of love, tenderness, and yes, even hope in a time of hopelessness and sadness.
August 2nd, 2017 13:36
My Small Silent Child
Alf W said:
A very sad poem indeed Shannon, but one which fills the heart with emotion and the mind with the beautiful thoughts you expressed. Even though, as you say, it was not your experience, you showed, in your words, what was in your heart. Thank you.
August 2nd, 2017 12:54
Alf W said:
A very sad poem indeed Shannon, but one which fills the heart with emotion and the mind with the beautiful thoughts you expressed. Even though, as you say, it was not your experience, you showed, in your words, what was in your heart. Thank you.
August 2nd, 2017 12:54
My Small Silent Child
Simple-Man87 said:
I have to agree. Powerful. Heart breaking, thought provoking, all around emotional. I think about my babies everyday, cry most days when I don\'t see them. You\'re very lovely and your words express the love you possess.
August 2nd, 2017 12:17
Simple-Man87 said:
I have to agree. Powerful. Heart breaking, thought provoking, all around emotional. I think about my babies everyday, cry most days when I don\'t see them. You\'re very lovely and your words express the love you possess.
August 2nd, 2017 12:17
Broken Deeper
burning-embers said:
Endings create opportunities for new beginnings. Always be positive about your future. Treat the past as your seat of learning. Nice writing.
July 27th, 2017 06:15
burning-embers said:
Endings create opportunities for new beginnings. Always be positive about your future. Treat the past as your seat of learning. Nice writing.
July 27th, 2017 06:15
Broken Deeper
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write. You must move forward.
July 27th, 2017 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write. You must move forward.
July 27th, 2017 02:38
Broken Deeper
kevin browne said:
you learn from many things in life which maybe the right thing for you. when you wrote \'stinging like a ray\' I thought to myself now that\'s a powerful statement because sting rays can be deadly so you know now not to go near a stingray. you must learn by your mistakes and if being in pain caused by your heart then you need to move away from it. I would hate to see you suffer anymore. that\'s why I said what I said. good luck and I love the way you write by the way. it\'s great.
July 26th, 2017 18:53
kevin browne said:
you learn from many things in life which maybe the right thing for you. when you wrote \'stinging like a ray\' I thought to myself now that\'s a powerful statement because sting rays can be deadly so you know now not to go near a stingray. you must learn by your mistakes and if being in pain caused by your heart then you need to move away from it. I would hate to see you suffer anymore. that\'s why I said what I said. good luck and I love the way you write by the way. it\'s great.
July 26th, 2017 18:53
Broken Deeper
malubotelho said:
Beautiful expression of love and pain. Great writing.
July 26th, 2017 15:33
malubotelho said:
Beautiful expression of love and pain. Great writing.
July 26th, 2017 15:33
Broken Deeper
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, these boots are made for walking! Great poem with a strong message. Replace \'Maybe\' with \'I will\'.
July 26th, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
Shannon, these boots are made for walking! Great poem with a strong message. Replace \'Maybe\' with \'I will\'.
July 26th, 2017 11:27
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