Comments received on poems by malubotelho



Sleazy lover
malubotelho said:

Thanks for reading. Appreciate your comments.

July 17th, 2017 16:20

Copacabana
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhh MALU ~ You are naughty ~ but i love you ! We all loved the 2016 Olympics from Rio ~ Brazil (and Brazilians !) must be very proud of your Country ~ Rio & Copacabana ! Its on my list ~ but after reading your poem it\' at the top for 2018 ! Your poem was very sensuous and the picture stunning ! Thanks for caring & sharing and making us SMILE ! Big Hugs ~ BRIAN

July 17th, 2017 14:55

Copacabana
malubotelho said:

Yes my friend, if you never been there you don\'t know what it is about. Very dangerous but also very exciting. Thanks for reading.

July 17th, 2017 13:14

Copacabana
FredPeyer said:

What a piece of work Malu, so well written, a metamorphosis from ugly duckling to beautiful swan. And it had to be in Copacabana!

July 17th, 2017 13:01

Copacabana
malubotelho said:

I believe so. Thanks for reading.

July 17th, 2017 12:44

Copacabana
onepauly said:

the crowd was amazed and I was amused. lol

July 17th, 2017 11:55

Copacabana
malubotelho said:

Thanks lovely friend. I had to make it big so I could fit everything and make some sense. Thanks for reading.

July 17th, 2017 11:30

Copacabana
burning-embers said:

Soooooo HOT malubotelho i evaporated ! Three large glasses of water and i\'m back ,... round two - read it again.
Mama what courses through your veins? What spell have you cast? What now is destiny? What have you done to me? (Answers on a postcard please c/o MPS.com)

July 17th, 2017 10:23

Sleazy lover
malubotelho said:

No, thank you.
Yes, I wrote this when at the beach on a lazy day.

July 17th, 2017 09:37

Sleazy lover
onepauly said:

this one warmed me all over sometimes my emotions just pop up when I least expect them.

July 15th, 2017 23:34

Sleazy lover
kevin browne said:

and you seduce us with another slender piece of beautiful sexy poetry. thank you.

July 15th, 2017 20:57

Sleazy lover
malubotelho said:

Thanks Domi. It is a fun write indeed. Thanks for your comment

July 15th, 2017 17:02

Sleazy lover
Domi said:

the take on the word sleaze has a whole new meaning to me now! This is wonderfully written!!

July 15th, 2017 15:57

Sleazy lover
malubotelho said:

I\'m happy you\'ve got inspired by my simple words. Yes, hey, it is vacantion time. We are so luck we have the beach close by. When I was in Brazil we had to travel 1000 km to find the closest beach from where we lived. Now I always say that no one can complain because we live in paradise. Thanks for your comments

July 15th, 2017 15:11

Sleazy lover
FredPeyer said:

I like it Malu, reminds me of the days when we lie on the beach in the warm sand, with the heat of the sun enveloping us, the gentle rhythmic sound of the waves transporting us into some other dimension.
See what you did with your five lines? Now I wanna drop everything and drive that half hour to the north shore!

July 15th, 2017 12:09

Sleazy lover
Heather T said:

I enjoyed this so much, and wish I could read the Portuguese!

July 15th, 2017 11:45

Sleazy lover
burning-embers said:

100% sleaze i couldn\'t go for. But sleaze within a knowing tender loving partnership for zest ... oh yes, yes pleazzzze a bit of sleaze.

July 15th, 2017 10:04

Sleazy lover
Michael Edwards said:

Quite like the idea of a sleazy lover myself - could be something different - also like your poem m

July 15th, 2017 09:50

Epiphany
Goldfinch60 said:

Vibrate away M, vibrate away.

July 15th, 2017 00:06

Epiphany
Heather T said:

Profound, Malu! So much between the lines, and I know we all feel that.

July 14th, 2017 22:14

Epiphany
malubotelho said:

Thanks a bunch. Yes, just a quick lovely one.

July 14th, 2017 18:14

Epiphany
malubotelho said:

Thank you Brian. I\'m a little late on feedbacks today. Did not even read the poems from all my friends. But the night is long and I will get there. Need some refreshment.

July 14th, 2017 18:04

Epiphany
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Excellent thought MALU ~ thanks for sharing.! My poetic side vibrates too ~ in harmony with all our lovely Members. Sharing and commenting on Poetry keeps me sane. Thanks for you feedback it maintains our Harmony ! Hugs BRIANi

July 14th, 2017 16:23

Epiphany
Nicholas Browning said:

Long live poetry!

July 14th, 2017 15:26

Epiphany
FredPeyer said:

Malu, you said it all with so few words. We are all vibrating:
According to string theory, absolutely everything in the universe—all of the particles that make up matter and forces—is comprised of tiny vibrating fundamental strings.
On the everyday side these tiny vibrations let you live, while on the poetic side they let you create!
You put the universe into two lines!

July 14th, 2017 12:50

Epiphany
malubotelho said:

Thank you. It also refers to the MPS site. It vibrates with thoughts and energy of all kinds.

July 14th, 2017 10:58

Epiphany
Michael Edwards said:

Someone else posting a couplet - you\'ve made my day especially since this little gem is special - more please.

July 14th, 2017 10:52

Epiphany
burning-embers said:

Perfect! +favs

July 14th, 2017 09:04

Epiphany
Louis Gibbs said:

A very good couplet, \'M\'! I appreciate it, thanks for sharing. There definitely is a difference between just living, and vibrating.

July 14th, 2017 08:46

As sweet as ever
Renzi said:

Beautiful. Just beautiful. My heart is warm 💓

July 14th, 2017 08:37



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