Comments received on poems by onepauly
desperate
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Paul, it vividly conveys the hard times we sometimes have to go through before finding better pastures. And I am more than glad you made it!
June 30th, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Paul, it vividly conveys the hard times we sometimes have to go through before finding better pastures. And I am more than glad you made it!
June 30th, 2017 12:00
desperate
Poetic Dan said:
I only wish I knew the poetry that was from my younger days, to see all the pain I never thought I\'d make it through.
Thank you for sharing yours and not giving up so we could all reflect on darker times knowing they don\'t last, then hopefully is transcend to others that struggle.
June 30th, 2017 06:38
Poetic Dan said:
I only wish I knew the poetry that was from my younger days, to see all the pain I never thought I\'d make it through.
Thank you for sharing yours and not giving up so we could all reflect on darker times knowing they don\'t last, then hopefully is transcend to others that struggle.
June 30th, 2017 06:38
desperate
Goldfinch60 said:
Survive you did and with poetry like this I am glad you did. Good write.
June 30th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Survive you did and with poetry like this I am glad you did. Good write.
June 30th, 2017 00:57
springtime
kevin browne said:
its springing it back to me now. great write my chum.
June 29th, 2017 20:49
kevin browne said:
its springing it back to me now. great write my chum.
June 29th, 2017 20:49
springtime
kevin browne said:
a robin redbreast hopping about, great line but they are popping about all year round where I live. lovley poem onepauly.
June 29th, 2017 20:44
kevin browne said:
a robin redbreast hopping about, great line but they are popping about all year round where I live. lovley poem onepauly.
June 29th, 2017 20:44
springtime
malubotelho said:
Cute this one. I love spring because I love to garden. Here in Florida is hot now, and rainy. Everything is green and beautiful. I\'m busy pulling weeds. Thanks for sharing your spring feeling.
June 29th, 2017 19:38
malubotelho said:
Cute this one. I love spring because I love to garden. Here in Florida is hot now, and rainy. Everything is green and beautiful. I\'m busy pulling weeds. Thanks for sharing your spring feeling.
June 29th, 2017 19:38
springtime
FredPeyer said:
Paul, thanks for the memories! I love spring and remember it in Switzerland and Montreal. But for the last 30 years I have been living in a place where it is more or less the same all year long. It does have its advantages, at least I don\'t freeze my butt off, but I do miss the seasons sometimes.
June 29th, 2017 19:14
FredPeyer said:
Paul, thanks for the memories! I love spring and remember it in Switzerland and Montreal. But for the last 30 years I have been living in a place where it is more or less the same all year long. It does have its advantages, at least I don\'t freeze my butt off, but I do miss the seasons sometimes.
June 29th, 2017 19:14
teaser
kevin browne said:
and what a beautiful little, loving and full of inspiration to \'enhance it for the even greater good\' poem. that\'s a great piece you have written right there, onepauly.
June 28th, 2017 23:13
kevin browne said:
and what a beautiful little, loving and full of inspiration to \'enhance it for the even greater good\' poem. that\'s a great piece you have written right there, onepauly.
June 28th, 2017 23:13
teaser
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Good choice in using \"affect\" over \"effect\" (affect arouse) big difference but ohhhhh, how they sound just the same....great job. I like where this poem places you on the truth continuum.
June 28th, 2017 22:19
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Good choice in using \"affect\" over \"effect\" (affect arouse) big difference but ohhhhh, how they sound just the same....great job. I like where this poem places you on the truth continuum.
June 28th, 2017 22:19
teaser
malubotelho said:
It make sense to me. When one uncover love, it can be thrilling to think that love was there from the beginning but you did not see it. Now it is greater because you brought it to the light so you see it better.
June 28th, 2017 19:55
malubotelho said:
It make sense to me. When one uncover love, it can be thrilling to think that love was there from the beginning but you did not see it. Now it is greater because you brought it to the light so you see it better.
June 28th, 2017 19:55
teaser
FredPeyer said:
You are right it is puzzling, but that is a good thing! I guess if you like something or somebody and think about why you love it, him, her, you may find that there is an even greater underlying love you were not aware of before.
Does that make sense?
June 28th, 2017 19:28
FredPeyer said:
You are right it is puzzling, but that is a good thing! I guess if you like something or somebody and think about why you love it, him, her, you may find that there is an even greater underlying love you were not aware of before.
Does that make sense?
June 28th, 2017 19:28
serenity
Augustus said:
I can feel that gnawing at you waiting to be written. Enjoyed
June 28th, 2017 01:43
Augustus said:
I can feel that gnawing at you waiting to be written. Enjoyed
June 28th, 2017 01:43
serenity
malubotelho said:
Somehow I\'m lazy to deep comments today. I love you still.
June 27th, 2017 20:45
malubotelho said:
Somehow I\'m lazy to deep comments today. I love you still.
June 27th, 2017 20:45
serenity
FredPeyer said:
Sounds close to yoga and meditation. Going inside oneself to find peace and meaning.
June 27th, 2017 18:59
FredPeyer said:
Sounds close to yoga and meditation. Going inside oneself to find peace and meaning.
June 27th, 2017 18:59
distance
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I love reading out of this a longing for the infinite... I share this with you my friend.
June 26th, 2017 22:22
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I love reading out of this a longing for the infinite... I share this with you my friend.
June 26th, 2017 22:22
distance
FredPeyer said:
Well said, we all need to go to this special place once in a while!
June 26th, 2017 18:33
FredPeyer said:
Well said, we all need to go to this special place once in a while!
June 26th, 2017 18:33
treasure
malubotelho said:
I truly believe you are on the right direction. You are already on the path and sooner or later you will get there. We shall meet sometime, somewhere.
June 25th, 2017 20:24
malubotelho said:
I truly believe you are on the right direction. You are already on the path and sooner or later you will get there. We shall meet sometime, somewhere.
June 25th, 2017 20:24
treasure
FredPeyer said:
Another well written poem with a good message. We are all rich in many different ways, we only have to take the time to see it.
June 25th, 2017 19:03
FredPeyer said:
Another well written poem with a good message. We are all rich in many different ways, we only have to take the time to see it.
June 25th, 2017 19:03
emotional therapy
FredPeyer said:
Paul, poets are optimists. To be in a place like you describe would be heaven, unfortunately my body is kinda bound to reality. Nice poem!
June 23rd, 2017 20:49
FredPeyer said:
Paul, poets are optimists. To be in a place like you describe would be heaven, unfortunately my body is kinda bound to reality. Nice poem!
June 23rd, 2017 20:49
emotional therapy
malubotelho said:
What is it? The promised land? Less greed and more time free. I like this. Get me in. Nice rhyme. Well done.
June 23rd, 2017 19:14
malubotelho said:
What is it? The promised land? Less greed and more time free. I like this. Get me in. Nice rhyme. Well done.
June 23rd, 2017 19:14
within throughout
Poetic Dan said:
Singing to every part of me
Energies expanding
My new reality
Breathing in your words
Exhaling my own
Consciousness Awakening
To meet you on this road
Ha, thanks for that ;)
June 23rd, 2017 00:06
Poetic Dan said:
Singing to every part of me
Energies expanding
My new reality
Breathing in your words
Exhaling my own
Consciousness Awakening
To meet you on this road
Ha, thanks for that ;)
June 23rd, 2017 00:06
within throughout
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem reminds me of tai chi, or eastern meditation. Thank you.
June 22nd, 2017 18:41
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem reminds me of tai chi, or eastern meditation. Thank you.
June 22nd, 2017 18:41
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