Comments received on poems by malubotelho
A cry for opinion
Trev said:
Has a nice message and perception on real issues.. I liked it.
July 11th, 2017 00:26
Trev said:
Has a nice message and perception on real issues.. I liked it.
July 11th, 2017 00:26
A cry for opinion
malubotelho said:
Well, the news should be announced as bad news because it is all it is. I read news because I only understand better if reading but lately I\'m skimming. Too bad to have all my attention. I agree with Pauly when he said nothing can be changed but I don\'t want to be alienated aither. Thanks for your opinion.
July 10th, 2017 23:23
malubotelho said:
Well, the news should be announced as bad news because it is all it is. I read news because I only understand better if reading but lately I\'m skimming. Too bad to have all my attention. I agree with Pauly when he said nothing can be changed but I don\'t want to be alienated aither. Thanks for your opinion.
July 10th, 2017 23:23
A cry for opinion
onepauly said:
the last line. we could be. but don\'t worry dear. we can never change the future no matter what we think, do feel or say. free will or not we cannot change the future. don\'t let this out. for the world is not ready for this knowledge. thanks
July 10th, 2017 22:44
onepauly said:
the last line. we could be. but don\'t worry dear. we can never change the future no matter what we think, do feel or say. free will or not we cannot change the future. don\'t let this out. for the world is not ready for this knowledge. thanks
July 10th, 2017 22:44
A cry for opinion
FredPeyer said:
WOW! Malu, you are tackling some very heavy issues here and you are asking some very poignant questions!
Please allow me some time to get back to you later, after I had a chance to think this over.
Great writing, great subject, great questions!
July 10th, 2017 22:41
FredPeyer said:
WOW! Malu, you are tackling some very heavy issues here and you are asking some very poignant questions!
Please allow me some time to get back to you later, after I had a chance to think this over.
Great writing, great subject, great questions!
July 10th, 2017 22:41
Life change
FredPeyer said:
You beautifully caught the joy and happiness, but also the fear and pain, we experience when becoming parents. None of us were trained as mothers or fathers. From one day to the next we simply are, and then the fun starts, to say nothing of the sleepless nights. But it is all WORTH IT!!!
Thank you for a great poem.
July 9th, 2017 18:10
FredPeyer said:
You beautifully caught the joy and happiness, but also the fear and pain, we experience when becoming parents. None of us were trained as mothers or fathers. From one day to the next we simply are, and then the fun starts, to say nothing of the sleepless nights. But it is all WORTH IT!!!
Thank you for a great poem.
July 9th, 2017 18:10
Life change
burning-embers said:
I love the line \'to face the world as a lioness\' so true mum. You passion and love of motherhood and your lovely child shine out with your words.
July 9th, 2017 06:57
burning-embers said:
I love the line \'to face the world as a lioness\' so true mum. You passion and love of motherhood and your lovely child shine out with your words.
July 9th, 2017 06:57
Life change
kevin browne said:
and I bet you faced it with all the grace you could possibly muster up. children are such a catch arn\'t they? that\'s why they get through everything . it\'s a good moment in life and it\'s about joy so embrace all you give to your children and embrace what they give you. this poem is special, I can tell that easily and so for that reason you score well over 10/10. a lovely sentimental poem and I loved it.
July 9th, 2017 01:18
kevin browne said:
and I bet you faced it with all the grace you could possibly muster up. children are such a catch arn\'t they? that\'s why they get through everything . it\'s a good moment in life and it\'s about joy so embrace all you give to your children and embrace what they give you. this poem is special, I can tell that easily and so for that reason you score well over 10/10. a lovely sentimental poem and I loved it.
July 9th, 2017 01:18
Life change
P.H.Rose said:
Love this malu
Just so very beautiful
And as a father i see
It\'s story what a mother
Goes through...
My wife was 17 with
Our first child, just a kid
To go through that...
July 9th, 2017 01:13
P.H.Rose said:
Love this malu
Just so very beautiful
And as a father i see
It\'s story what a mother
Goes through...
My wife was 17 with
Our first child, just a kid
To go through that...
July 9th, 2017 01:13
Is love selfish?
onepauly said:
best poem I\'ve read in a long time. so full of meaning. I think it will touch many people.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
onepauly said:
best poem I\'ve read in a long time. so full of meaning. I think it will touch many people.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
Is love selfish?
malubotelho said:
Kevin, by the time passes one learn so much. I\'ve learned a lot. Even the most truly love can get to scare people. They think why that person loves me so much. Well, no me. I give myself and the moment I have with any body even if with a child I\'m really there. But I understand that it can be scary sometimes. Thanks for your comment.
July 7th, 2017 21:25
malubotelho said:
Kevin, by the time passes one learn so much. I\'ve learned a lot. Even the most truly love can get to scare people. They think why that person loves me so much. Well, no me. I give myself and the moment I have with any body even if with a child I\'m really there. But I understand that it can be scary sometimes. Thanks for your comment.
July 7th, 2017 21:25
Is love selfish?
kevin browne said:
too much love will kill you in the circumstance of it happening. as humans we have compulsive emotions that spiral out of control and all sorts of things can go wrong or suffer when we feel we are not being loved enough, nit just by your partner but family and friends. you open up and tell the world your love is on offer. oh how us men would take the offer up in an instant. your writing shows in the expressions in your poetry who you are and more so, what you want and there is nothing wrong with that. selfish? we can all beg to differ so just take it on the chin if selfish in the right degree is a fine thing.
July 7th, 2017 21:15
kevin browne said:
too much love will kill you in the circumstance of it happening. as humans we have compulsive emotions that spiral out of control and all sorts of things can go wrong or suffer when we feel we are not being loved enough, nit just by your partner but family and friends. you open up and tell the world your love is on offer. oh how us men would take the offer up in an instant. your writing shows in the expressions in your poetry who you are and more so, what you want and there is nothing wrong with that. selfish? we can all beg to differ so just take it on the chin if selfish in the right degree is a fine thing.
July 7th, 2017 21:15
Is love selfish?
malubotelho said:
Thanks love. I believe we all long for love but are we prepared to receive so much love? Would we not be overwhelmed and suffocated?
July 7th, 2017 20:47
malubotelho said:
Thanks love. I believe we all long for love but are we prepared to receive so much love? Would we not be overwhelmed and suffocated?
July 7th, 2017 20:47
Is love selfish?
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful declaration of love. We love and we would like to be loved in return. If that is selfishness, so be it. Love your poem as usual Malu!
July 7th, 2017 20:42
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful declaration of love. We love and we would like to be loved in return. If that is selfishness, so be it. Love your poem as usual Malu!
July 7th, 2017 20:42
Is love selfish?
burning-embers said:
\"The secret that you carry in your heart\" hmmm - I\'d shout YOU from the rooftops were you mine! To air your desires like you state is surely and invitation for someone to respond to with equal love. What\'s selfish about an invitation like that? Wow, what a generous offer!
July 7th, 2017 20:39
burning-embers said:
\"The secret that you carry in your heart\" hmmm - I\'d shout YOU from the rooftops were you mine! To air your desires like you state is surely and invitation for someone to respond to with equal love. What\'s selfish about an invitation like that? Wow, what a generous offer!
July 7th, 2017 20:39
Not a lonely bird
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a very moving poem. It read just like a song, with the repeated \"when the night comes,\" and where it was repeated was unexpected to me and added so much more melody to this read. There was a poem, from the show Taxi, the episode called, Elain\'s Secret Admirer, spoke of a woman \"dancing to sonnets,\" and I couldn\'t imagine someone dancing to something read; but this poem of yours gives me the imagery. Tyfs!
July 6th, 2017 22:00
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a very moving poem. It read just like a song, with the repeated \"when the night comes,\" and where it was repeated was unexpected to me and added so much more melody to this read. There was a poem, from the show Taxi, the episode called, Elain\'s Secret Admirer, spoke of a woman \"dancing to sonnets,\" and I couldn\'t imagine someone dancing to something read; but this poem of yours gives me the imagery. Tyfs!
July 6th, 2017 22:00
Not a lonely bird
ShannonXx said:
Love the style this was written in. A great message, that is easy to relate to
July 6th, 2017 11:33
ShannonXx said:
Love the style this was written in. A great message, that is easy to relate to
July 6th, 2017 11:33
Not a lonely bird
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your nights never be lonely.
July 6th, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your nights never be lonely.
July 6th, 2017 01:39
Not a lonely bird
burning-embers said:
Oh this is gorgeous! You seduce me with your first four lines. So much so i re-read them, so many times (lovely).
Waking me then with \'When the day comes\', yes you really do convey the change and then you break my heart with that bird.
Beautifully moving. You clever thing you. +fav\'s
July 5th, 2017 20:56
burning-embers said:
Oh this is gorgeous! You seduce me with your first four lines. So much so i re-read them, so many times (lovely).
Waking me then with \'When the day comes\', yes you really do convey the change and then you break my heart with that bird.
Beautifully moving. You clever thing you. +fav\'s
July 5th, 2017 20:56
Not a lonely bird
kevin browne said:
who want\'s to be lonely? you captured that one very well. an addictive poem x
July 5th, 2017 20:55
kevin browne said:
who want\'s to be lonely? you captured that one very well. an addictive poem x
July 5th, 2017 20:55
Not a lonely bird
FredPeyer said:
What was first, the picture or the poem? Your beautiful poem has longing written all over it. Very artfully done.
July 5th, 2017 20:35
FredPeyer said:
What was first, the picture or the poem? Your beautiful poem has longing written all over it. Very artfully done.
July 5th, 2017 20:35
Scars
onepauly said:
yes, meditation is able to help soften the scars we take with us in our journey through life.
July 4th, 2017 01:48
onepauly said:
yes, meditation is able to help soften the scars we take with us in our journey through life.
July 4th, 2017 01:48
Scars
Heather T said:
Beautiful reflection from the heart of a beautiful woman. There is an undercurrent of peace throughout, even with the tough stuff.
July 3rd, 2017 23:56
Heather T said:
Beautiful reflection from the heart of a beautiful woman. There is an undercurrent of peace throughout, even with the tough stuff.
July 3rd, 2017 23:56
Scars
malubotelho said:
Awe! Thanks. I feel like going back to write right now. I have to go jogging though. I appreciate your kind comment.
July 3rd, 2017 17:32
malubotelho said:
Awe! Thanks. I feel like going back to write right now. I have to go jogging though. I appreciate your kind comment.
July 3rd, 2017 17:32
Scars
FredPeyer said:
First of all, thanks for the picture showing the pink hibiscus, Hawaii\'s State flower (it\'s actually the bright yellow one, but a hibiscus is a hibiscus).
Comparing feelings to color is so true. (Yesterday I saw red, today I am feeling blue). I just love your writing. It gets under my skin. Once I start reading I cannot stop.
July 3rd, 2017 17:29
FredPeyer said:
First of all, thanks for the picture showing the pink hibiscus, Hawaii\'s State flower (it\'s actually the bright yellow one, but a hibiscus is a hibiscus).
Comparing feelings to color is so true. (Yesterday I saw red, today I am feeling blue). I just love your writing. It gets under my skin. Once I start reading I cannot stop.
July 3rd, 2017 17:29
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