Comments received on poems by malubotelho
As sweet as ever
ShannonXx said:
A beautiful write, love the feel of this work of art!
July 14th, 2017 07:28
ShannonXx said:
A beautiful write, love the feel of this work of art!
July 14th, 2017 07:28
A cry for opinion
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Strong write. The world is crazier than ever! I don\'t watch the news anymore because it has a negative impact on me, just like on others. But your poem, your poem was very well penned! :)
July 13th, 2017 07:34
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Strong write. The world is crazier than ever! I don\'t watch the news anymore because it has a negative impact on me, just like on others. But your poem, your poem was very well penned! :)
July 13th, 2017 07:34
As sweet as ever
Heather T said:
I love being happily lost in your reverie, Malu.
July 12th, 2017 19:32
Heather T said:
I love being happily lost in your reverie, Malu.
July 12th, 2017 19:32
As sweet as ever
Augustus said:
I am hoping this is real but your notes in response seem otherwise. Nonetheless it is lovely. Would love to be the receiver of this poem.
July 12th, 2017 16:26
Augustus said:
I am hoping this is real but your notes in response seem otherwise. Nonetheless it is lovely. Would love to be the receiver of this poem.
July 12th, 2017 16:26
As sweet as ever
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Wow, this was beautiful. It had that dreamlike feeling throughout it and the ending made me realize the reason why. Beautiful poem! Tyfs!
July 12th, 2017 16:06
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Wow, this was beautiful. It had that dreamlike feeling throughout it and the ending made me realize the reason why. Beautiful poem! Tyfs!
July 12th, 2017 16:06
A kiss
malubotelho said:
Yes Fred. Is\'ant this beautiful? Who ever invented it deserves an award.
And the expectation for the first kiss when you meet someone new is thrilling. Thanks for coming back and read.
July 12th, 2017 13:51
malubotelho said:
Yes Fred. Is\'ant this beautiful? Who ever invented it deserves an award.
And the expectation for the first kiss when you meet someone new is thrilling. Thanks for coming back and read.
July 12th, 2017 13:51
As sweet as ever
malubotelho said:
Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination one can create scenarios, emotions, smells and so on, for the readers. Thank you so much.
July 12th, 2017 13:42
malubotelho said:
Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination one can create scenarios, emotions, smells and so on, for the readers. Thank you so much.
July 12th, 2017 13:42
A kiss
FredPeyer said:
Malu I really like the opening. A kiss can be a journey, both in the way you so aptly describe it and in a physical way, where that first kiss leads to love and maybe marriage.
July 12th, 2017 12:48
FredPeyer said:
Malu I really like the opening. A kiss can be a journey, both in the way you so aptly describe it and in a physical way, where that first kiss leads to love and maybe marriage.
July 12th, 2017 12:48
As sweet as ever
FredPeyer said:
Malu, very lovely \"dreamlike\" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I agree with you. Sometimes it is just us in the poem, sometimes part of it is us and part of it is imagination, and sometimes it is all imagination. But that is the beauty of writing.
Well done, enjoyed it!
July 12th, 2017 12:33
FredPeyer said:
Malu, very lovely \"dreamlike\" poem. I read your answer to kevin and I agree with you. Sometimes it is just us in the poem, sometimes part of it is us and part of it is imagination, and sometimes it is all imagination. But that is the beauty of writing.
Well done, enjoyed it!
July 12th, 2017 12:33
As sweet as ever
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ for a perfect Love Poem ! I shared the dream and felt every nuance ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 12th, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ for a perfect Love Poem ! I shared the dream and felt every nuance ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 12th, 2017 09:59
As sweet as ever
malubotelho said:
Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
I\'m a lioness sometimes in motherhood protecting my cubs. My cubs are lions now and they want to protect me from the world now. Now they are the ones thinking I\'m an innocent, ingênuos person. As for the dream, it was a beautiful dream. Was an enlighned vision and feelings flying light and free on that sky. I\'ve felt so beautiful inside. I created on top to make it more interesting. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.
July 12th, 2017 09:54
malubotelho said:
Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
I\'m a lioness sometimes in motherhood protecting my cubs. My cubs are lions now and they want to protect me from the world now. Now they are the ones thinking I\'m an innocent, ingênuos person. As for the dream, it was a beautiful dream. Was an enlighned vision and feelings flying light and free on that sky. I\'ve felt so beautiful inside. I created on top to make it more interesting. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.
July 12th, 2017 09:54
As sweet as ever
burning-embers said:
He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress last week (or was it a lion) but this is really sweet isn\'t it. This man is a very lucky person.
July 12th, 2017 08:47
burning-embers said:
He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress last week (or was it a lion) but this is really sweet isn\'t it. This man is a very lucky person.
July 12th, 2017 08:47
As sweet as ever
kevin browne said:
you little smoothie. great poem for a great love whoever the person is x
July 12th, 2017 08:41
kevin browne said:
you little smoothie. great poem for a great love whoever the person is x
July 12th, 2017 08:41
They call me ego
onepauly said:
ego is something I cannot envision. I see the word but nothing registers. I don\'t know why I did not look for it in the dictionary. I\'ve got three electronic ones. I\'m a very good speller after all those books I\'ve read then and now. but when I\'m typing I have them handy. is the ego. well I just looked it up. it says excessive self opinion. I do want to know who I am. sometimes I lose this and I become afraid. I do know we cannot change the future of the stars. mans measurements just don\'t fit this universe. it needs a whole going over.
July 12th, 2017 01:41
onepauly said:
ego is something I cannot envision. I see the word but nothing registers. I don\'t know why I did not look for it in the dictionary. I\'ve got three electronic ones. I\'m a very good speller after all those books I\'ve read then and now. but when I\'m typing I have them handy. is the ego. well I just looked it up. it says excessive self opinion. I do want to know who I am. sometimes I lose this and I become afraid. I do know we cannot change the future of the stars. mans measurements just don\'t fit this universe. it needs a whole going over.
July 12th, 2017 01:41
They call me ego
malubotelho said:
Well, like our friend Pauly said before; the world is not prepared to know the true. We dont learn it at school and even when we are looking for it we can barely touch the subject in understanding. Even the most beautiful love poem shows trace of the ego. Sad it.
July 11th, 2017 18:22
malubotelho said:
Well, like our friend Pauly said before; the world is not prepared to know the true. We dont learn it at school and even when we are looking for it we can barely touch the subject in understanding. Even the most beautiful love poem shows trace of the ego. Sad it.
July 11th, 2017 18:22
They call me ego
burning-embers said:
\"Observing the opportunity to raid your thoughts\" how true and well phrased that is. Captured me with this and re-read several times now. \"I need to always bring you to a space where I can see you\" clever and oh so true. Lotta people out there could learn from this wisdom.
July 11th, 2017 17:44
burning-embers said:
\"Observing the opportunity to raid your thoughts\" how true and well phrased that is. Captured me with this and re-read several times now. \"I need to always bring you to a space where I can see you\" clever and oh so true. Lotta people out there could learn from this wisdom.
July 11th, 2017 17:44
They call me ego
Nicholas Browning said:
Ego is a very interesting concept. You have to feed it the right amount.
July 11th, 2017 16:37
Nicholas Browning said:
Ego is a very interesting concept. You have to feed it the right amount.
July 11th, 2017 16:37
They call me ego
malubotelho said:
We think we do and this is why it win us but we have a deeper source of true that is your true self that does not need the ego. The ego is the shadow of the true self. It is a phantom. A parasite. Very deep subject. If you only believe in physichology you can not understand it. It is deeper than that. Sorry my friend. This is all I can say for now.
July 11th, 2017 15:58
malubotelho said:
We think we do and this is why it win us but we have a deeper source of true that is your true self that does not need the ego. The ego is the shadow of the true self. It is a phantom. A parasite. Very deep subject. If you only believe in physichology you can not understand it. It is deeper than that. Sorry my friend. This is all I can say for now.
July 11th, 2017 15:58
They call me ego
FredPeyer said:
Malu I like the way you present both sides. But like it or not, where would we be without that little devil because there are times when we need it.
July 11th, 2017 15:50
FredPeyer said:
Malu I like the way you present both sides. But like it or not, where would we be without that little devil because there are times when we need it.
July 11th, 2017 15:50
A cry for opinion
malubotelho said:
Thanks my friend for your opinion. Later I will write something as an answer or my opinion about it.
July 11th, 2017 09:46
malubotelho said:
Thanks my friend for your opinion. Later I will write something as an answer or my opinion about it.
July 11th, 2017 09:46
A cry for opinion
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem shouts concern for this life and this body. Know that you, your soul, is eternal ... this life is but a brief, unpleasant chapter.
July 11th, 2017 08:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem shouts concern for this life and this body. Know that you, your soul, is eternal ... this life is but a brief, unpleasant chapter.
July 11th, 2017 08:41
A cry for opinion
P.H.Rose said:
In the U.K. This is
Called a.. Belter !!!!
Really very good malu
July 11th, 2017 07:14
P.H.Rose said:
In the U.K. This is
Called a.. Belter !!!!
Really very good malu
July 11th, 2017 07:14
A cry for opinion
kevin browne said:
my advice to you would be to throw all that negative stuff in the bin and get your head in to learning some fresh new ideologies. the world has endless positive and incredible things going on in it and all we do is moan about whats wrong. look in other directions and never allow the reflections of others peoples thoughts or actions shine on your image. a bad person will make good man look bad also. I don\'t mean to critisise you in a negative or bad vibe, I just think there is enough negativity already. a good and important write for the people who suffer from the effects of the content in your work.
July 11th, 2017 04:56
kevin browne said:
my advice to you would be to throw all that negative stuff in the bin and get your head in to learning some fresh new ideologies. the world has endless positive and incredible things going on in it and all we do is moan about whats wrong. look in other directions and never allow the reflections of others peoples thoughts or actions shine on your image. a bad person will make good man look bad also. I don\'t mean to critisise you in a negative or bad vibe, I just think there is enough negativity already. a good and important write for the people who suffer from the effects of the content in your work.
July 11th, 2017 04:56
A cry for opinion
Goldfinch60 said:
What you cannot believe in are the politicians as they are in it for what THEY can get out of it for themselves. They do not care about others.
Good write.
July 11th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
What you cannot believe in are the politicians as they are in it for what THEY can get out of it for themselves. They do not care about others.
Good write.
July 11th, 2017 00:39
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