He made her
burning-embers said:

You write beautifully malubotelho. What a fine lover your subject has, how could she do anything but love him. A real smoothie - class.

August 20th, 2017 09:19

He made her
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Wonderful MALU ~ Sometimes we mere men can lift a Lady onto Higher Ground. This poem is a Sonnet to that ~ thank you ! By linguistic skill and metaphor it is Sensual but NOT erotic ~ titillating but NOT pornographic ~ experiential but NOT clinical ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Love the visual it is a perfect compliment to a perfect poem ! Sunday Hugs ~ BRIAN

August 20th, 2017 09:06

He made her
malubotelho said:

Thanks Outback.

August 20th, 2017 08:38

Thirst
burning-embers said:

I know that feeling, you could have written this just for me right now..... oh how i need that clear bottle. Teaser!

August 18th, 2017 13:53

Thirst
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MALU ~ God has promised to supply all our needs ~ but not our greeds ! Love the PIC & POEM ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my new FUSION on Animals ~ Thank B.

August 18th, 2017 11:16

Crystal
Goldfinch60 said:

May that crystal shine like these words.

August 18th, 2017 00:51

Crystal
FredPeyer said:

Malu, this one-liner is excellent!
You might have added \'because I am worth it!\'

August 17th, 2017 17:14

Crystal
Nicholas Browning said:

That picture is stunning.
The write is also outstanding.

August 17th, 2017 10:11

Rising tides
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow fabulous.! But poignant end all so poetic. I admire how much u can say in brevity. Intense apt imagery painted in words. Kudos.

Do have a look at my writings too, But comment only on the one u like best. I write on many sites and they do enjoy my poetry or get Sth from it.

August 17th, 2017 00:32

Rising tides
WL Schuett said:

Beautiful and sad....

August 16th, 2017 16:58

Rising tides
FredPeyer said:

Living on an island, your lovely poem reminded me of a few instances where people were swept out to sea, never to be found again. That\'s why never turn your back to the ocean.
I really like how you ended the poem \'for them, the next day, never came by\'. So we must enjoy and make the best out of today!

August 16th, 2017 10:23

Rising tides
malubotelho said:

Thanks Louis. Yes, you are totally right. Sweet and sad. And true. It happened.

August 16th, 2017 07:24

One more
burning-embers said:

Hmmmm odd the way i relate to this as i come out of a mist malubotelho. I\'m ready to ship my emotions to some not too far away recipient any time now..... oh yes.... i should be so lucky.

August 15th, 2017 20:30

One more
FredPeyer said:

Four little lines, Malu, that can say so much. When the order is filled, on to the next. When the relationship is over, on to the next. When the grieving is done, out from the list!

August 15th, 2017 16:57

I\'m your girl
burning-embers said:

In your writings i have met you. In this piece i have fallen to your wiles and you have won me several times. I\'m smiling broadly here Malubotelho, for does it not show in many of my writings? Excellent and a cheerful smiling piece to read.

August 13th, 2017 21:47