Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Still Frames
dusk arising said:
The enigmatic time problem. So many ways to question time aren\'t there. I like and agree with each of your observations. Mostly the past (like the time taken to type this) is irrelevant in our lives.. gone forgotten swish... next etc... but there are certain deeds we do which carry a timestamp and remains ever present..... and time is also a great healer.... or am I falling over hackneyed phrases. TIME phew!... what a subject Fred.
Needless to say you dragged me right in with this post. Very enjoyable.
March 8th, 2021 02:08
dusk arising said:
The enigmatic time problem. So many ways to question time aren\'t there. I like and agree with each of your observations. Mostly the past (like the time taken to type this) is irrelevant in our lives.. gone forgotten swish... next etc... but there are certain deeds we do which carry a timestamp and remains ever present..... and time is also a great healer.... or am I falling over hackneyed phrases. TIME phew!... what a subject Fred.
Needless to say you dragged me right in with this post. Very enjoyable.
March 8th, 2021 02:08
Still Frames
Goldfinch60 said:
May those unknown future frames be always filled with joy and love.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May those unknown future frames be always filled with joy and love.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:38
Still Frames
jarcher54 said:
The interplay between poetry/words and images is always tantalizing to consider. I enjoyed your little conceit here and the past-present-future observations. Relativity indeed. Growing up, I would wander in the fields on a dark night, the only light the stars casting a pale sheen on the dry grass... I would stop, raise my arms, and contemplate that then and there, in my little neck of the woods, where and as I stood, was the center of the universe, of all time and space.
March 8th, 2021 01:34
jarcher54 said:
The interplay between poetry/words and images is always tantalizing to consider. I enjoyed your little conceit here and the past-present-future observations. Relativity indeed. Growing up, I would wander in the fields on a dark night, the only light the stars casting a pale sheen on the dry grass... I would stop, raise my arms, and contemplate that then and there, in my little neck of the woods, where and as I stood, was the center of the universe, of all time and space.
March 8th, 2021 01:34
Embers & I hear her Smile
FredPeyer said:
LOL, and I can give you a discount as well! Thanks so much Neville!
March 6th, 2021 11:05
FredPeyer said:
LOL, and I can give you a discount as well! Thanks so much Neville!
March 6th, 2021 11:05
Embers & I hear her Smile
Neville said:
write said Ned to Fred ... two for the price of one ... great value and both very much enjoyed sir .. n truly ... Neville
March 6th, 2021 11:01
Neville said:
write said Ned to Fred ... two for the price of one ... great value and both very much enjoyed sir .. n truly ... Neville
March 6th, 2021 11:01
Embers & I hear her Smile
SureshG said:
Memories transformed as minds sense perception, just as your words
March 6th, 2021 10:46
SureshG said:
Memories transformed as minds sense perception, just as your words
March 6th, 2021 10:46
The Freeway in my Head
FredPeyer said:
Thank you yellowrose! You are right, we don\'t seem to have control over our brain and sometimes it is very difficult to relax.
March 6th, 2021 10:25
FredPeyer said:
Thank you yellowrose! You are right, we don\'t seem to have control over our brain and sometimes it is very difficult to relax.
March 6th, 2021 10:25
Embers & I hear her Smile
dusk arising said:
True love lives on within us. But what does it make of us.... all we have is to follow our honest emotion. Led by our poetic heart.
A great emotional write Fred.
March 6th, 2021 05:00
dusk arising said:
True love lives on within us. But what does it make of us.... all we have is to follow our honest emotion. Led by our poetic heart.
A great emotional write Fred.
March 6th, 2021 05:00
The Freeway in my Head
Caring dove said:
Great expression ! 🙂 it’s difficult when we have so many thoughts going on ... how can we feel truly peaceful with all that ?
March 6th, 2021 02:47
Caring dove said:
Great expression ! 🙂 it’s difficult when we have so many thoughts going on ... how can we feel truly peaceful with all that ?
March 6th, 2021 02:47
The Leap
Caring dove said:
Brilliant start to a poem ... I especially llkr the first two lines . And the first verse .
Good flow to this ...liked this poem ... well expressed
March 6th, 2021 02:25
Caring dove said:
Brilliant start to a poem ... I especially llkr the first two lines . And the first verse .
Good flow to this ...liked this poem ... well expressed
March 6th, 2021 02:25
Embers & I hear her Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Fred. I am putting a love poem up as well today.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Fred. I am putting a love poem up as well today.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 01:49
Embers & I hear her Smile
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t normally comment on love poems Fred... Yours came to my notice owing to it\'s position on the list.
Nice juxtaposition of two aspects of a long term relationship.
Found third stanza of Embers particularly true and poignant.
March 6th, 2021 00:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t normally comment on love poems Fred... Yours came to my notice owing to it\'s position on the list.
Nice juxtaposition of two aspects of a long term relationship.
Found third stanza of Embers particularly true and poignant.
March 6th, 2021 00:24
The Miracle of Life
L. B. Mek said:
\'the warm salty water cuddling me like a womb
releasing primeval sensations of belonging and being
at one with the mystical wonder of creation
my mind feels at home, comfortable, loved\'..
Brilliant!
behold, a poet utilising that confidence excavated from \'wasted\' hours before blank pages and those broken backspace and delete keys..
flexing - as that hindered creativity begins to stretch and reach for all the potential: awaiting to be unleashed!
keep striving dear poet, soar within your wings of ink,
Mahalo Fred
March 1st, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'the warm salty water cuddling me like a womb
releasing primeval sensations of belonging and being
at one with the mystical wonder of creation
my mind feels at home, comfortable, loved\'..
Brilliant!
behold, a poet utilising that confidence excavated from \'wasted\' hours before blank pages and those broken backspace and delete keys..
flexing - as that hindered creativity begins to stretch and reach for all the potential: awaiting to be unleashed!
keep striving dear poet, soar within your wings of ink,
Mahalo Fred
March 1st, 2021 05:49
The Miracle of Life
orchidee said:
Great write Fred.
Ain\'t no life here: *points to space between the two sides of me skull*: no-one at home there, though the lights are on!\' lol.
March 1st, 2021 02:52
orchidee said:
Great write Fred.
Ain\'t no life here: *points to space between the two sides of me skull*: no-one at home there, though the lights are on!\' lol.
March 1st, 2021 02:52
The Miracle of Life
Poetic Dan said:
Boom you\'ll never be forgotten as you impacted me and that ripple will go on for eternity
Thank you for sharing your outstanding soul, see you in the ocean when our spirits leave these vessels
March 1st, 2021 02:04
Poetic Dan said:
Boom you\'ll never be forgotten as you impacted me and that ripple will go on for eternity
Thank you for sharing your outstanding soul, see you in the ocean when our spirits leave these vessels
March 1st, 2021 02:04
The Miracle of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fred, those times alone walking with natures wonder can bring such wonderful peace into our hearts and minds.
Andy
March 1st, 2021 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fred, those times alone walking with natures wonder can bring such wonderful peace into our hearts and minds.
Andy
March 1st, 2021 01:57
The Miracle of Life
FredPeyer said:
Mahalo Dave, coming from a writer like you your comment means a lot!
February 28th, 2021 17:54
FredPeyer said:
Mahalo Dave, coming from a writer like you your comment means a lot!
February 28th, 2021 17:54
The Miracle of Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Fred, what a beauty! After the first stanza I thought \'I must make special mention of this\'...then the second... and the third.
Got me where it counts...
February 28th, 2021 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Fred, what a beauty! After the first stanza I thought \'I must make special mention of this\'...then the second... and the third.
Got me where it counts...
February 28th, 2021 17:36
The Miracle of Life
A Boy With Roses said:
beautiful and pensive cerebration
February 28th, 2021 16:10
A Boy With Roses said:
beautiful and pensive cerebration
February 28th, 2021 16:10
Bad Advise
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Neville! You are absolutely right, and I just realized that I contradicted myself by giving people advise not to take any advise! Ah well.....:-)
February 28th, 2021 13:36
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Neville! You are absolutely right, and I just realized that I contradicted myself by giving people advise not to take any advise! Ah well.....:-)
February 28th, 2021 13:36
Bad Advise
Neville said:
Not everyone will take kindly to advice, but I am sure if your intentions are honourable which no doubt they are, many will live to rue the day they ignored the message you left for them here .......
February 27th, 2021 13:26
Neville said:
Not everyone will take kindly to advice, but I am sure if your intentions are honourable which no doubt they are, many will live to rue the day they ignored the message you left for them here .......
February 27th, 2021 13:26
Cheap Soup
Neville said:
There is something frighteningly real here wrapped up in a poem .. Cheers ..
February 22nd, 2021 17:11
Neville said:
There is something frighteningly real here wrapped up in a poem .. Cheers ..
February 22nd, 2021 17:11
Bad Advise
L. B. Mek said:
at least this started poetic in tone, lol
I can empathise with your frustrations Fred
always good to let it out
February 22nd, 2021 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
at least this started poetic in tone, lol
I can empathise with your frustrations Fred
always good to let it out
February 22nd, 2021 06:25
Bad Advise
dusk arising said:
We see this all to often, even here on MPS. I\'m as guilty as any one in handing out advice too but I do try to imagine what would be a wholesome outcome should my advice be taken.
Will your words be absorbed by the knee-jerkers with their advice one wonders.
February 22nd, 2021 04:17
dusk arising said:
We see this all to often, even here on MPS. I\'m as guilty as any one in handing out advice too but I do try to imagine what would be a wholesome outcome should my advice be taken.
Will your words be absorbed by the knee-jerkers with their advice one wonders.
February 22nd, 2021 04:17
Bad Advise
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
Yet that does not give the other person licence to bop us one - or two - them cheeks!
Similar to - if one hand offends you, cut if off. But we will still have the other hand that can offend too. Doh! It\'s an expression exaggerated for emphasis though, to root out wrong things, not meant literally.
February 22nd, 2021 03:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
Yet that does not give the other person licence to bop us one - or two - them cheeks!
Similar to - if one hand offends you, cut if off. But we will still have the other hand that can offend too. Doh! It\'s an expression exaggerated for emphasis though, to root out wrong things, not meant literally.
February 22nd, 2021 03:03
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