Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Bondage
malubotelho said:
Thanks Heather. Had to write something deeper today, to brake the stillness of a Wednesday.
July 26th, 2017 15:21
malubotelho said:
Thanks Heather. Had to write something deeper today, to brake the stillness of a Wednesday.
July 26th, 2017 15:21
Bondage
Heather T said:
Enjoyed the heat of your consensual telling, peeking through the blindfold of your words.
\"telling lies to wash the guilt of our fragile counterfeiting\" Great verse!
July 26th, 2017 15:04
Heather T said:
Enjoyed the heat of your consensual telling, peeking through the blindfold of your words.
\"telling lies to wash the guilt of our fragile counterfeiting\" Great verse!
July 26th, 2017 15:04
Bondage
Michael Edwards said:
More like 50 shades of red - such a powerful write - great passion.
July 26th, 2017 12:53
Michael Edwards said:
More like 50 shades of red - such a powerful write - great passion.
July 26th, 2017 12:53
Bondage
burning-embers said:
Hey, when its two consenting adults then let it be. We each have our indulgences. How straight is straight? I love the heat of this and your mischief for taking us throught it. (picks up a small whip and places it in malubotelho\'s vision, smiling over the top of it)
July 26th, 2017 12:44
burning-embers said:
Hey, when its two consenting adults then let it be. We each have our indulgences. How straight is straight? I love the heat of this and your mischief for taking us throught it. (picks up a small whip and places it in malubotelho\'s vision, smiling over the top of it)
July 26th, 2017 12:44
Bondage
FredPeyer said:
Malu, a strong, but good write! Reminded me of 50 shades of grey.
July 26th, 2017 10:41
FredPeyer said:
Malu, a strong, but good write! Reminded me of 50 shades of grey.
July 26th, 2017 10:41
Bondage
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'see\' anything - cos I swooned at this! heehee.
July 26th, 2017 10:17
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'see\' anything - cos I swooned at this! heehee.
July 26th, 2017 10:17
I just wanted to fly
malubotelho said:
Thanks Jane. The first part were written one day and then the next day I had the accident and wrote the other part. It is a sequencial thought.
July 25th, 2017 14:37
malubotelho said:
Thanks Jane. The first part were written one day and then the next day I had the accident and wrote the other part. It is a sequencial thought.
July 25th, 2017 14:37
I just wanted to fly
malubotelho said:
Thanks Renzi. It is funny how your life turns around. Thanks for reading.
July 25th, 2017 08:06
malubotelho said:
Thanks Renzi. It is funny how your life turns around. Thanks for reading.
July 25th, 2017 08:06
I just wanted to fly
Renzi said:
I believe everything happens for a reason, your wee poem is a great example of that ♡
July 25th, 2017 04:18
Renzi said:
I believe everything happens for a reason, your wee poem is a great example of that ♡
July 25th, 2017 04:18
I just wanted to fly
burning-embers said:
I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces origins. Maybe god was telling you he wanted you to continue your path in your present location. Sometimes it difficult to believe there is a \'hell\' anyway.
July 25th, 2017 04:15
burning-embers said:
I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces origins. Maybe god was telling you he wanted you to continue your path in your present location. Sometimes it difficult to believe there is a \'hell\' anyway.
July 25th, 2017 04:15
I just wanted to fly
Fay Slimm. said:
We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so good for our future - a fine piece of imagery which set many thinking including myself - - thank you for sharing your experience dear Malu and I hope that broken arm is healing too.
July 25th, 2017 02:41
Fay Slimm. said:
We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so good for our future - a fine piece of imagery which set many thinking including myself - - thank you for sharing your experience dear Malu and I hope that broken arm is healing too.
July 25th, 2017 02:41
I just wanted to fly
Michael Edwards said:
I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message - nice one Malu.
July 25th, 2017 00:27
Michael Edwards said:
I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message - nice one Malu.
July 25th, 2017 00:27
I just wanted to fly
malubotelho said:
Thanks Robert. I think anything that makes us suffer is hell. This is why I was grateful somehow that I had that little accident that broke my arm, other ways I would had committed a big mistake.
July 24th, 2017 22:15
malubotelho said:
Thanks Robert. I think anything that makes us suffer is hell. This is why I was grateful somehow that I had that little accident that broke my arm, other ways I would had committed a big mistake.
July 24th, 2017 22:15
I just wanted to fly
kevin browne said:
I am so happy that you cant fly to hell because Heaven is your home along side all of Gods beautiful people. you are one of those beautiful people and a beautiful poetic writer also x
July 24th, 2017 18:22
kevin browne said:
I am so happy that you cant fly to hell because Heaven is your home along side all of Gods beautiful people. you are one of those beautiful people and a beautiful poetic writer also x
July 24th, 2017 18:22
I just wanted to fly
Azura Nightsong said:
I suppose i feel this poem in a metaphorical sense in the very least.
The wings will come in time.
Great poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:18
Azura Nightsong said:
I suppose i feel this poem in a metaphorical sense in the very least.
The wings will come in time.
Great poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:18
I just wanted to fly
FredPeyer said:
Good writing Malu, as usual, but the ending surprised me. I thought you wanted to fly high, but for hell you have to go the other way.
July 24th, 2017 16:21
FredPeyer said:
Good writing Malu, as usual, but the ending surprised me. I thought you wanted to fly high, but for hell you have to go the other way.
July 24th, 2017 16:21
Perhaps
Frank Prem said:
Very melancholy, but well put together for the reader, I think.
Enjoyed.
July 22nd, 2017 21:16
Frank Prem said:
Very melancholy, but well put together for the reader, I think.
Enjoyed.
July 22nd, 2017 21:16
Perhaps
Heather T said:
Emotive wrote, sweet lady. Something in this squeezed my heart.
July 22nd, 2017 19:27
Heather T said:
Emotive wrote, sweet lady. Something in this squeezed my heart.
July 22nd, 2017 19:27
Perhaps
FredPeyer said:
What you should not let rest is your writing! Another great poem. Thank you.
July 22nd, 2017 18:45
FredPeyer said:
What you should not let rest is your writing! Another great poem. Thank you.
July 22nd, 2017 18:45
Unfair
burning-embers said:
aah the trade off, which is the more important? which is the more tempting? for which one to settle?
do we ever really settle?
July 22nd, 2017 13:36
burning-embers said:
aah the trade off, which is the more important? which is the more tempting? for which one to settle?
do we ever really settle?
July 22nd, 2017 13:36
Unfair
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of sincere appeal for love to look again at the blessings it has. A powerful comparison to put before those who waver - -thank you for sharing it Malu
July 22nd, 2017 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of sincere appeal for love to look again at the blessings it has. A powerful comparison to put before those who waver - -thank you for sharing it Malu
July 22nd, 2017 03:07
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