Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Sleazy lover
Domi said:
the take on the word sleaze has a whole new meaning to me now! This is wonderfully written!!
July 15th, 2017 15:57
Domi said:
the take on the word sleaze has a whole new meaning to me now! This is wonderfully written!!
July 15th, 2017 15:57
Sleazy lover
malubotelho said:
I\'m happy you\'ve got inspired by my simple words. Yes, hey, it is vacantion time. We are so luck we have the beach close by. When I was in Brazil we had to travel 1000 km to find the closest beach from where we lived. Now I always say that no one can complain because we live in paradise. Thanks for your comments
July 15th, 2017 15:11
malubotelho said:
I\'m happy you\'ve got inspired by my simple words. Yes, hey, it is vacantion time. We are so luck we have the beach close by. When I was in Brazil we had to travel 1000 km to find the closest beach from where we lived. Now I always say that no one can complain because we live in paradise. Thanks for your comments
July 15th, 2017 15:11
Sleazy lover
FredPeyer said:
I like it Malu, reminds me of the days when we lie on the beach in the warm sand, with the heat of the sun enveloping us, the gentle rhythmic sound of the waves transporting us into some other dimension.
See what you did with your five lines? Now I wanna drop everything and drive that half hour to the north shore!
July 15th, 2017 12:09
FredPeyer said:
I like it Malu, reminds me of the days when we lie on the beach in the warm sand, with the heat of the sun enveloping us, the gentle rhythmic sound of the waves transporting us into some other dimension.
See what you did with your five lines? Now I wanna drop everything and drive that half hour to the north shore!
July 15th, 2017 12:09
Sleazy lover
Heather T said:
I enjoyed this so much, and wish I could read the Portuguese!
July 15th, 2017 11:45
Heather T said:
I enjoyed this so much, and wish I could read the Portuguese!
July 15th, 2017 11:45
Sleazy lover
burning-embers said:
100% sleaze i couldn\'t go for. But sleaze within a knowing tender loving partnership for zest ... oh yes, yes pleazzzze a bit of sleaze.
July 15th, 2017 10:04
burning-embers said:
100% sleaze i couldn\'t go for. But sleaze within a knowing tender loving partnership for zest ... oh yes, yes pleazzzze a bit of sleaze.
July 15th, 2017 10:04
Sleazy lover
Michael Edwards said:
Quite like the idea of a sleazy lover myself - could be something different - also like your poem m
July 15th, 2017 09:50
Michael Edwards said:
Quite like the idea of a sleazy lover myself - could be something different - also like your poem m
July 15th, 2017 09:50
Epiphany
Heather T said:
Profound, Malu! So much between the lines, and I know we all feel that.
July 14th, 2017 22:14
Heather T said:
Profound, Malu! So much between the lines, and I know we all feel that.
July 14th, 2017 22:14
Epiphany
malubotelho said:
Thank you Brian. I\'m a little late on feedbacks today. Did not even read the poems from all my friends. But the night is long and I will get there. Need some refreshment.
July 14th, 2017 18:04
malubotelho said:
Thank you Brian. I\'m a little late on feedbacks today. Did not even read the poems from all my friends. But the night is long and I will get there. Need some refreshment.
July 14th, 2017 18:04
Epiphany
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent thought MALU ~ thanks for sharing.! My poetic side vibrates too ~ in harmony with all our lovely Members. Sharing and commenting on Poetry keeps me sane. Thanks for you feedback it maintains our Harmony ! Hugs BRIANi
July 14th, 2017 16:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent thought MALU ~ thanks for sharing.! My poetic side vibrates too ~ in harmony with all our lovely Members. Sharing and commenting on Poetry keeps me sane. Thanks for you feedback it maintains our Harmony ! Hugs BRIANi
July 14th, 2017 16:23
Epiphany
FredPeyer said:
Malu, you said it all with so few words. We are all vibrating:
According to string theory, absolutely everything in the universe—all of the particles that make up matter and forces—is comprised of tiny vibrating fundamental strings.
On the everyday side these tiny vibrations let you live, while on the poetic side they let you create!
You put the universe into two lines!
July 14th, 2017 12:50
FredPeyer said:
Malu, you said it all with so few words. We are all vibrating:
According to string theory, absolutely everything in the universe—all of the particles that make up matter and forces—is comprised of tiny vibrating fundamental strings.
On the everyday side these tiny vibrations let you live, while on the poetic side they let you create!
You put the universe into two lines!
July 14th, 2017 12:50
Epiphany
malubotelho said:
Thank you. It also refers to the MPS site. It vibrates with thoughts and energy of all kinds.
July 14th, 2017 10:58
malubotelho said:
Thank you. It also refers to the MPS site. It vibrates with thoughts and energy of all kinds.
July 14th, 2017 10:58
Epiphany
Michael Edwards said:
Someone else posting a couplet - you\'ve made my day especially since this little gem is special - more please.
July 14th, 2017 10:52
Michael Edwards said:
Someone else posting a couplet - you\'ve made my day especially since this little gem is special - more please.
July 14th, 2017 10:52
Epiphany
Louis Gibbs said:
A very good couplet, \'M\'! I appreciate it, thanks for sharing. There definitely is a difference between just living, and vibrating.
July 14th, 2017 08:46
Louis Gibbs said:
A very good couplet, \'M\'! I appreciate it, thanks for sharing. There definitely is a difference between just living, and vibrating.
July 14th, 2017 08:46
As sweet as ever
ShannonXx said:
A beautiful write, love the feel of this work of art!
July 14th, 2017 07:28
ShannonXx said:
A beautiful write, love the feel of this work of art!
July 14th, 2017 07:28
A cry for opinion
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Strong write. The world is crazier than ever! I don\'t watch the news anymore because it has a negative impact on me, just like on others. But your poem, your poem was very well penned! :)
July 13th, 2017 07:34
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Strong write. The world is crazier than ever! I don\'t watch the news anymore because it has a negative impact on me, just like on others. But your poem, your poem was very well penned! :)
July 13th, 2017 07:34
As sweet as ever
Heather T said:
I love being happily lost in your reverie, Malu.
July 12th, 2017 19:32
Heather T said:
I love being happily lost in your reverie, Malu.
July 12th, 2017 19:32
As sweet as ever
Augustus said:
I am hoping this is real but your notes in response seem otherwise. Nonetheless it is lovely. Would love to be the receiver of this poem.
July 12th, 2017 16:26
Augustus said:
I am hoping this is real but your notes in response seem otherwise. Nonetheless it is lovely. Would love to be the receiver of this poem.
July 12th, 2017 16:26
As sweet as ever
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Wow, this was beautiful. It had that dreamlike feeling throughout it and the ending made me realize the reason why. Beautiful poem! Tyfs!
July 12th, 2017 16:06
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Wow, this was beautiful. It had that dreamlike feeling throughout it and the ending made me realize the reason why. Beautiful poem! Tyfs!
July 12th, 2017 16:06
A kiss
malubotelho said:
Yes Fred. Is\'ant this beautiful? Who ever invented it deserves an award.
And the expectation for the first kiss when you meet someone new is thrilling. Thanks for coming back and read.
July 12th, 2017 13:51
malubotelho said:
Yes Fred. Is\'ant this beautiful? Who ever invented it deserves an award.
And the expectation for the first kiss when you meet someone new is thrilling. Thanks for coming back and read.
July 12th, 2017 13:51
As sweet as ever
malubotelho said:
Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination one can create scenarios, emotions, smells and so on, for the readers. Thank you so much.
July 12th, 2017 13:42
malubotelho said:
Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination one can create scenarios, emotions, smells and so on, for the readers. Thank you so much.
July 12th, 2017 13:42
A kiss
FredPeyer said:
Malu I really like the opening. A kiss can be a journey, both in the way you so aptly describe it and in a physical way, where that first kiss leads to love and maybe marriage.
July 12th, 2017 12:48
FredPeyer said:
Malu I really like the opening. A kiss can be a journey, both in the way you so aptly describe it and in a physical way, where that first kiss leads to love and maybe marriage.
July 12th, 2017 12:48
As sweet as ever
FredPeyer said:
Malu, very lovely \"dreamlike\" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I agree with you. Sometimes it is just us in the poem, sometimes part of it is us and part of it is imagination, and sometimes it is all imagination. But that is the beauty of writing.
Well done, enjoyed it!
July 12th, 2017 12:33
FredPeyer said:
Malu, very lovely \"dreamlike\" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I agree with you. Sometimes it is just us in the poem, sometimes part of it is us and part of it is imagination, and sometimes it is all imagination. But that is the beauty of writing.
Well done, enjoyed it!
July 12th, 2017 12:33
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