Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Unfair
FredPeyer said:
Malu, lovely work! I do like the comparison in every line. Though I guess you did write this comparing a wife to a concubine, it might also describe a man\'s passion for something else, golf for example. ;-)
July 22nd, 2017 01:19
FredPeyer said:
Malu, lovely work! I do like the comparison in every line. Though I guess you did write this comparing a wife to a concubine, it might also describe a man\'s passion for something else, golf for example. ;-)
July 22nd, 2017 01:19
Unfair
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, the two images you have created are wonderful.
July 22nd, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, the two images you have created are wonderful.
July 22nd, 2017 01:08
Childish head
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each day comes and goes, the better the day the longer we would like it to be.
July 21st, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each day comes and goes, the better the day the longer we would like it to be.
July 21st, 2017 00:43
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FredPeyer said:
Very cute and funny. Nearly sounds like a children\'s rhyme! Well done.
July 20th, 2017 17:54
FredPeyer said:
Very cute and funny. Nearly sounds like a children\'s rhyme! Well done.
July 20th, 2017 17:54
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Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting story! Thank you for sharing it. :)
July 20th, 2017 17:26
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting story! Thank you for sharing it. :)
July 20th, 2017 17:26
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Night & Day are different but mutually exclusive. You can\'t have ONE with the OTHER. I prefer DAY because a more evil breed of Men & Women prefer the Darkness to the Light because their deeds are indeed evil ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Night & Day are different but mutually exclusive. You can\'t have ONE with the OTHER. I prefer DAY because a more evil breed of Men & Women prefer the Darkness to the Light because their deeds are indeed evil ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 16:37
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Michael Edwards said:
Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they never met up.
July 20th, 2017 15:07
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they never met up.
July 20th, 2017 15:07
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Poetic Dan said:
Early bird catches the worm, really liked this, thank you.
July 20th, 2017 13:13
Poetic Dan said:
Early bird catches the worm, really liked this, thank you.
July 20th, 2017 13:13
Love entropy
whisperingquill said:
Damn, eloquence personified
it always whispers with a new sunrise
July 19th, 2017 19:17
whisperingquill said:
Damn, eloquence personified
it always whispers with a new sunrise
July 19th, 2017 19:17
Love entropy
kevin browne said:
such a writer you are I become fascinated who you write such beautiful words even though they are sad. it\'s always a love to read your work. great passion.
July 19th, 2017 15:11
kevin browne said:
such a writer you are I become fascinated who you write such beautiful words even though they are sad. it\'s always a love to read your work. great passion.
July 19th, 2017 15:11
Love entropy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ we all love you ! BUT ~ That\'s the story of ~ that\'s the glory of ~ that\'s the strife of ~ the short lived life of ~ the twisted knife of LOVE ! Thinking of you Sweetheart ~ Hugs as always BRIAN
July 19th, 2017 14:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ we all love you ! BUT ~ That\'s the story of ~ that\'s the glory of ~ that\'s the strife of ~ the short lived life of ~ the twisted knife of LOVE ! Thinking of you Sweetheart ~ Hugs as always BRIAN
July 19th, 2017 14:28
Love entropy
burning-embers said:
Malubotelho A sad but recurring event in our lifes. Rejoice!!! for the soil is fertile.... and the sun rains its life giving rays upon us. Each morning brings that windblown seed which may fall at our feet and if we reach down and nurture it........ surely a new love will flourish. Yours is a lovely thought provoking write.
July 19th, 2017 13:00
burning-embers said:
Malubotelho A sad but recurring event in our lifes. Rejoice!!! for the soil is fertile.... and the sun rains its life giving rays upon us. Each morning brings that windblown seed which may fall at our feet and if we reach down and nurture it........ surely a new love will flourish. Yours is a lovely thought provoking write.
July 19th, 2017 13:00
Love entropy
Michael Edwards said:
Although full of very little its full of punch - full of admiration for this simple little verse.
July 19th, 2017 12:39
Michael Edwards said:
Although full of very little its full of punch - full of admiration for this simple little verse.
July 19th, 2017 12:39
Love entropy
Fay Slimm. said:
How succinctly true these lines about love - unnurtured it dies and that is so sad. A haunt of a read my friend.
July 19th, 2017 12:26
Fay Slimm. said:
How succinctly true these lines about love - unnurtured it dies and that is so sad. A haunt of a read my friend.
July 19th, 2017 12:26
Solution
Renzi said:
You are a wonderful human being and everybody in life wants a bit of your time. Your kindness shines brightly here and your support is appreciated so very much. Time is on your side, its your time now, for you to do what feels right, comfortable 💓 Never rush. You\'re a fine writer. All my love and luck 💓
July 19th, 2017 04:09
Renzi said:
You are a wonderful human being and everybody in life wants a bit of your time. Your kindness shines brightly here and your support is appreciated so very much. Time is on your side, its your time now, for you to do what feels right, comfortable 💓 Never rush. You\'re a fine writer. All my love and luck 💓
July 19th, 2017 04:09
Solution
malubotelho said:
Thanks my friend. I will never stop because writing for me is like dancing 💃 it is a flow. I just love when sometimes I feel like it is sliding nicely. So good. I will try to learn and improve. I\'m creating a dictionary with words and meaning for myself. Like you said: writing is a way of learning.
July 18th, 2017 12:40
malubotelho said:
Thanks my friend. I will never stop because writing for me is like dancing 💃 it is a flow. I just love when sometimes I feel like it is sliding nicely. So good. I will try to learn and improve. I\'m creating a dictionary with words and meaning for myself. Like you said: writing is a way of learning.
July 18th, 2017 12:40
Solution
Michael Edwards said:
More words in English than any other and still I often struggle for the right word - you are not alone but whatever else just keep writing its the only way to learn,
July 18th, 2017 12:18
Michael Edwards said:
More words in English than any other and still I often struggle for the right word - you are not alone but whatever else just keep writing its the only way to learn,
July 18th, 2017 12:18
Solution
malubotelho said:
Thanks you Cat. I must say you have a great contribution yourself. I believe we are here to live and support each other and to make the world a better place. I truly dedicate all my time to please others because this is also the way I can be pleased. I will be coming back as much as I can to interact with people in this great forum. Thanks for your support and your so kind words.
July 18th, 2017 11:25
malubotelho said:
Thanks you Cat. I must say you have a great contribution yourself. I believe we are here to live and support each other and to make the world a better place. I truly dedicate all my time to please others because this is also the way I can be pleased. I will be coming back as much as I can to interact with people in this great forum. Thanks for your support and your so kind words.
July 18th, 2017 11:25
Solution
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Another great Poem MALU ~ a great message from your HEART ~ Not enough Time ~ love the structure of the Poem replete with rhyme & rhythm as a good poem should ! We all get 168 hours each week ~ where on earth do they all go ? Be back soon ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN Your English is much better than my Portuguese ABRACOS E BEIJOS ~ BRIAN
July 18th, 2017 10:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Another great Poem MALU ~ a great message from your HEART ~ Not enough Time ~ love the structure of the Poem replete with rhyme & rhythm as a good poem should ! We all get 168 hours each week ~ where on earth do they all go ? Be back soon ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN Your English is much better than my Portuguese ABRACOS E BEIJOS ~ BRIAN
July 18th, 2017 10:23
Solution
FredPeyer said:
Malu, I do understand where you are coming from. I guess you could say we are in the same boat. I know that a lot of people my age are retired, but for me being retired would be like being dead!
I have a business I love, am good at, and right now am busy as heck. I am in the middle of renovating my house, help my wife with her business, try to skype with and go see my grand-children as often as I can, and now got involved in and love this forum. TV? What\'s that? And finally, about that darned English: Not my mother tongue either, but after so many years living with it I guess it has become my step-mother tongue. Problem is that I cannot write anymore very well in my mother tongue and am not yet good enough in my step-mother tongue. Talk about sitting between two chairs!
July 18th, 2017 10:20
FredPeyer said:
Malu, I do understand where you are coming from. I guess you could say we are in the same boat. I know that a lot of people my age are retired, but for me being retired would be like being dead!
I have a business I love, am good at, and right now am busy as heck. I am in the middle of renovating my house, help my wife with her business, try to skype with and go see my grand-children as often as I can, and now got involved in and love this forum. TV? What\'s that? And finally, about that darned English: Not my mother tongue either, but after so many years living with it I guess it has become my step-mother tongue. Problem is that I cannot write anymore very well in my mother tongue and am not yet good enough in my step-mother tongue. Talk about sitting between two chairs!
July 18th, 2017 10:20
Solution
onepauly said:
the solution will be found. time will take care of all our ills. if not today, then perhaps tomorrow. all we have to do is wait.
July 18th, 2017 08:42
onepauly said:
the solution will be found. time will take care of all our ills. if not today, then perhaps tomorrow. all we have to do is wait.
July 18th, 2017 08:42
Solution
kevin browne said:
make sure you do malubotelho because your poetry is fabulous and it wouldn\'t be the same without you. why don\'t you forget about the rthyme and rhyming and go free style verses for a while and see how you get along. I love the beat poet format because it allows to make use of more words rather that thinking of words that rhyme. good luck either way x
July 18th, 2017 08:31
kevin browne said:
make sure you do malubotelho because your poetry is fabulous and it wouldn\'t be the same without you. why don\'t you forget about the rthyme and rhyming and go free style verses for a while and see how you get along. I love the beat poet format because it allows to make use of more words rather that thinking of words that rhyme. good luck either way x
July 18th, 2017 08:31
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