Comments received on poems by malubotelho
As sweet as ever
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ for a perfect Love Poem ! I shared the dream and felt every nuance ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 12th, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ for a perfect Love Poem ! I shared the dream and felt every nuance ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 12th, 2017 09:59
As sweet as ever
malubotelho said:
Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
I\'m a lioness sometimes in motherhood protecting my cubs. My cubs are lions now and they want to protect me from the world now. Now they are the ones thinking I\'m an innocent, ingênuos person. As for the dream, it was a beautiful dream. Was an enlighned vision and feelings flying light and free on that sky. I\'ve felt so beautiful inside. I created on top to make it more interesting. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.
July 12th, 2017 09:54
malubotelho said:
Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
I\'m a lioness sometimes in motherhood protecting my cubs. My cubs are lions now and they want to protect me from the world now. Now they are the ones thinking I\'m an innocent, ingênuos person. As for the dream, it was a beautiful dream. Was an enlighned vision and feelings flying light and free on that sky. I\'ve felt so beautiful inside. I created on top to make it more interesting. Thanks, I appreciate your comments.
July 12th, 2017 09:54
As sweet as ever
burning-embers said:
He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress last week (or was it a lion) but this is really sweet isn\'t it. This man is a very lucky person.
July 12th, 2017 08:47
burning-embers said:
He he he @ Kevin Browne calling you a little smoothie. You were a tigeress last week (or was it a lion) but this is really sweet isn\'t it. This man is a very lucky person.
July 12th, 2017 08:47
As sweet as ever
kevin browne said:
you little smoothie. great poem for a great love whoever the person is x
July 12th, 2017 08:41
kevin browne said:
you little smoothie. great poem for a great love whoever the person is x
July 12th, 2017 08:41
They call me ego
onepauly said:
ego is something I cannot envision. I see the word but nothing registers. I don\'t know why I did not look for it in the dictionary. I\'ve got three electronic ones. I\'m a very good speller after all those books I\'ve read then and now. but when I\'m typing I have them handy. is the ego. well I just looked it up. it says excessive self opinion. I do want to know who I am. sometimes I lose this and I become afraid. I do know we cannot change the future of the stars. mans measurements just don\'t fit this universe. it needs a whole going over.
July 12th, 2017 01:41
onepauly said:
ego is something I cannot envision. I see the word but nothing registers. I don\'t know why I did not look for it in the dictionary. I\'ve got three electronic ones. I\'m a very good speller after all those books I\'ve read then and now. but when I\'m typing I have them handy. is the ego. well I just looked it up. it says excessive self opinion. I do want to know who I am. sometimes I lose this and I become afraid. I do know we cannot change the future of the stars. mans measurements just don\'t fit this universe. it needs a whole going over.
July 12th, 2017 01:41
They call me ego
malubotelho said:
Well, like our friend Pauly said before; the world is not prepared to know the true. We dont learn it at school and even when we are looking for it we can barely touch the subject in understanding. Even the most beautiful love poem shows trace of the ego. Sad it.
July 11th, 2017 18:22
malubotelho said:
Well, like our friend Pauly said before; the world is not prepared to know the true. We dont learn it at school and even when we are looking for it we can barely touch the subject in understanding. Even the most beautiful love poem shows trace of the ego. Sad it.
July 11th, 2017 18:22
They call me ego
burning-embers said:
\"Observing the opportunity to raid your thoughts\" how true and well phrased that is. Captured me with this and re-read several times now. \"I need to always bring you to a space where I can see you\" clever and oh so true. Lotta people out there could learn from this wisdom.
July 11th, 2017 17:44
burning-embers said:
\"Observing the opportunity to raid your thoughts\" how true and well phrased that is. Captured me with this and re-read several times now. \"I need to always bring you to a space where I can see you\" clever and oh so true. Lotta people out there could learn from this wisdom.
July 11th, 2017 17:44
They call me ego
Nicholas Browning said:
Ego is a very interesting concept. You have to feed it the right amount.
July 11th, 2017 16:37
Nicholas Browning said:
Ego is a very interesting concept. You have to feed it the right amount.
July 11th, 2017 16:37
They call me ego
malubotelho said:
We think we do and this is why it win us but we have a deeper source of true that is your true self that does not need the ego. The ego is the shadow of the true self. It is a phantom. A parasite. Very deep subject. If you only believe in physichology you can not understand it. It is deeper than that. Sorry my friend. This is all I can say for now.
July 11th, 2017 15:58
malubotelho said:
We think we do and this is why it win us but we have a deeper source of true that is your true self that does not need the ego. The ego is the shadow of the true self. It is a phantom. A parasite. Very deep subject. If you only believe in physichology you can not understand it. It is deeper than that. Sorry my friend. This is all I can say for now.
July 11th, 2017 15:58
They call me ego
FredPeyer said:
Malu I like the way you present both sides. But like it or not, where would we be without that little devil because there are times when we need it.
July 11th, 2017 15:50
FredPeyer said:
Malu I like the way you present both sides. But like it or not, where would we be without that little devil because there are times when we need it.
July 11th, 2017 15:50
A cry for opinion
malubotelho said:
Thanks my friend for your opinion. Later I will write something as an answer or my opinion about it.
July 11th, 2017 09:46
malubotelho said:
Thanks my friend for your opinion. Later I will write something as an answer or my opinion about it.
July 11th, 2017 09:46
A cry for opinion
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem shouts concern for this life and this body. Know that you, your soul, is eternal ... this life is but a brief, unpleasant chapter.
July 11th, 2017 08:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem shouts concern for this life and this body. Know that you, your soul, is eternal ... this life is but a brief, unpleasant chapter.
July 11th, 2017 08:41
A cry for opinion
P.H.Rose said:
In the U.K. This is
Called a.. Belter !!!!
Really very good malu
July 11th, 2017 07:14
P.H.Rose said:
In the U.K. This is
Called a.. Belter !!!!
Really very good malu
July 11th, 2017 07:14
A cry for opinion
kevin browne said:
my advice to you would be to throw all that negative stuff in the bin and get your head in to learning some fresh new ideologies. the world has endless positive and incredible things going on in it and all we do is moan about whats wrong. look in other directions and never allow the reflections of others peoples thoughts or actions shine on your image. a bad person will make good man look bad also. I don\'t mean to critisise you in a negative or bad vibe, I just think there is enough negativity already. a good and important write for the people who suffer from the effects of the content in your work.
July 11th, 2017 04:56
kevin browne said:
my advice to you would be to throw all that negative stuff in the bin and get your head in to learning some fresh new ideologies. the world has endless positive and incredible things going on in it and all we do is moan about whats wrong. look in other directions and never allow the reflections of others peoples thoughts or actions shine on your image. a bad person will make good man look bad also. I don\'t mean to critisise you in a negative or bad vibe, I just think there is enough negativity already. a good and important write for the people who suffer from the effects of the content in your work.
July 11th, 2017 04:56
A cry for opinion
Goldfinch60 said:
What you cannot believe in are the politicians as they are in it for what THEY can get out of it for themselves. They do not care about others.
Good write.
July 11th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
What you cannot believe in are the politicians as they are in it for what THEY can get out of it for themselves. They do not care about others.
Good write.
July 11th, 2017 00:39
A cry for opinion
Trev said:
Has a nice message and perception on real issues.. I liked it.
July 11th, 2017 00:26
Trev said:
Has a nice message and perception on real issues.. I liked it.
July 11th, 2017 00:26
A cry for opinion
malubotelho said:
Well, the news should be announced as bad news because it is all it is. I read news because I only understand better if reading but lately I\'m skimming. Too bad to have all my attention. I agree with Pauly when he said nothing can be changed but I don\'t want to be alienated aither. Thanks for your opinion.
July 10th, 2017 23:23
malubotelho said:
Well, the news should be announced as bad news because it is all it is. I read news because I only understand better if reading but lately I\'m skimming. Too bad to have all my attention. I agree with Pauly when he said nothing can be changed but I don\'t want to be alienated aither. Thanks for your opinion.
July 10th, 2017 23:23
A cry for opinion
onepauly said:
the last line. we could be. but don\'t worry dear. we can never change the future no matter what we think, do feel or say. free will or not we cannot change the future. don\'t let this out. for the world is not ready for this knowledge. thanks
July 10th, 2017 22:44
onepauly said:
the last line. we could be. but don\'t worry dear. we can never change the future no matter what we think, do feel or say. free will or not we cannot change the future. don\'t let this out. for the world is not ready for this knowledge. thanks
July 10th, 2017 22:44
A cry for opinion
FredPeyer said:
WOW! Malu, you are tackling some very heavy issues here and you are asking some very poignant questions!
Please allow me some time to get back to you later, after I had a chance to think this over.
Great writing, great subject, great questions!
July 10th, 2017 22:41
FredPeyer said:
WOW! Malu, you are tackling some very heavy issues here and you are asking some very poignant questions!
Please allow me some time to get back to you later, after I had a chance to think this over.
Great writing, great subject, great questions!
July 10th, 2017 22:41
Life change
FredPeyer said:
You beautifully caught the joy and happiness, but also the fear and pain, we experience when becoming parents. None of us were trained as mothers or fathers. From one day to the next we simply are, and then the fun starts, to say nothing of the sleepless nights. But it is all WORTH IT!!!
Thank you for a great poem.
July 9th, 2017 18:10
FredPeyer said:
You beautifully caught the joy and happiness, but also the fear and pain, we experience when becoming parents. None of us were trained as mothers or fathers. From one day to the next we simply are, and then the fun starts, to say nothing of the sleepless nights. But it is all WORTH IT!!!
Thank you for a great poem.
July 9th, 2017 18:10
Life change
burning-embers said:
I love the line \'to face the world as a lioness\' so true mum. You passion and love of motherhood and your lovely child shine out with your words.
July 9th, 2017 06:57
burning-embers said:
I love the line \'to face the world as a lioness\' so true mum. You passion and love of motherhood and your lovely child shine out with your words.
July 9th, 2017 06:57
Life change
kevin browne said:
and I bet you faced it with all the grace you could possibly muster up. children are such a catch arn\'t they? that\'s why they get through everything . it\'s a good moment in life and it\'s about joy so embrace all you give to your children and embrace what they give you. this poem is special, I can tell that easily and so for that reason you score well over 10/10. a lovely sentimental poem and I loved it.
July 9th, 2017 01:18
kevin browne said:
and I bet you faced it with all the grace you could possibly muster up. children are such a catch arn\'t they? that\'s why they get through everything . it\'s a good moment in life and it\'s about joy so embrace all you give to your children and embrace what they give you. this poem is special, I can tell that easily and so for that reason you score well over 10/10. a lovely sentimental poem and I loved it.
July 9th, 2017 01:18
Life change
P.H.Rose said:
Love this malu
Just so very beautiful
And as a father i see
It\'s story what a mother
Goes through...
My wife was 17 with
Our first child, just a kid
To go through that...
July 9th, 2017 01:13
P.H.Rose said:
Love this malu
Just so very beautiful
And as a father i see
It\'s story what a mother
Goes through...
My wife was 17 with
Our first child, just a kid
To go through that...
July 9th, 2017 01:13
Is love selfish?
onepauly said:
best poem I\'ve read in a long time. so full of meaning. I think it will touch many people.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
onepauly said:
best poem I\'ve read in a long time. so full of meaning. I think it will touch many people.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
Is love selfish?
malubotelho said:
Kevin, by the time passes one learn so much. I\'ve learned a lot. Even the most truly love can get to scare people. They think why that person loves me so much. Well, no me. I give myself and the moment I have with any body even if with a child I\'m really there. But I understand that it can be scary sometimes. Thanks for your comment.
July 7th, 2017 21:25
malubotelho said:
Kevin, by the time passes one learn so much. I\'ve learned a lot. Even the most truly love can get to scare people. They think why that person loves me so much. Well, no me. I give myself and the moment I have with any body even if with a child I\'m really there. But I understand that it can be scary sometimes. Thanks for your comment.
July 7th, 2017 21:25
Is love selfish?
kevin browne said:
too much love will kill you in the circumstance of it happening. as humans we have compulsive emotions that spiral out of control and all sorts of things can go wrong or suffer when we feel we are not being loved enough, nit just by your partner but family and friends. you open up and tell the world your love is on offer. oh how us men would take the offer up in an instant. your writing shows in the expressions in your poetry who you are and more so, what you want and there is nothing wrong with that. selfish? we can all beg to differ so just take it on the chin if selfish in the right degree is a fine thing.
July 7th, 2017 21:15
kevin browne said:
too much love will kill you in the circumstance of it happening. as humans we have compulsive emotions that spiral out of control and all sorts of things can go wrong or suffer when we feel we are not being loved enough, nit just by your partner but family and friends. you open up and tell the world your love is on offer. oh how us men would take the offer up in an instant. your writing shows in the expressions in your poetry who you are and more so, what you want and there is nothing wrong with that. selfish? we can all beg to differ so just take it on the chin if selfish in the right degree is a fine thing.
July 7th, 2017 21:15
Is love selfish?
malubotelho said:
Thanks love. I believe we all long for love but are we prepared to receive so much love? Would we not be overwhelmed and suffocated?
July 7th, 2017 20:47
malubotelho said:
Thanks love. I believe we all long for love but are we prepared to receive so much love? Would we not be overwhelmed and suffocated?
July 7th, 2017 20:47
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