Comments received on poems by malubotelho
I just wanted to fly
burning-embers said:
I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces origins. Maybe god was telling you he wanted you to continue your path in your present location. Sometimes it difficult to believe there is a \'hell\' anyway.
July 25th, 2017 04:15
burning-embers said:
I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces origins. Maybe god was telling you he wanted you to continue your path in your present location. Sometimes it difficult to believe there is a \'hell\' anyway.
July 25th, 2017 04:15
I just wanted to fly
Fay Slimm. said:
We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so good for our future - a fine piece of imagery which set many thinking including myself - - thank you for sharing your experience dear Malu and I hope that broken arm is healing too.
July 25th, 2017 02:41
Fay Slimm. said:
We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so good for our future - a fine piece of imagery which set many thinking including myself - - thank you for sharing your experience dear Malu and I hope that broken arm is healing too.
July 25th, 2017 02:41
I just wanted to fly
Michael Edwards said:
I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message - nice one Malu.
July 25th, 2017 00:27
Michael Edwards said:
I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message - nice one Malu.
July 25th, 2017 00:27
I just wanted to fly
malubotelho said:
Thanks Robert. I think anything that makes us suffer is hell. This is why I was grateful somehow that I had that little accident that broke my arm, other ways I would had committed a big mistake.
July 24th, 2017 22:15
malubotelho said:
Thanks Robert. I think anything that makes us suffer is hell. This is why I was grateful somehow that I had that little accident that broke my arm, other ways I would had committed a big mistake.
July 24th, 2017 22:15
I just wanted to fly
kevin browne said:
I am so happy that you cant fly to hell because Heaven is your home along side all of Gods beautiful people. you are one of those beautiful people and a beautiful poetic writer also x
July 24th, 2017 18:22
kevin browne said:
I am so happy that you cant fly to hell because Heaven is your home along side all of Gods beautiful people. you are one of those beautiful people and a beautiful poetic writer also x
July 24th, 2017 18:22
I just wanted to fly
Azura Nightsong said:
I suppose i feel this poem in a metaphorical sense in the very least.
The wings will come in time.
Great poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:18
Azura Nightsong said:
I suppose i feel this poem in a metaphorical sense in the very least.
The wings will come in time.
Great poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:18
I just wanted to fly
FredPeyer said:
Good writing Malu, as usual, but the ending surprised me. I thought you wanted to fly high, but for hell you have to go the other way.
July 24th, 2017 16:21
FredPeyer said:
Good writing Malu, as usual, but the ending surprised me. I thought you wanted to fly high, but for hell you have to go the other way.
July 24th, 2017 16:21
Perhaps
Frank Prem said:
Very melancholy, but well put together for the reader, I think.
Enjoyed.
July 22nd, 2017 21:16
Frank Prem said:
Very melancholy, but well put together for the reader, I think.
Enjoyed.
July 22nd, 2017 21:16
Perhaps
Heather T said:
Emotive wrote, sweet lady. Something in this squeezed my heart.
July 22nd, 2017 19:27
Heather T said:
Emotive wrote, sweet lady. Something in this squeezed my heart.
July 22nd, 2017 19:27
Perhaps
FredPeyer said:
What you should not let rest is your writing! Another great poem. Thank you.
July 22nd, 2017 18:45
FredPeyer said:
What you should not let rest is your writing! Another great poem. Thank you.
July 22nd, 2017 18:45
Unfair
burning-embers said:
aah the trade off, which is the more important? which is the more tempting? for which one to settle?
do we ever really settle?
July 22nd, 2017 13:36
burning-embers said:
aah the trade off, which is the more important? which is the more tempting? for which one to settle?
do we ever really settle?
July 22nd, 2017 13:36
Unfair
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of sincere appeal for love to look again at the blessings it has. A powerful comparison to put before those who waver - -thank you for sharing it Malu
July 22nd, 2017 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of sincere appeal for love to look again at the blessings it has. A powerful comparison to put before those who waver - -thank you for sharing it Malu
July 22nd, 2017 03:07
Unfair
FredPeyer said:
Malu, lovely work! I do like the comparison in every line. Though I guess you did write this comparing a wife to a concubine, it might also describe a man\'s passion for something else, golf for example. ;-)
July 22nd, 2017 01:19
FredPeyer said:
Malu, lovely work! I do like the comparison in every line. Though I guess you did write this comparing a wife to a concubine, it might also describe a man\'s passion for something else, golf for example. ;-)
July 22nd, 2017 01:19
Unfair
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, the two images you have created are wonderful.
July 22nd, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, the two images you have created are wonderful.
July 22nd, 2017 01:08
Childish head
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each day comes and goes, the better the day the longer we would like it to be.
July 21st, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each day comes and goes, the better the day the longer we would like it to be.
July 21st, 2017 00:43
Childish head
FredPeyer said:
Very cute and funny. Nearly sounds like a children\'s rhyme! Well done.
July 20th, 2017 17:54
FredPeyer said:
Very cute and funny. Nearly sounds like a children\'s rhyme! Well done.
July 20th, 2017 17:54
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Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting story! Thank you for sharing it. :)
July 20th, 2017 17:26
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting story! Thank you for sharing it. :)
July 20th, 2017 17:26
Childish head
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Night & Day are different but mutually exclusive. You can\'t have ONE with the OTHER. I prefer DAY because a more evil breed of Men & Women prefer the Darkness to the Light because their deeds are indeed evil ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Night & Day are different but mutually exclusive. You can\'t have ONE with the OTHER. I prefer DAY because a more evil breed of Men & Women prefer the Darkness to the Light because their deeds are indeed evil ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN
July 20th, 2017 16:37
Childish head
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they never met up.
July 20th, 2017 15:07
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they never met up.
July 20th, 2017 15:07
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Poetic Dan said:
Early bird catches the worm, really liked this, thank you.
July 20th, 2017 13:13
Poetic Dan said:
Early bird catches the worm, really liked this, thank you.
July 20th, 2017 13:13
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