Comments received on poems by malubotelho
I\'m your girl
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the mighty seductive power that women possess, against which a man stands no chance! Congratulations on claiming your power at an early age, malu.
August 13th, 2017 10:18
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the mighty seductive power that women possess, against which a man stands no chance! Congratulations on claiming your power at an early age, malu.
August 13th, 2017 10:18
I\'m your girl
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. This is a girl of absolute power.
August 13th, 2017 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. This is a girl of absolute power.
August 13th, 2017 02:15
I\'m your girl
FredPeyer said:
Us poor guys don\'t have a chance at all! We are manipulated right and left.... and love it!
Malu, you do know how to write about love (and female power) beautifully. And the picture you chose does go well with the poem.
August 13th, 2017 00:50
FredPeyer said:
Us poor guys don\'t have a chance at all! We are manipulated right and left.... and love it!
Malu, you do know how to write about love (and female power) beautifully. And the picture you chose does go well with the poem.
August 13th, 2017 00:50
I\'m your girl
Michael Edwards said:
Warm, sensuous, and she\'s here with me now - I wish !!! Love this Malu - a super bit of free verse.
August 13th, 2017 00:21
Michael Edwards said:
Warm, sensuous, and she\'s here with me now - I wish !!! Love this Malu - a super bit of free verse.
August 13th, 2017 00:21
Love still
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write. May your hands be together for eternity.
August 12th, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write. May your hands be together for eternity.
August 12th, 2017 00:27
Love still
FredPeyer said:
Malu, this is a very beautiful way to describe soul mates!
August 11th, 2017 16:20
FredPeyer said:
Malu, this is a very beautiful way to describe soul mates!
August 11th, 2017 16:20
Love still
burning-embers said:
Captivating. Wonderful times recounted here and all of us can relate so easily to your expression. Long may your loves be entwined lovely woman.
August 11th, 2017 16:00
burning-embers said:
Captivating. Wonderful times recounted here and all of us can relate so easily to your expression. Long may your loves be entwined lovely woman.
August 11th, 2017 16:00
Jupiter Farms
FredPeyer said:
Great fun poem Jupiter Farm girl! The picture of the Bougainvillia reminds me that I have to cut mine back, it is getting humongous! But the thorns are such a pain!
August 11th, 2017 11:39
FredPeyer said:
Great fun poem Jupiter Farm girl! The picture of the Bougainvillia reminds me that I have to cut mine back, it is getting humongous! But the thorns are such a pain!
August 11th, 2017 11:39
Jupiter Farms
Goldfinch60 said:
A great fun write, may your life with nature be full of wonder.
August 11th, 2017 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
A great fun write, may your life with nature be full of wonder.
August 11th, 2017 00:29
Jupiter Farms
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MALU ~ You look ready for the Brazilian Soccer season in your AVI ! Florida ~ What a State to be in and JUPITER on the W Coast very tropical ~ my haunt is Tampa on the E Coast ! Love the photo ~ very evocative. You POEM today is really liberated groovin\' and jivin\' with all the crtters ~ WOW Birds & flowers & amphibians ~ love snakes ~ just be glad you lost your pants to the fire ants and not to some Florida Beach Bum ! Love it when I too can live in Harmony with Nature ! Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' ~ Love al fresco ~ BRIAN XOX
August 10th, 2017 18:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MALU ~ You look ready for the Brazilian Soccer season in your AVI ! Florida ~ What a State to be in and JUPITER on the W Coast very tropical ~ my haunt is Tampa on the E Coast ! Love the photo ~ very evocative. You POEM today is really liberated groovin\' and jivin\' with all the crtters ~ WOW Birds & flowers & amphibians ~ love snakes ~ just be glad you lost your pants to the fire ants and not to some Florida Beach Bum ! Love it when I too can live in Harmony with Nature ! Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' ~ Love al fresco ~ BRIAN XOX
August 10th, 2017 18:15
Thoughts
whisperingquill said:
That closing line is magnanimous
Profound and inspiring thank you . 🌟
August 10th, 2017 09:58
whisperingquill said:
That closing line is magnanimous
Profound and inspiring thank you . 🌟
August 10th, 2017 09:58
Thoughts
malubotelho said:
No ego mass but ego mental energy that weighs more than the physical mass. Think about someone running that is a strenuous exercise and carrying a bad mental projection at the same time? What a mess. So, when I go out for running or jogging or even walk I do my best to concentrate on what I\'m doing and enjoy it. I don\'t want any egotistical thought to take place. I just want to be free.
Thanks for stopping by and reading it. Very appreciated.
August 9th, 2017 18:59
malubotelho said:
No ego mass but ego mental energy that weighs more than the physical mass. Think about someone running that is a strenuous exercise and carrying a bad mental projection at the same time? What a mess. So, when I go out for running or jogging or even walk I do my best to concentrate on what I\'m doing and enjoy it. I don\'t want any egotistical thought to take place. I just want to be free.
Thanks for stopping by and reading it. Very appreciated.
August 9th, 2017 18:59
Thoughts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN MALU ~ Four great truisms about: 1. Being an Angel 2. Matters of ~ Life & Death 3. EGO MASS ? 4. FAITH ~ Substance of things hoped for ~ Evidence of things not yet seen ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN
August 9th, 2017 17:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN MALU ~ Four great truisms about: 1. Being an Angel 2. Matters of ~ Life & Death 3. EGO MASS ? 4. FAITH ~ Substance of things hoped for ~ Evidence of things not yet seen ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN
August 9th, 2017 17:54
Thoughts
malubotelho said:
Yes Fay. It is true that the more we live, the less we need. I\'m for that. The simpler, the best. It is also true that the identification with the world of forms or the materialistic world is what make us suffer. Thank you so much for your comments.
August 9th, 2017 14:05
malubotelho said:
Yes Fay. It is true that the more we live, the less we need. I\'m for that. The simpler, the best. It is also true that the identification with the world of forms or the materialistic world is what make us suffer. Thank you so much for your comments.
August 9th, 2017 14:05
Thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely thoughts here Malu and so timely in these troublesome days - keep up the run for lighter spirit and faith will follow. A powerful read.
August 9th, 2017 13:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely thoughts here Malu and so timely in these troublesome days - keep up the run for lighter spirit and faith will follow. A powerful read.
August 9th, 2017 13:33
Thoughts
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poetic talent is expanding, mb, even as your poems have shrunk. These are fine one-liners! Congratulations!
August 9th, 2017 11:56
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poetic talent is expanding, mb, even as your poems have shrunk. These are fine one-liners! Congratulations!
August 9th, 2017 11:56
Thoughts
Michael Edwards said:
Love them - so pleased to see you have a go and such excellent one liners they are.
August 9th, 2017 11:16
Michael Edwards said:
Love them - so pleased to see you have a go and such excellent one liners they are.
August 9th, 2017 11:16
Blue paradise
malubotelho said:
Thank you Gold. Yes, we need it. Comments very appreciated.
August 9th, 2017 06:40
malubotelho said:
Thank you Gold. Yes, we need it. Comments very appreciated.
August 9th, 2017 06:40
Blue paradise
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write the calmness pervades these words.
August 9th, 2017 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write the calmness pervades these words.
August 9th, 2017 00:04
Blue paradise
Michael Edwards said:
Just delightful - read it aloud - err quietly or the family would think I\'m going doolally . Love your photo.
August 8th, 2017 13:12
Michael Edwards said:
Just delightful - read it aloud - err quietly or the family would think I\'m going doolally . Love your photo.
August 8th, 2017 13:12
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