Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Blue paradise
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an outstanding appeal in this verse Malu - the title itself is a gentle reminder of where peace can be found. A lovely read.
August 8th, 2017 11:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an outstanding appeal in this verse Malu - the title itself is a gentle reminder of where peace can be found. A lovely read.
August 8th, 2017 11:53
Blue paradise
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is place of quiet rest
Near the Heart of Creator God
A place where sin can ne\'er molest
Near to the Heart of God
Love the visual ~ Reflections !
MALU ~ you have shared a beautiful Poem ~ which is also beautiful Prayer. We all long for a quiet place away from the cares of the World ~ were we can commune alone with God
Thanks for sharing ~ Love You for being You ~ BRIAN
August 8th, 2017 10:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is place of quiet rest
Near the Heart of Creator God
A place where sin can ne\'er molest
Near to the Heart of God
Love the visual ~ Reflections !
MALU ~ you have shared a beautiful Poem ~ which is also beautiful Prayer. We all long for a quiet place away from the cares of the World ~ were we can commune alone with God
Thanks for sharing ~ Love You for being You ~ BRIAN
August 8th, 2017 10:39
Blue paradise
Louis Gibbs said:
Absolutely beautiful, Malu! Your talent grows consistently.
August 8th, 2017 08:44
Louis Gibbs said:
Absolutely beautiful, Malu! Your talent grows consistently.
August 8th, 2017 08:44
Insane
WL Schuett said:
Yikes pulled me in then wow didn\'t know what to think .. good one
August 7th, 2017 20:45
WL Schuett said:
Yikes pulled me in then wow didn\'t know what to think .. good one
August 7th, 2017 20:45
Insane
Heather T said:
Freaky, Malu! I can only imagine Eddy\'s twisted grin upon reading this!
August 7th, 2017 20:15
Heather T said:
Freaky, Malu! I can only imagine Eddy\'s twisted grin upon reading this!
August 7th, 2017 20:15
Insane
whisperingquill said:
Damn, wow Malu wow I had to read twice to get the gist
Nice interweaving of psyche mesmerizing
August 7th, 2017 19:58
whisperingquill said:
Damn, wow Malu wow I had to read twice to get the gist
Nice interweaving of psyche mesmerizing
August 7th, 2017 19:58
Insane
malubotelho said:
Thanks Santita. It is quite scary to write dark murderous things but I wanted to try. My Stephen King side.
August 7th, 2017 16:04
malubotelho said:
Thanks Santita. It is quite scary to write dark murderous things but I wanted to try. My Stephen King side.
August 7th, 2017 16:04
Insane
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MALU ~ This is some POEM ! We can\'t blame all our actions on EDDY. Your very sensuous Poem / Photo combo (you can\'t have one without the other !) starts gently enough \"He laid her down ................ \" but it ends in HORROR (thanks for scaring !). Dissection & dismembering of a Lady is \"ultimate sex\" but it happens. Thanks for having the guts to share ~ it will give me nightmares ~ but I felt (having read & reread it) that i was brave enough to comment. There is more than a hint of NECROPHILIA ! Thanks for sharing ~ I still Love You ~ BRIAN XOX
August 7th, 2017 13:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MALU ~ This is some POEM ! We can\'t blame all our actions on EDDY. Your very sensuous Poem / Photo combo (you can\'t have one without the other !) starts gently enough \"He laid her down ................ \" but it ends in HORROR (thanks for scaring !). Dissection & dismembering of a Lady is \"ultimate sex\" but it happens. Thanks for having the guts to share ~ it will give me nightmares ~ but I felt (having read & reread it) that i was brave enough to comment. There is more than a hint of NECROPHILIA ! Thanks for sharing ~ I still Love You ~ BRIAN XOX
August 7th, 2017 13:51
As she desired
FredPeyer said:
Malu, there are times when any and all of us would like to let go, petal by petal (beautifully said), I think.
August 5th, 2017 12:41
FredPeyer said:
Malu, there are times when any and all of us would like to let go, petal by petal (beautifully said), I think.
August 5th, 2017 12:41
Incubating
burning-embers said:
In a playful mood my mind invites me to reflect upon what has led to this pregnancy..... oooh. Seriously tho, lately my life has been in knots and i have had scant desire to write, yesterday and day before i didn\'t need to compose i looked at the mps homepage, glanced out of the window and before i knew it i had published my thoughts of that moment. My writers block comes when i can\'t polish something. i\'ll put it away and leave it to nag me on my desktop. Today i have so many mixed feelings about several subjects that i may miss the deadline. I\'ve got a serious dose of the blues and feel like breaking my diet and stuffing myself with cake etc, not writing at all.
August 5th, 2017 11:50
burning-embers said:
In a playful mood my mind invites me to reflect upon what has led to this pregnancy..... oooh. Seriously tho, lately my life has been in knots and i have had scant desire to write, yesterday and day before i didn\'t need to compose i looked at the mps homepage, glanced out of the window and before i knew it i had published my thoughts of that moment. My writers block comes when i can\'t polish something. i\'ll put it away and leave it to nag me on my desktop. Today i have so many mixed feelings about several subjects that i may miss the deadline. I\'ve got a serious dose of the blues and feel like breaking my diet and stuffing myself with cake etc, not writing at all.
August 5th, 2017 11:50
As she desired
malubotelho said:
Thank you so much Santita. Gladly you like it.
August 5th, 2017 11:26
malubotelho said:
Thank you so much Santita. Gladly you like it.
August 5th, 2017 11:26
As she desired
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely uplifting write - enjoyed it very much. Peace rose?
August 5th, 2017 10:16
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely uplifting write - enjoyed it very much. Peace rose?
August 5th, 2017 10:16
As she desired
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MALU ~ Beautiful PICTURE (Peace rose my favorite) Love the poem ~ transition to a higher Plane of Consciousness ~ Petal by Petal ~ Love BRIAN lease check my Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 5th, 2017 08:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MALU ~ Beautiful PICTURE (Peace rose my favorite) Love the poem ~ transition to a higher Plane of Consciousness ~ Petal by Petal ~ Love BRIAN lease check my Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 5th, 2017 08:53
As she desired
malubotelho said:
Thanks B/A. I have some beauties on my garden and this one came to me as I was admiring one of them. Short life span. I can never have all of them beautiful and blooming together but I always have some new ones coming.
August 5th, 2017 08:53
malubotelho said:
Thanks B/A. I have some beauties on my garden and this one came to me as I was admiring one of them. Short life span. I can never have all of them beautiful and blooming together but I always have some new ones coming.
August 5th, 2017 08:53
As she desired
burning-embers said:
So beautiful and moving. Living a life not as was meant to be but life and desires, and love of the worlds beauty around us, continue within the restraints. And life ends as we all will once again become stardust. Very moving for me today.
August 5th, 2017 08:36
burning-embers said:
So beautiful and moving. Living a life not as was meant to be but life and desires, and love of the worlds beauty around us, continue within the restraints. And life ends as we all will once again become stardust. Very moving for me today.
August 5th, 2017 08:36
Incubating
Goldfinch60 said:
You seem to have already given birth. clever write.
August 5th, 2017 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
You seem to have already given birth. clever write.
August 5th, 2017 00:08
Incubating
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I CAN EMPATHISE MALU ! So many of the POEMS in my Head & Heart abort before I can get them onto paper or the PC ! But those that go \"full term\" I share and thanks for all your loving comments it make the pain of Poetic Pregnancy & Poetic Birth worthwhile. Thinking of you ~ Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 16:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I CAN EMPATHISE MALU ! So many of the POEMS in my Head & Heart abort before I can get them onto paper or the PC ! But those that go \"full term\" I share and thanks for all your loving comments it make the pain of Poetic Pregnancy & Poetic Birth worthwhile. Thinking of you ~ Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 16:47
Incubating
kevin browne said:
Great artists always make a comeback, that\'s how champions win and I have no doubt with your poetry skills you will remain at the top.
August 4th, 2017 14:05
kevin browne said:
Great artists always make a comeback, that\'s how champions win and I have no doubt with your poetry skills you will remain at the top.
August 4th, 2017 14:05
Incubating
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphor here, Malu. Even though we guys obviously do not have the real experience of birthing, we do go through these motions as well when writing. I really like this poem.
August 4th, 2017 13:34
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphor here, Malu. Even though we guys obviously do not have the real experience of birthing, we do go through these motions as well when writing. I really like this poem.
August 4th, 2017 13:34
Incubating
malubotelho said:
Thanks Fay, this comments coming from you is a blessing.
August 4th, 2017 12:57
malubotelho said:
Thanks Fay, this comments coming from you is a blessing.
August 4th, 2017 12:57
Incubating
Fay Slimm. said:
Writer\'s block laid out in so much good imagery -and with such feeling I to which I too relate dear Malu - a great read.
August 4th, 2017 12:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Writer\'s block laid out in so much good imagery -and with such feeling I to which I too relate dear Malu - a great read.
August 4th, 2017 12:49
Incubating
Michael Edwards said:
Quite a little special and love the last few words which serve the poem so well.
August 4th, 2017 11:39
Michael Edwards said:
Quite a little special and love the last few words which serve the poem so well.
August 4th, 2017 11:39
Incubating
orchidee said:
A fine write. My only \'abort\' was that I pressed the wrong button after typing out a whole poem that I was about to upload. doh! lol.
August 4th, 2017 11:24
orchidee said:
A fine write. My only \'abort\' was that I pressed the wrong button after typing out a whole poem that I was about to upload. doh! lol.
August 4th, 2017 11:24
Incubating
whisperingquill said:
It\'s twins you have
Deep
Many different layers nicely done 😊
August 4th, 2017 11:11
whisperingquill said:
It\'s twins you have
Deep
Many different layers nicely done 😊
August 4th, 2017 11:11
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