Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Freeway in my Head
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know quite how to tackle this Fred - It is a very rich description of mental disturbance and despair - I just hope It\'s an imaginative exercise and not something you are experiencing right now.
January 28th, 2021 01:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know quite how to tackle this Fred - It is a very rich description of mental disturbance and despair - I just hope It\'s an imaginative exercise and not something you are experiencing right now.
January 28th, 2021 01:03
Stunningly Clear Vistas
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a fantastical journey within words...
really well executed, a great write!
January 26th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a fantastical journey within words...
really well executed, a great write!
January 26th, 2021 05:37
Stunningly Clear Vistas
Fay Slimm. said:
This superb piece of poetry has to be one of your best Fred and it goes straight into my list of faves - - great read.
January 26th, 2021 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
This superb piece of poetry has to be one of your best Fred and it goes straight into my list of faves - - great read.
January 26th, 2021 04:18
Stunningly Clear Vistas
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna climb a tree, then I will see all that you\'re seeing too, from that view up there. lol.
January 26th, 2021 02:58
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna climb a tree, then I will see all that you\'re seeing too, from that view up there. lol.
January 26th, 2021 02:58
Stunningly Clear Vistas
Goldfinch60 said:
That untrodden path ahead is full of wonder, keep walking it.
Andy
January 26th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That untrodden path ahead is full of wonder, keep walking it.
Andy
January 26th, 2021 02:04
Ordinary Art
Nancy Rdz LL said:
For mad?? I am full of WRATH, !!!
The purity of thy art
That not even in year\'s will it pass
For all is done, all is made, all is created
Humans cremated, secrets and sins hidden in a dark heart.
My mad comment hope you like, and liked this poem a lot cause we all mad and that\'s what makes art and poetry so original and alluring to see. Good job hun 🤗
January 25th, 2021 23:50
Nancy Rdz LL said:
For mad?? I am full of WRATH, !!!
The purity of thy art
That not even in year\'s will it pass
For all is done, all is made, all is created
Humans cremated, secrets and sins hidden in a dark heart.
My mad comment hope you like, and liked this poem a lot cause we all mad and that\'s what makes art and poetry so original and alluring to see. Good job hun 🤗
January 25th, 2021 23:50
New Year\'s Resolutions
L. B. Mek said:
these here, be a perfect go-to example of \'lived-in\' words of wisdom,
a wonderfully unique take on an age-old problem
and yes, in most things: acceptance is key, I too agree
January 25th, 2021 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
these here, be a perfect go-to example of \'lived-in\' words of wisdom,
a wonderfully unique take on an age-old problem
and yes, in most things: acceptance is key, I too agree
January 25th, 2021 06:54
New Year\'s Resolutions
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Fred - thanks for the smile.
January 25th, 2021 03:04
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Fred - thanks for the smile.
January 25th, 2021 03:04
New Year\'s Resolutions
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine are written in my mind so they are soon forgotten.
Andy
January 25th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine are written in my mind so they are soon forgotten.
Andy
January 25th, 2021 01:58
New Year\'s Resolutions
dusk arising said:
My new years resolution....I write them in the snow and wait till its warmed up a bit to go see what i wrote.
January 25th, 2021 00:08
dusk arising said:
My new years resolution....I write them in the snow and wait till its warmed up a bit to go see what i wrote.
January 25th, 2021 00:08
New Year\'s Resolutions
Doggerel Dave said:
If at first you don\'t succeed, at least give someone (me) an empathic chuckle....
January 24th, 2021 22:45
Doggerel Dave said:
If at first you don\'t succeed, at least give someone (me) an empathic chuckle....
January 24th, 2021 22:45
New Year\'s Resolutions
TS said:
Love and perseverance is all that is needed
January 24th, 2021 19:57
TS said:
Love and perseverance is all that is needed
January 24th, 2021 19:57
who are we
ron parrish aka wordman said:
masters of our domain,lol more lke school
January 19th, 2021 15:45
ron parrish aka wordman said:
masters of our domain,lol more lke school
January 19th, 2021 15:45
who are we
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... everything and nothing all in one place. Insignificant yet can feel all the universe on the tip of our fingers!
Fantastic work my friend
Always appreciated
January 19th, 2021 10:41
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... everything and nothing all in one place. Insignificant yet can feel all the universe on the tip of our fingers!
Fantastic work my friend
Always appreciated
January 19th, 2021 10:41
Ephemeral
Fay Slimm. said:
Wholly agree with every line of your perceptive write Fred and like D.A. this one must go into my faves.
January 18th, 2021 09:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Wholly agree with every line of your perceptive write Fred and like D.A. this one must go into my faves.
January 18th, 2021 09:12
Ephemeral
L. B. Mek said:
\'but we do not
accept nature
in our lives
we crave
permanence
we fight
even kill for
ownership
unable to
let go
unwilling to
admit the
transience
of everything\'
agree with your sentiments in these words completely: acceptance is key,
mind you that doesn\'t mean we simply surrender though...
thanks for sharing an insightful perspective of existence - in general, but more importantly - a realisable mindset to guide our lives and what meaning we can glean from our experiences, ephemeral - indeed...
January 18th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'but we do not
accept nature
in our lives
we crave
permanence
we fight
even kill for
ownership
unable to
let go
unwilling to
admit the
transience
of everything\'
agree with your sentiments in these words completely: acceptance is key,
mind you that doesn\'t mean we simply surrender though...
thanks for sharing an insightful perspective of existence - in general, but more importantly - a realisable mindset to guide our lives and what meaning we can glean from our experiences, ephemeral - indeed...
January 18th, 2021 05:14
Ephemeral
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. I see you\'re embracing that tree!
January 18th, 2021 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. I see you\'re embracing that tree!
January 18th, 2021 02:59
Ephemeral
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, being one with nature is wondrous.
Andy
January 18th, 2021 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, being one with nature is wondrous.
Andy
January 18th, 2021 02:23
Ephemeral
dusk arising said:
I think you clearly identify how mankind has attempted to detach itself from the natural laws of existence. Hence we are destroying the planet.
So profound. This must go into my favourites.
January 17th, 2021 19:25
dusk arising said:
I think you clearly identify how mankind has attempted to detach itself from the natural laws of existence. Hence we are destroying the planet.
So profound. This must go into my favourites.
January 17th, 2021 19:25
A Piece of Cake
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Neville, and I am glad you told me how to walk. My wife hardly recognized me as I staggered into the living room with my chest so far out I couldn\'t see a darned thing!
January 17th, 2021 12:42
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Neville, and I am glad you told me how to walk. My wife hardly recognized me as I staggered into the living room with my chest so far out I couldn\'t see a darned thing!
January 17th, 2021 12:42
A Piece of Cake
Neville said:
its all in the mind ... well some of it is innit .. the rest is general wear and tear ... who said it was gonna be a walk in the park ... chin up, chest out, shoulders back and plod on as best ya can .... I am glad I paused to take a peek at your page today ...
Neville
January 17th, 2021 12:37
Neville said:
its all in the mind ... well some of it is innit .. the rest is general wear and tear ... who said it was gonna be a walk in the park ... chin up, chest out, shoulders back and plod on as best ya can .... I am glad I paused to take a peek at your page today ...
Neville
January 17th, 2021 12:37
who are we
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Andy! And does the Universe care about that little speck?
January 17th, 2021 11:59
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Andy! And does the Universe care about that little speck?
January 17th, 2021 11:59
who are we
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fred, we are merely a speck in the Universe.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fred, we are merely a speck in the Universe.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:30
who are we
dusk arising said:
Nice one. I agree with you but sssshhh - you\'ll upset the christians.
January 16th, 2021 17:30
dusk arising said:
Nice one. I agree with you but sssshhh - you\'ll upset the christians.
January 16th, 2021 17:30
who are we
Doggerel Dave said:
With you all the way, Fred - and further
to infinite time and space, our existence, consciousness an unfathomable joke, really
January 16th, 2021 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
With you all the way, Fred - and further
to infinite time and space, our existence, consciousness an unfathomable joke, really
January 16th, 2021 17:28
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