Comments received on poems by malubotelho
For the sake of ourselves
Augustus said:
I am completely with you on this theme. Great job.
July 2nd, 2017 16:50
Augustus said:
I am completely with you on this theme. Great job.
July 2nd, 2017 16:50
For the sake of ourselves
FredPeyer said:
Malu, this is the most poetic, most eloquent, most beautiful, and most truthful description of what makes a writer I ever read. Great!
July 2nd, 2017 14:19
FredPeyer said:
Malu, this is the most poetic, most eloquent, most beautiful, and most truthful description of what makes a writer I ever read. Great!
July 2nd, 2017 14:19
For the sake of ourselves
burning-embers said:
Poetry is my confession, my revelation, my despair - my tears and laughter, my release, my repair - my joy and my sorrow, my trouble and strife - it pours from my fingers its the ink of my life.
July 2nd, 2017 11:14
burning-embers said:
Poetry is my confession, my revelation, my despair - my tears and laughter, my release, my repair - my joy and my sorrow, my trouble and strife - it pours from my fingers its the ink of my life.
July 2nd, 2017 11:14
For the sake of ourselves
Hopey_xx said:
And that is why we write! I like this very much :)
July 2nd, 2017 10:54
Hopey_xx said:
And that is why we write! I like this very much :)
July 2nd, 2017 10:54
Poem for women
malubotelho said:
Thanks Jane. I\'m a femenine girl. I was born the last child of a family of five girls. Plus my mother. I was dressed like a doll and had the love and care of all those women. I\'m a soft person. Life was not easy when I left my family but did not harden me too much. Gave experience.
July 2nd, 2017 08:58
malubotelho said:
Thanks Jane. I\'m a femenine girl. I was born the last child of a family of five girls. Plus my mother. I was dressed like a doll and had the love and care of all those women. I\'m a soft person. Life was not easy when I left my family but did not harden me too much. Gave experience.
July 2nd, 2017 08:58
Portrait
malubotelho said:
Thank you. That was the thought. A good description brings you to reality. I could paint her just by reading my writes.
July 2nd, 2017 08:54
malubotelho said:
Thank you. That was the thought. A good description brings you to reality. I could paint her just by reading my writes.
July 2nd, 2017 08:54
Curved thoughts
malubotelho said:
Now that you point to it I had to read my poem again to refresh my memories. It means that to create one need to begin with something at some point. I begin pulling a string from a dead point. It is almost pulling something from a gap, or an invisible hole. Because I work making clothes I have to draw patterns and always begin with a point. In the beginning is a dead point, till I pull a line from that point and it is the process of creation of a piece. An apparel.
July 2nd, 2017 08:50
malubotelho said:
Now that you point to it I had to read my poem again to refresh my memories. It means that to create one need to begin with something at some point. I begin pulling a string from a dead point. It is almost pulling something from a gap, or an invisible hole. Because I work making clothes I have to draw patterns and always begin with a point. In the beginning is a dead point, till I pull a line from that point and it is the process of creation of a piece. An apparel.
July 2nd, 2017 08:50
The magic of poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, poetry is magical and can release us from our woes.
July 2nd, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, poetry is magical and can release us from our woes.
July 2nd, 2017 01:25
The magic of poetry
onepauly said:
yes poetry is a wonderful magic. I remember when I was starting to write poetry. I would not read others
poems. I think you know why. but there was one time I walked to the library. and standing in the isle I read almost a whole book of poems. it was very delightful. I wrote a poem about that library visit. i\'ll post it in time. now I want to write about the gentle winds flowing through the trees in the summertime. they whisper magic. and when I pass from this world. I would like to have my ashes spilled in a forest of trees. so I can be part of it.
and death shall have no dominion
paul
July 1st, 2017 22:22
onepauly said:
yes poetry is a wonderful magic. I remember when I was starting to write poetry. I would not read others
poems. I think you know why. but there was one time I walked to the library. and standing in the isle I read almost a whole book of poems. it was very delightful. I wrote a poem about that library visit. i\'ll post it in time. now I want to write about the gentle winds flowing through the trees in the summertime. they whisper magic. and when I pass from this world. I would like to have my ashes spilled in a forest of trees. so I can be part of it.
and death shall have no dominion
paul
July 1st, 2017 22:22
The magic of poetry
Poetic Dan said:
Your words danced around in my head
Like magic I could feel them instead
July 1st, 2017 17:38
Poetic Dan said:
Your words danced around in my head
Like magic I could feel them instead
July 1st, 2017 17:38
The magic of poetry
P.H.Rose said:
A very lovely work malu
Really enjoyed it...
\"beauty beset
This borrowed time\"
July 1st, 2017 13:56
P.H.Rose said:
A very lovely work malu
Really enjoyed it...
\"beauty beset
This borrowed time\"
July 1st, 2017 13:56
The magic of poetry
FredPeyer said:
Malu, you are weaving magic here with your poem. Beautifully said!
July 1st, 2017 13:24
FredPeyer said:
Malu, you are weaving magic here with your poem. Beautifully said!
July 1st, 2017 13:24
Portrait
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing! You paint such a powerful picture with your words, I can actually see her standing there. And you are very lucky, not every son brings home a gem.
June 30th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing! You paint such a powerful picture with your words, I can actually see her standing there. And you are very lucky, not every son brings home a gem.
June 30th, 2017 11:55
Curved thoughts
FredPeyer said:
How to explain creation? I don\'t think there is any logical explanation, your curved thoughts are as good as it gets.
June 29th, 2017 22:02
FredPeyer said:
How to explain creation? I don\'t think there is any logical explanation, your curved thoughts are as good as it gets.
June 29th, 2017 22:02
Portrait
onepauly said:
may the blessings between you and her follow both of you to the future
June 28th, 2017 19:43
onepauly said:
may the blessings between you and her follow both of you to the future
June 28th, 2017 19:43
Portrait
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MALU ~ For a lovely ~ love poem ~ not the usual potential Mother in Law ~ Daughter in Law relationship ~ You are lovely. You and your Sons & their Partners are very very Blessed ~ Love to you all ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my DEJA VU Poem ~ Thanks B
June 28th, 2017 18:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MALU ~ For a lovely ~ love poem ~ not the usual potential Mother in Law ~ Daughter in Law relationship ~ You are lovely. You and your Sons & their Partners are very very Blessed ~ Love to you all ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my DEJA VU Poem ~ Thanks B
June 28th, 2017 18:12
Portrait
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Beautiful limn! I loved the feeling you conveyed, you could feel the music.
June 28th, 2017 15:48
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Beautiful limn! I loved the feeling you conveyed, you could feel the music.
June 28th, 2017 15:48
Portrait
Michael Edwards said:
She is obviously very special and she has obviously found someone very special.
June 28th, 2017 15:19
Michael Edwards said:
She is obviously very special and she has obviously found someone very special.
June 28th, 2017 15:19
Portrait
malubotelho said:
Oh! Thank you so much. I the way you put it into your comments. Lovely
June 28th, 2017 14:43
malubotelho said:
Oh! Thank you so much. I the way you put it into your comments. Lovely
June 28th, 2017 14:43
Portrait
kevin browne said:
loving the imagery of your togetherness in this new love you have found and you have captured it magically. great write malubotelho x
June 28th, 2017 14:27
kevin browne said:
loving the imagery of your togetherness in this new love you have found and you have captured it magically. great write malubotelho x
June 28th, 2017 14:27
Portrait
malubotelho said:
Thank you 😊
She is my sons girl friend. A sweet darling that I met not long ago.
June 28th, 2017 13:50
malubotelho said:
Thank you 😊
She is my sons girl friend. A sweet darling that I met not long ago.
June 28th, 2017 13:50
I love you
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I hope it\'s reciprocal M. I think I\'ve only known One Lover like that throughout my entire lifetime.
June 27th, 2017 22:49
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I hope it\'s reciprocal M. I think I\'ve only known One Lover like that throughout my entire lifetime.
June 27th, 2017 22:49
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