Comments received on poems by myself and me
Wounded Heart
Aislinn Wilson said:
Not poetic cinema, but rather cinematic poetry. Great piece.
January 9th, 2019 10:40
Aislinn Wilson said:
Not poetic cinema, but rather cinematic poetry. Great piece.
January 9th, 2019 10:40
To you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good romantic write, those times with each other are wonderful. May they last forever.
April 13th, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good romantic write, those times with each other are wonderful. May they last forever.
April 13th, 2018 00:40
To you
Michael Edwards said:
A great tribute to all those partners out there who are so much cherished - my wife included.
April 12th, 2018 11:47
Michael Edwards said:
A great tribute to all those partners out there who are so much cherished - my wife included.
April 12th, 2018 11:47
To you
myself and me said:
Thank you Briansodes. It is nice to know the old fashion in your region. New Zealand, that is quite a distance.
April 12th, 2018 10:03
myself and me said:
Thank you Briansodes. It is nice to know the old fashion in your region. New Zealand, that is quite a distance.
April 12th, 2018 10:03
To you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I can empathise M & M ~ We must cherish those nights because in my experience they are like a vapour ~ which soon passes away. Angela & I only share Friday night in the Week because we are only engaged not married ! Old fashioned but nice ! But she is going to New Zealand (4000 miles from the UK) in MAY on a Year\'s Exchange so it will only be 5 or 6 nights in a Year ! Cherish the Love You have !\" Yours BRIAN (UK) please check my POEM \"MY PERFECT LOVE\" and my LATEST FUSION (CARS & MOTORCYCLES) click on DEVELOPING to see it ~ Thanks B.
April 12th, 2018 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I can empathise M & M ~ We must cherish those nights because in my experience they are like a vapour ~ which soon passes away. Angela & I only share Friday night in the Week because we are only engaged not married ! Old fashioned but nice ! But she is going to New Zealand (4000 miles from the UK) in MAY on a Year\'s Exchange so it will only be 5 or 6 nights in a Year ! Cherish the Love You have !\" Yours BRIAN (UK) please check my POEM \"MY PERFECT LOVE\" and my LATEST FUSION (CARS & MOTORCYCLES) click on DEVELOPING to see it ~ Thanks B.
April 12th, 2018 09:35
Loneliness
BLACKGOLDKING said:
Made me chuckle, probably because I\'m wide awake and regularly have trouble sleeping. Loved it!.
April 9th, 2018 21:04
BLACKGOLDKING said:
Made me chuckle, probably because I\'m wide awake and regularly have trouble sleeping. Loved it!.
April 9th, 2018 21:04
Loneliness
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful punch my friend. Thank you for letting it out
February 27th, 2018 12:45
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful punch my friend. Thank you for letting it out
February 27th, 2018 12:45
Loneliness
Lorna said:
Even together we are always alone....... vivid poem MM
February 25th, 2018 05:40
Lorna said:
Even together we are always alone....... vivid poem MM
February 25th, 2018 05:40
Loneliness
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes no matter what we do does not feel right, as you so eloquently write here, m&m. I like the way you used these opposites, eyes open, eyes closed, to convey the same feeling. Well done!
February 25th, 2018 03:44
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes no matter what we do does not feel right, as you so eloquently write here, m&m. I like the way you used these opposites, eyes open, eyes closed, to convey the same feeling. Well done!
February 25th, 2018 03:44
Loneliness
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write m and m. Even in the dark the light will be there.
February 25th, 2018 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write m and m. Even in the dark the light will be there.
February 25th, 2018 02:17
Maybe
FredPeyer said:
While the message is sad, I like the feel of the poem. You may have been wrong....but the poem is not!
February 16th, 2018 22:52
FredPeyer said:
While the message is sad, I like the feel of the poem. You may have been wrong....but the poem is not!
February 16th, 2018 22:52
Maybe
dusk arising said:
Nice one, i like the way you constructed this. It\'s like a song to me in the way it develops.
February 16th, 2018 14:25
dusk arising said:
Nice one, i like the way you constructed this. It\'s like a song to me in the way it develops.
February 16th, 2018 14:25
Maybe
Michael Edwards said:
Love the construct of this - and maybe you were right !!
February 16th, 2018 11:37
Michael Edwards said:
Love the construct of this - and maybe you were right !!
February 16th, 2018 11:37
Maybe
Bethany_megan said:
There\'s a lot of emotion in this piece yet it has a monotone feel to it which contrasts the overall feelings and therefore emphasises the message that little bit more. Very affective. Absolutely love it, keep writing x
February 16th, 2018 09:09
Bethany_megan said:
There\'s a lot of emotion in this piece yet it has a monotone feel to it which contrasts the overall feelings and therefore emphasises the message that little bit more. Very affective. Absolutely love it, keep writing x
February 16th, 2018 09:09
The shape of loneliness
FredPeyer said:
m&m, I am awed by the power of your poem, the way you use these metaphors of temperature, color, and drawing. So well done.
And remember, m&m, loneliness is only a temporary affliction, soon to be replaced by joy and happiness!
February 15th, 2018 16:08
FredPeyer said:
m&m, I am awed by the power of your poem, the way you use these metaphors of temperature, color, and drawing. So well done.
And remember, m&m, loneliness is only a temporary affliction, soon to be replaced by joy and happiness!
February 15th, 2018 16:08
The shape of loneliness
Goldfinch60 said:
That loneliness can be so debilitating but rest assured it can be endured and can lead to brighter days.
Good emotive write.
February 7th, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That loneliness can be so debilitating but rest assured it can be endured and can lead to brighter days.
Good emotive write.
February 7th, 2018 01:51
The shape of loneliness
Christina8 said:
This was a great poem, M&M! I hope you find the love that\'s right for you soon, but as for this poem, it was awesome!
February 6th, 2018 19:16
Christina8 said:
This was a great poem, M&M! I hope you find the love that\'s right for you soon, but as for this poem, it was awesome!
February 6th, 2018 19:16
The shape of loneliness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Me and my Shadow ~ walking down the avenue
Me and my Shadow ~ All alone and feelin\' blue
And when it\'s twelve o\'clock ~ we climb the stair
We never knock \'cos nobodies there .......
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ why such a melancholy POEM ? You write such sad poems ~ it made me sad for you ! Not cold or hot ~ the temperature of loneliness UNDETECTABLE ~ The color of loneliness ~ UNDEFINABLE ~ The shape of loneliness ~ UNDRAWABLE ~ OMG M & M you really must be lonely ~ no state for a lovely Lady ~ like YOU ! I\'m thinkin\' of you ~ hope that helps ~ Yours as ever ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)
February 6th, 2018 16:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Me and my Shadow ~ walking down the avenue
Me and my Shadow ~ All alone and feelin\' blue
And when it\'s twelve o\'clock ~ we climb the stair
We never knock \'cos nobodies there .......
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ why such a melancholy POEM ? You write such sad poems ~ it made me sad for you ! Not cold or hot ~ the temperature of loneliness UNDETECTABLE ~ The color of loneliness ~ UNDEFINABLE ~ The shape of loneliness ~ UNDRAWABLE ~ OMG M & M you really must be lonely ~ no state for a lovely Lady ~ like YOU ! I\'m thinkin\' of you ~ hope that helps ~ Yours as ever ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)
February 6th, 2018 16:44
Tonight, I feel lonely
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.
December 8th, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.
December 8th, 2017 01:25
Tonight, I feel lonely
FredPeyer said:
Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad and lonely business. Well written, m&m! While the song is sad tonight, tomorrow morning listen to the birds and do the same: Start the day with a wonderful song!
December 7th, 2017 20:18
FredPeyer said:
Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad and lonely business. Well written, m&m! While the song is sad tonight, tomorrow morning listen to the birds and do the same: Start the day with a wonderful song!
December 7th, 2017 20:18
Tonight, I feel lonely
WL Schuett said:
Tonight the song is sad .... that has so much feeling , this poem just drips sadness... tugged my heart ...beautifully done M&M
December 7th, 2017 15:27
WL Schuett said:
Tonight the song is sad .... that has so much feeling , this poem just drips sadness... tugged my heart ...beautifully done M&M
December 7th, 2017 15:27
Tonight, I feel lonely
Fay Slimm. said:
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a heart-touching piece of fine poetry..
December 7th, 2017 13:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a heart-touching piece of fine poetry..
December 7th, 2017 13:23
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