Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Bad Advise
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fred, we must always be ourselves in our lives.
Andy
February 22nd, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fred, we must always be ourselves in our lives.
Andy
February 22nd, 2021 01:37
Just sitting around
FredPeyer said:
Thanks orchie, I knew you water down your wine, but didn\'t know you ruin your beer as well.
February 21st, 2021 18:53
FredPeyer said:
Thanks orchie, I knew you water down your wine, but didn\'t know you ruin your beer as well.
February 21st, 2021 18:53
Just sitting around
orchidee said:
Don\'t invite me for a beer though, cos I adds water to it. heehee.
I won\'t be offended if ya don\'t invite me, nor say \'Humph, see if I care!\' lol.
February 21st, 2021 03:06
orchidee said:
Don\'t invite me for a beer though, cos I adds water to it. heehee.
I won\'t be offended if ya don\'t invite me, nor say \'Humph, see if I care!\' lol.
February 21st, 2021 03:06
Just sitting around
dusk arising said:
Drinking is thirsty work Fred. The bottled ale I drink tastes better at room temperature, especially in these cold winter days of U.K.
Bring on the sunshine when golden beers will line my fridge door and we may be allowed the freedom to mingle once again.
February 21st, 2021 00:46
dusk arising said:
Drinking is thirsty work Fred. The bottled ale I drink tastes better at room temperature, especially in these cold winter days of U.K.
Bring on the sunshine when golden beers will line my fridge door and we may be allowed the freedom to mingle once again.
February 21st, 2021 00:46
Just sitting around
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy each next beer Fred, I’ll be over to drink one with you, cheers!
Andy
February 20th, 2021 16:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy each next beer Fred, I’ll be over to drink one with you, cheers!
Andy
February 20th, 2021 16:04
Cheap Soup
FredPeyer said:
Mahalo G M! You are so right. One thing we need to be careful though is that when we are starting fresh, not to repeat the mistakes of the past.
February 20th, 2021 15:32
FredPeyer said:
Mahalo G M! You are so right. One thing we need to be careful though is that when we are starting fresh, not to repeat the mistakes of the past.
February 20th, 2021 15:32
Solitude
FredPeyer said:
Thanks G M, if you cannot enjoy your own company I guess you are sh.. out of luck!
February 20th, 2021 15:30
FredPeyer said:
Thanks G M, if you cannot enjoy your own company I guess you are sh.. out of luck!
February 20th, 2021 15:30
Cheap Soup
Goddess of the Mist said:
Seems like often it\'s best to leave the past right where it is. Every day is a beautiful opportunity to start fresh, thankfully!
February 20th, 2021 13:18
Goddess of the Mist said:
Seems like often it\'s best to leave the past right where it is. Every day is a beautiful opportunity to start fresh, thankfully!
February 20th, 2021 13:18
Solitude
Goddess of the Mist said:
It is a remarkable strength - to enjoy our own company :-)
February 20th, 2021 13:14
Goddess of the Mist said:
It is a remarkable strength - to enjoy our own company :-)
February 20th, 2021 13:14
Cheap Soup
L. B. Mek said:
oh, great ending - I imagine you first thinking of those last four lines and then everything being built on top, as always its the foundations that count most and that my friend, is what our past gifts us: our now, pillared by our yesteryear mistakes and achievements, nothing more - yet, nothing less..
a fun way you\'ve chosen to structure your read, nicely done
February 19th, 2021 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
oh, great ending - I imagine you first thinking of those last four lines and then everything being built on top, as always its the foundations that count most and that my friend, is what our past gifts us: our now, pillared by our yesteryear mistakes and achievements, nothing more - yet, nothing less..
a fun way you\'ve chosen to structure your read, nicely done
February 19th, 2021 06:30
Cheap Soup
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Fred. I wouldn\'t be on MPS if I didn\'t tell of my past experiences!
I can tell you from my past experiences on this site that It\'s sometimes pretty hard to write something and not upset/insult/offend someone here. So..... :-)
February 19th, 2021 05:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Fred. I wouldn\'t be on MPS if I didn\'t tell of my past experiences!
I can tell you from my past experiences on this site that It\'s sometimes pretty hard to write something and not upset/insult/offend someone here. So..... :-)
February 19th, 2021 05:43
Cheap Soup
orchidee said:
Aww, you could write on \'I remember when.......\', I\'m sure!
Just as long as it\'s not like some old bore, who starts off with those dreaded words - then we all doze off to sleep! lol.
February 19th, 2021 02:57
orchidee said:
Aww, you could write on \'I remember when.......\', I\'m sure!
Just as long as it\'s not like some old bore, who starts off with those dreaded words - then we all doze off to sleep! lol.
February 19th, 2021 02:57
Cheap Soup
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fred, you and I have so many experiences stowed away that were once so important but many are now irrelevant. Some though are so important that we keep on writing about them.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fred, you and I have so many experiences stowed away that were once so important but many are now irrelevant. Some though are so important that we keep on writing about them.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:25
Cheap Soup
dusk arising said:
I\'m in the cheap seats and cheap soup suits me just fine.... I still have a few croutons left to provide more satisfaction.
A fun reflective read with a great buy line. Enjoyed it Fred.
February 18th, 2021 23:16
dusk arising said:
I\'m in the cheap seats and cheap soup suits me just fine.... I still have a few croutons left to provide more satisfaction.
A fun reflective read with a great buy line. Enjoyed it Fred.
February 18th, 2021 23:16
Cheap Soup
AlitaOpal said:
Now, right now is all we have.. the past is irrelevant and the future a dream.. you have had much experience and much more to overwhelm you.. 🌹
February 18th, 2021 21:09
AlitaOpal said:
Now, right now is all we have.. the past is irrelevant and the future a dream.. you have had much experience and much more to overwhelm you.. 🌹
February 18th, 2021 21:09
Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian
SureshG said:
I usually pass on reading lengthy verses, blame my attention span.
Captivating me, I just had to read this to the end,
When we reach that state of mind,
Poets words, can be very kind.
February 17th, 2021 10:15
SureshG said:
I usually pass on reading lengthy verses, blame my attention span.
Captivating me, I just had to read this to the end,
When we reach that state of mind,
Poets words, can be very kind.
February 17th, 2021 10:15
Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian
Doggerel Dave said:
That one got me in, Fred. A well textured yarn which evoked memories of several doss houses I\'ve inhabited very briefly during various stages of my life. Authentic.
Ending a shocker - I wish he hadn\'t.
February 16th, 2021 07:00
Doggerel Dave said:
That one got me in, Fred. A well textured yarn which evoked memories of several doss houses I\'ve inhabited very briefly during various stages of my life. Authentic.
Ending a shocker - I wish he hadn\'t.
February 16th, 2021 07:00
Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
in tone, in eloquence, in subtlety of temperament (I know you could have taken this to some wild corner\'s of that rooms shadowy fingers)..
you executed your theme and meaningfully blended imagery - wonderfully, keep them coming dear poet
a worthy dedication, to short story\'s: unquestionable master, staying true - all the way to mirroring, his grim ending
February 16th, 2021 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
in tone, in eloquence, in subtlety of temperament (I know you could have taken this to some wild corner\'s of that rooms shadowy fingers)..
you executed your theme and meaningfully blended imagery - wonderfully, keep them coming dear poet
a worthy dedication, to short story\'s: unquestionable master, staying true - all the way to mirroring, his grim ending
February 16th, 2021 06:41
Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian
orchidee said:
Eek, I shudder at the ending!
If it was not so serious - I tried that. I used the blunt edge of the knife. Doh!
Me knife glided across me pork chop - yummy!
February 16th, 2021 03:49
orchidee said:
Eek, I shudder at the ending!
If it was not so serious - I tried that. I used the blunt edge of the knife. Doh!
Me knife glided across me pork chop - yummy!
February 16th, 2021 03:49
Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fred, I as totally drawn into this.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fred, I as totally drawn into this.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:55
Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian
dusk arising said:
I was enthralled Fred. Especially i felt his mind alter, you portrayed this with subtlety, and the piece of his rooms previous occupants. A man of much experience of life\'s loves, losses and lows.
The final verse came as a shock. A disappointment of sadness because i felt the character you portrayed and had empathy.
We, as readers, all bring our baggage of experience to each poem we read. Suicide is beyond my perception. I want it to remain so for i enjoy my solitary life and it\'s memories. I only state this to validate my comment about the ending.
Really enjoyed reading. You should tell more stories Fred.
February 15th, 2021 22:45
dusk arising said:
I was enthralled Fred. Especially i felt his mind alter, you portrayed this with subtlety, and the piece of his rooms previous occupants. A man of much experience of life\'s loves, losses and lows.
The final verse came as a shock. A disappointment of sadness because i felt the character you portrayed and had empathy.
We, as readers, all bring our baggage of experience to each poem we read. Suicide is beyond my perception. I want it to remain so for i enjoy my solitary life and it\'s memories. I only state this to validate my comment about the ending.
Really enjoyed reading. You should tell more stories Fred.
February 15th, 2021 22:45
Solitude
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww awesome idea!! Solitude sounds far more poetic, independent and great than loneliness indeed. Your entire poem conveys that fabulously. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 14:31
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww awesome idea!! Solitude sounds far more poetic, independent and great than loneliness indeed. Your entire poem conveys that fabulously. Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 14:31
Solitude
L. B. Mek said:
solitude is a useful tool
indeed, often a gateway to wisdom\'s intent..
though, it should never be idealised above that truth: where we spend our lives searching for that rare
true friend
to share ourselves - unfiltered, with..
a reassuringly warm and empowering read, dear Poet
February 12th, 2021 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
solitude is a useful tool
indeed, often a gateway to wisdom\'s intent..
though, it should never be idealised above that truth: where we spend our lives searching for that rare
true friend
to share ourselves - unfiltered, with..
a reassuringly warm and empowering read, dear Poet
February 12th, 2021 06:24
Solitude
orchidee said:
Good write Fred.
You forgot a line? Here it is:
\'Where I can escape Orchi\'s singing forever\'. heehee.
February 12th, 2021 03:00
orchidee said:
Good write Fred.
You forgot a line? Here it is:
\'Where I can escape Orchi\'s singing forever\'. heehee.
February 12th, 2021 03:00
Solitude
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Fred, so much can be seen and accomplished in solitude.
Andy
February 12th, 2021 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Fred, so much can be seen and accomplished in solitude.
Andy
February 12th, 2021 01:59
Solitude
John Prophet said:
Seems to be an age thing, but I see it more now than in younger days. The need to leave the chaos out of my sphere. Very good write...
February 11th, 2021 19:35
John Prophet said:
Seems to be an age thing, but I see it more now than in younger days. The need to leave the chaos out of my sphere. Very good write...
February 11th, 2021 19:35
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