Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Solitude
Doggerel Dave said:
Got it. I\'m there too - somewhere like that. Neatly done - thanks.
February 11th, 2021 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Got it. I\'m there too - somewhere like that. Neatly done - thanks.
February 11th, 2021 18:41
Solitude
RDS said:
A nice rhythmic essay of a poetic perspective. Many people might say they \"...hate the idea of loneliness...\" and compound negatives.
February 11th, 2021 17:29
RDS said:
A nice rhythmic essay of a poetic perspective. Many people might say they \"...hate the idea of loneliness...\" and compound negatives.
February 11th, 2021 17:29
From First to Last
L. B. Mek said:
sad, those who find an easy path at the beginning of their lives, tend: to waver and stray, when time\'s - inevitably, get \'uglier\'...
a searching read you\'ve penned dear Poet,
thanks for sharing
February 9th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
sad, those who find an easy path at the beginning of their lives, tend: to waver and stray, when time\'s - inevitably, get \'uglier\'...
a searching read you\'ve penned dear Poet,
thanks for sharing
February 9th, 2021 05:27
From First to Last
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Too High Too Fast Too Soon (Mike Scott)
Excellent write I think we all knew someone like that? partly why we are still here
Bravo
February 9th, 2021 04:02
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Too High Too Fast Too Soon (Mike Scott)
Excellent write I think we all knew someone like that? partly why we are still here
Bravo
February 9th, 2021 04:02
From First to Last
orchidee said:
Doh! The Good Book says as much: \'The first will be last, and the last shall be first\'.
I was first every year - still am - in The World\'s Worst singer Contest. lol.
February 9th, 2021 02:53
orchidee said:
Doh! The Good Book says as much: \'The first will be last, and the last shall be first\'.
I was first every year - still am - in The World\'s Worst singer Contest. lol.
February 9th, 2021 02:53
From First to Last
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes there are those out there that start off better than we are but push themselves into a dreadful future.
Andy
February 9th, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes there are those out there that start off better than we are but push themselves into a dreadful future.
Andy
February 9th, 2021 01:24
From First to Last
AlitaOpal said:
Dare to live.. that\'s me.. no fear.. love this 🌹
February 8th, 2021 22:34
AlitaOpal said:
Dare to live.. that\'s me.. no fear.. love this 🌹
February 8th, 2021 22:34
From First to Last
Doggerel Dave said:
No boundaries - You\'ve said it all, Fred.
February 8th, 2021 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
No boundaries - You\'ve said it all, Fred.
February 8th, 2021 19:14
From First to Last
FredPeyer said:
Thanks dusk, what happened to the other leg?
February 8th, 2021 16:02
FredPeyer said:
Thanks dusk, what happened to the other leg?
February 8th, 2021 16:02
From First to Last
dusk arising said:
Reminds me of a one legged daredevil I once knew.
February 8th, 2021 15:53
dusk arising said:
Reminds me of a one legged daredevil I once knew.
February 8th, 2021 15:53
What happened to my dreams?
SureshG said:
Dream, that all I seem to do now is dream. During the hours lit by sun, yes, daydream, and when my head rests on the pillow - just dreams. And as you have walked us through the life\'s journey, that\'s all that\'s left is dream.
February 3rd, 2021 13:38
SureshG said:
Dream, that all I seem to do now is dream. During the hours lit by sun, yes, daydream, and when my head rests on the pillow - just dreams. And as you have walked us through the life\'s journey, that\'s all that\'s left is dream.
February 3rd, 2021 13:38
What happened to my dreams?
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Sam, always wanted to ride a motorcycle from Alaska to the southern tip of South America. Guess that train left.
February 1st, 2021 16:48
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Sam, always wanted to ride a motorcycle from Alaska to the southern tip of South America. Guess that train left.
February 1st, 2021 16:48
What happened to my dreams?
dusk arising said:
I avoid the mirror these days Fred. It always seems to want to start an argument with me. Even on a good day it just takes the piss.
Very enjoyable read Fred. I can most definitely relate to it. These later years bring us acceptance and forgiveness as we relax into the mould our life has left us in.
February 1st, 2021 03:25
dusk arising said:
I avoid the mirror these days Fred. It always seems to want to start an argument with me. Even on a good day it just takes the piss.
Very enjoyable read Fred. I can most definitely relate to it. These later years bring us acceptance and forgiveness as we relax into the mould our life has left us in.
February 1st, 2021 03:25
What happened to my dreams?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fred but those dreams of our youth forged the path ahead for us and on that path there were many different roads taken and maybe did not follow those dreams but we have both reached that age (72 for both of us) where we are still here and have a happy life in spite of not reaching our dreams.
I often think would I have had my life in a different way and the answer is always no as my life has always been good.
Andy
February 1st, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fred but those dreams of our youth forged the path ahead for us and on that path there were many different roads taken and maybe did not follow those dreams but we have both reached that age (72 for both of us) where we are still here and have a happy life in spite of not reaching our dreams.
I often think would I have had my life in a different way and the answer is always no as my life has always been good.
Andy
February 1st, 2021 02:07
What happened to my dreams?
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Hayley for your kind comment.
January 31st, 2021 22:51
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Hayley for your kind comment.
January 31st, 2021 22:51
Hawaiian Pig Hunt
Neville said:
a fascinating insight properly poemed ...
and thoroughly enjoyed ...
January 31st, 2021 12:02
Neville said:
a fascinating insight properly poemed ...
and thoroughly enjoyed ...
January 31st, 2021 12:02
Hawaiian Pig Hunt
Suresh said:
They hunt for their kill
Just as the soil was tilled
Both showing reverence
To and what they willed.
Great rendition
January 31st, 2021 09:33
Suresh said:
They hunt for their kill
Just as the soil was tilled
Both showing reverence
To and what they willed.
Great rendition
January 31st, 2021 09:33
Hawaiian Pig Hunt
orchidee said:
How\'s that tree? You seeing all this from atop it?!
January 31st, 2021 03:27
orchidee said:
How\'s that tree? You seeing all this from atop it?!
January 31st, 2021 03:27
Hawaiian Pig Hunt
Michael Edwards said:
Not only a good read but an insight into different lives across the world - one to save.
January 31st, 2021 00:04
Michael Edwards said:
Not only a good read but an insight into different lives across the world - one to save.
January 31st, 2021 00:04
Stunningly Clear Vistas
Philip said:
Your day sounds like it starts like mine. I love the way the feeling of your poem turns from molasses to breath taking heights.
Phil
January 30th, 2021 01:15
Philip said:
Your day sounds like it starts like mine. I love the way the feeling of your poem turns from molasses to breath taking heights.
Phil
January 30th, 2021 01:15
Hawaiian Pig Hunt
FredPeyer said:
Thanks d a, I saw a pickup yesterday with a dead pig on top of the steel cage in the back that holds the dogs. And I don\'t know how, but somehow this poem appeared.
January 29th, 2021 20:01
FredPeyer said:
Thanks d a, I saw a pickup yesterday with a dead pig on top of the steel cage in the back that holds the dogs. And I don\'t know how, but somehow this poem appeared.
January 29th, 2021 20:01
Hawaiian Pig Hunt
dusk arising said:
Bloody 4 x 4\'s spoil the fun.
Nice story, I enjoyed reading it - atmospheric.
January 29th, 2021 17:59
dusk arising said:
Bloody 4 x 4\'s spoil the fun.
Nice story, I enjoyed reading it - atmospheric.
January 29th, 2021 17:59
The Freeway in my Head
Suresh said:
To calm the minds furor of turmoil
Lessen the importance so coiled
Unwing tangled threads and knots
Free yourself of unwanted thoughts
January 28th, 2021 12:09
Suresh said:
To calm the minds furor of turmoil
Lessen the importance so coiled
Unwing tangled threads and knots
Free yourself of unwanted thoughts
January 28th, 2021 12:09
The Freeway in my Head
L. B. Mek said:
ignore the cranky - bitterness warped commentary, this reads relatable to anyone with even an ounce of empathy...
a good write
January 28th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
ignore the cranky - bitterness warped commentary, this reads relatable to anyone with even an ounce of empathy...
a good write
January 28th, 2021 05:27
The Freeway in my Head
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Fred - just beware the traffic cops.
January 28th, 2021 03:28
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Fred - just beware the traffic cops.
January 28th, 2021 03:28
The Freeway in my Head
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
Was I the opposite?
I searched me mind/The roads were bare/ Here\'s the reason why/ There\'s nothing there. Doh!
January 28th, 2021 03:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
Was I the opposite?
I searched me mind/The roads were bare/ Here\'s the reason why/ There\'s nothing there. Doh!
January 28th, 2021 03:09
The Freeway in my Head
Goldfinch60 said:
------------And breathe----------
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
------------And breathe----------
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:52
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