Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Is love selfish?
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful declaration of love. We love and we would like to be loved in return. If that is selfishness, so be it. Love your poem as usual Malu!
July 7th, 2017 20:42
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful declaration of love. We love and we would like to be loved in return. If that is selfishness, so be it. Love your poem as usual Malu!
July 7th, 2017 20:42
Is love selfish?
burning-embers said:
\"The secret that you carry in your heart\" hmmm - I\'d shout YOU from the rooftops were you mine! To air your desires like you state is surely and invitation for someone to respond to with equal love. What\'s selfish about an invitation like that? Wow, what a generous offer!
July 7th, 2017 20:39
burning-embers said:
\"The secret that you carry in your heart\" hmmm - I\'d shout YOU from the rooftops were you mine! To air your desires like you state is surely and invitation for someone to respond to with equal love. What\'s selfish about an invitation like that? Wow, what a generous offer!
July 7th, 2017 20:39
Not a lonely bird
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a very moving poem. It read just like a song, with the repeated \"when the night comes,\" and where it was repeated was unexpected to me and added so much more melody to this read. There was a poem, from the show Taxi, the episode called, Elain\'s Secret Admirer, spoke of a woman \"dancing to sonnets,\" and I couldn\'t imagine someone dancing to something read; but this poem of yours gives me the imagery. Tyfs!
July 6th, 2017 22:00
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a very moving poem. It read just like a song, with the repeated \"when the night comes,\" and where it was repeated was unexpected to me and added so much more melody to this read. There was a poem, from the show Taxi, the episode called, Elain\'s Secret Admirer, spoke of a woman \"dancing to sonnets,\" and I couldn\'t imagine someone dancing to something read; but this poem of yours gives me the imagery. Tyfs!
July 6th, 2017 22:00
Not a lonely bird
ShannonXx said:
Love the style this was written in. A great message, that is easy to relate to
July 6th, 2017 11:33
ShannonXx said:
Love the style this was written in. A great message, that is easy to relate to
July 6th, 2017 11:33
Not a lonely bird
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your nights never be lonely.
July 6th, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your nights never be lonely.
July 6th, 2017 01:39
Not a lonely bird
burning-embers said:
Oh this is gorgeous! You seduce me with your first four lines. So much so i re-read them, so many times (lovely).
Waking me then with \'When the day comes\', yes you really do convey the change and then you break my heart with that bird.
Beautifully moving. You clever thing you. +fav\'s
July 5th, 2017 20:56
burning-embers said:
Oh this is gorgeous! You seduce me with your first four lines. So much so i re-read them, so many times (lovely).
Waking me then with \'When the day comes\', yes you really do convey the change and then you break my heart with that bird.
Beautifully moving. You clever thing you. +fav\'s
July 5th, 2017 20:56
Not a lonely bird
kevin browne said:
who want\'s to be lonely? you captured that one very well. an addictive poem x
July 5th, 2017 20:55
kevin browne said:
who want\'s to be lonely? you captured that one very well. an addictive poem x
July 5th, 2017 20:55
Not a lonely bird
FredPeyer said:
What was first, the picture or the poem? Your beautiful poem has longing written all over it. Very artfully done.
July 5th, 2017 20:35
FredPeyer said:
What was first, the picture or the poem? Your beautiful poem has longing written all over it. Very artfully done.
July 5th, 2017 20:35
Scars
onepauly said:
yes, meditation is able to help soften the scars we take with us in our journey through life.
July 4th, 2017 01:48
onepauly said:
yes, meditation is able to help soften the scars we take with us in our journey through life.
July 4th, 2017 01:48
Scars
Heather T said:
Beautiful reflection from the heart of a beautiful woman. There is an undercurrent of peace throughout, even with the tough stuff.
July 3rd, 2017 23:56
Heather T said:
Beautiful reflection from the heart of a beautiful woman. There is an undercurrent of peace throughout, even with the tough stuff.
July 3rd, 2017 23:56
Scars
malubotelho said:
Awe! Thanks. I feel like going back to write right now. I have to go jogging though. I appreciate your kind comment.
July 3rd, 2017 17:32
malubotelho said:
Awe! Thanks. I feel like going back to write right now. I have to go jogging though. I appreciate your kind comment.
July 3rd, 2017 17:32
Scars
FredPeyer said:
First of all, thanks for the picture showing the pink hibiscus, Hawaii\'s State flower (it\'s actually the bright yellow one, but a hibiscus is a hibiscus).
Comparing feelings to color is so true. (Yesterday I saw red, today I am feeling blue). I just love your writing. It gets under my skin. Once I start reading I cannot stop.
July 3rd, 2017 17:29
FredPeyer said:
First of all, thanks for the picture showing the pink hibiscus, Hawaii\'s State flower (it\'s actually the bright yellow one, but a hibiscus is a hibiscus).
Comparing feelings to color is so true. (Yesterday I saw red, today I am feeling blue). I just love your writing. It gets under my skin. Once I start reading I cannot stop.
July 3rd, 2017 17:29
Scars
burning-embers said:
I find this tremendously inspiring. I\'ve been sat here i don\'t know how long trying to make some concise comment but i cant because i\'ve got too much to say on the subject. Thank you for inspiring me to write tomorrows poem.
July 3rd, 2017 16:07
burning-embers said:
I find this tremendously inspiring. I\'ve been sat here i don\'t know how long trying to make some concise comment but i cant because i\'ve got too much to say on the subject. Thank you for inspiring me to write tomorrows poem.
July 3rd, 2017 16:07
Scars
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful!
You truly deserve to find want it is that you write, peace for the soul.
July 3rd, 2017 15:50
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful!
You truly deserve to find want it is that you write, peace for the soul.
July 3rd, 2017 15:50
Scars
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful expressions, Malubotelho! \"Love is a soft touch from kind hands\" indeed! Thank you for sharing this poem from the heart.
July 3rd, 2017 15:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful expressions, Malubotelho! \"Love is a soft touch from kind hands\" indeed! Thank you for sharing this poem from the heart.
July 3rd, 2017 15:24
Scars
malubotelho said:
Oh yes. I like that too. Why is it that when we write we don\'t get a grip of things. This is why the comments enriches our writes. Makes us see better. Thank you.
July 3rd, 2017 14:39
malubotelho said:
Oh yes. I like that too. Why is it that when we write we don\'t get a grip of things. This is why the comments enriches our writes. Makes us see better. Thank you.
July 3rd, 2017 14:39
Scars
malubotelho said:
Thanks cat. Those lines forms a poem on itself. Great comment. Very appreciated.
July 3rd, 2017 13:52
malubotelho said:
Thanks cat. Those lines forms a poem on itself. Great comment. Very appreciated.
July 3rd, 2017 13:52
Scars
kevin browne said:
you\'re such a smooth and charasmatic writer that once I start I can\'t stop. pretty much admire every line you wrote. I love this free verse type of style also. a cool write x
July 3rd, 2017 13:45
kevin browne said:
you\'re such a smooth and charasmatic writer that once I start I can\'t stop. pretty much admire every line you wrote. I love this free verse type of style also. a cool write x
July 3rd, 2017 13:45
For the sake of ourselves
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true for many of us.
July 3rd, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true for many of us.
July 3rd, 2017 01:08
For the sake of ourselves
malubotelho said:
Yes, thank you. This is a great word to define this. Revelation.
July 2nd, 2017 23:18
malubotelho said:
Yes, thank you. This is a great word to define this. Revelation.
July 2nd, 2017 23:18
For the sake of ourselves
onepauly said:
revelation, most of the time that\'s what poets feel.
July 2nd, 2017 19:16
onepauly said:
revelation, most of the time that\'s what poets feel.
July 2nd, 2017 19:16
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