Comments received on poems by b-LAH-que
Attic
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing and written in metaphor that required more readings. A great poem thought provoking and deeper than the surface level or rather maybe higher being the attic
August 3rd, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing and written in metaphor that required more readings. A great poem thought provoking and deeper than the surface level or rather maybe higher being the attic
August 3rd, 2024 06:05
Warm in December
AlitaOpal said:
Beautifully written, I too lost a childhood friend last year in August which was why I haven\'t been here.. Just catching up with your great work 🌹
July 20th, 2022 10:19
AlitaOpal said:
Beautifully written, I too lost a childhood friend last year in August which was why I haven\'t been here.. Just catching up with your great work 🌹
July 20th, 2022 10:19
Shade
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that\'s just my cup of poetic tea..
thank you, dear poet
April 19th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that\'s just my cup of poetic tea..
thank you, dear poet
April 19th, 2022 04:35
Warm in December
L. B. Mek said:
\'Your fire burned bright
Imprinted our vision
We still see your light
Still warms us from within\'..
a truly wonderful dedication, sorry for your loss
thanks for sharing
March 29th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Your fire burned bright
Imprinted our vision
We still see your light
Still warms us from within\'..
a truly wonderful dedication, sorry for your loss
thanks for sharing
March 29th, 2021 05:04
It does not flow
dusk arising said:
Isn\'t the world of poetry interesting in 2021. Whereas I disagree with you i respect that i am probably in the minority and that your preferences are dominant in our expression.
I find that seeking a rhyme is a practice which limits my expression because there will simply be fewer words available to use with which to convey my message/intent. However, I do occasionally succumb and post a rhyming piece. Composing a five line limerick is of course good fun.
February 8th, 2021 12:57
dusk arising said:
Isn\'t the world of poetry interesting in 2021. Whereas I disagree with you i respect that i am probably in the minority and that your preferences are dominant in our expression.
I find that seeking a rhyme is a practice which limits my expression because there will simply be fewer words available to use with which to convey my message/intent. However, I do occasionally succumb and post a rhyming piece. Composing a five line limerick is of course good fun.
February 8th, 2021 12:57
It does not flow
L. B. Mek said:
if Poetry only had one stream
to feed
its depthless Sea
it would have crusted
into those annals
of the obsolete
a long - long time ago
so yes, lets us rhyme
in that tradition
we inherit, when we ink
each word of poetic merit
but let us also, read
with open mind\'s
to Art\'s
never-ending reinvention
of possibility\'s: evergreen generation...
February 8th, 2021 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
if Poetry only had one stream
to feed
its depthless Sea
it would have crusted
into those annals
of the obsolete
a long - long time ago
so yes, lets us rhyme
in that tradition
we inherit, when we ink
each word of poetic merit
but let us also, read
with open mind\'s
to Art\'s
never-ending reinvention
of possibility\'s: evergreen generation...
February 8th, 2021 06:27
It does not flow
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi bLq: You pose a problem for me; I claim to attempt to ‘embrace the discipline of rhyme rhythm and uniform line lengths (note no mention of ‘metre’)’ so I’m committed.
Mostly, I think (others to judge) I manage it. But it ain’t easy, takes a lot of metaphorical sweat and isn’t always totally successful. But I do try because I’m committed and feel that my poems which aspire to utilise traditional forms should be judged on that basis. Why? Because hammering out the meaning within parameters clarifies the thought process and leads to greater clarity. How well do you think you did with yours?
BTW this isn’t an invitation to heap praise or condemnation on me or you personally
February 8th, 2021 03:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi bLq: You pose a problem for me; I claim to attempt to ‘embrace the discipline of rhyme rhythm and uniform line lengths (note no mention of ‘metre’)’ so I’m committed.
Mostly, I think (others to judge) I manage it. But it ain’t easy, takes a lot of metaphorical sweat and isn’t always totally successful. But I do try because I’m committed and feel that my poems which aspire to utilise traditional forms should be judged on that basis. Why? Because hammering out the meaning within parameters clarifies the thought process and leads to greater clarity. How well do you think you did with yours?
BTW this isn’t an invitation to heap praise or condemnation on me or you personally
February 8th, 2021 03:33
Vindication
AlitaOpal said:
I see it as just playing the part, push comes to shove through provocation.. intense work, I love it 🎈
February 4th, 2021 17:23
AlitaOpal said:
I see it as just playing the part, push comes to shove through provocation.. intense work, I love it 🎈
February 4th, 2021 17:23
Could have been tonight
AlitaOpal said:
Perhaps this night it will be, this reminds me that in life you really just got to take a chance.. Great write 🎈
February 4th, 2021 16:55
AlitaOpal said:
Perhaps this night it will be, this reminds me that in life you really just got to take a chance.. Great write 🎈
February 4th, 2021 16:55
Temporary
AlitaOpal said:
Reminds me of William Blake\'s poem Joy.. fantastic work 🎈
February 4th, 2021 11:08
AlitaOpal said:
Reminds me of William Blake\'s poem Joy.. fantastic work 🎈
February 4th, 2021 11:08
White Noise
AlitaOpal said:
My mother used to say, \"never let the sun go down on your worries and troubles, you must resolve them before dark.\" Where she\'s from, she believes today perpetuates your tomorrow.. this was a very deep master piece 🌹
February 4th, 2021 11:04
AlitaOpal said:
My mother used to say, \"never let the sun go down on your worries and troubles, you must resolve them before dark.\" Where she\'s from, she believes today perpetuates your tomorrow.. this was a very deep master piece 🌹
February 4th, 2021 11:04
Break the Surface
AlitaOpal said:
So very true, the truth just IS.. I enjoyed reading this master piece 🌹
February 4th, 2021 02:06
AlitaOpal said:
So very true, the truth just IS.. I enjoyed reading this master piece 🌹
February 4th, 2021 02:06
Break the Surface
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, keep going up the surface is close and you life will go in in joy and love.
Andy
February 4th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, keep going up the surface is close and you life will go in in joy and love.
Andy
February 4th, 2021 01:55
Fresh air
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully worded message of introspection\'s true value,
what we carry within:
no one can ever, price-tag
without our submission, ergo
if we but hold true
to our own self-belief of worth
they can only barter-for
never, may they - take
by force...
an empowering read, thanks for sharing
February 1st, 2021 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully worded message of introspection\'s true value,
what we carry within:
no one can ever, price-tag
without our submission, ergo
if we but hold true
to our own self-belief of worth
they can only barter-for
never, may they - take
by force...
an empowering read, thanks for sharing
February 1st, 2021 07:05
Sunshineburn
Goldfinch60 said:
Those scars may be there but you know you have moved on and are getting better every moment of your life.
October 19th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Those scars may be there but you know you have moved on and are getting better every moment of your life.
October 19th, 2019 00:53
Sunshineburn
Nicholas Browning said:
A bit of a story as thanks for the poem. although you may not really care I\'ll still share anyway.
I haven\'t been the best of people either, there was a time in my life where all I did was stay inside because I felt like I didn\'t belong outside with everyone else. When I was 15 I developed a skin condition known as \"Pigmented purpuric dermatosis\". Basically, I\'ve got red and purple blotches covering my entire body excluding my face. I believe they serve as a reminder that I haven\'t been the best a human can be. They keep me in check, at least to me they do. But I go outside now, and I have friends. I\'m in a better place, and I hope that some day you look back on your misgivings and laugh at them. Best regards! I really enjoyed the poem.
October 19th, 2019 00:48
Nicholas Browning said:
A bit of a story as thanks for the poem. although you may not really care I\'ll still share anyway.
I haven\'t been the best of people either, there was a time in my life where all I did was stay inside because I felt like I didn\'t belong outside with everyone else. When I was 15 I developed a skin condition known as \"Pigmented purpuric dermatosis\". Basically, I\'ve got red and purple blotches covering my entire body excluding my face. I believe they serve as a reminder that I haven\'t been the best a human can be. They keep me in check, at least to me they do. But I go outside now, and I have friends. I\'m in a better place, and I hope that some day you look back on your misgivings and laugh at them. Best regards! I really enjoyed the poem.
October 19th, 2019 00:48
Vindication
dusk arising said:
Hmmm it\'s definitely an inner fight not to hit the vengence trail sometimes. But i guess if one has to succumb then one has to relish it.... till regret sets in.
September 23rd, 2019 02:55
dusk arising said:
Hmmm it\'s definitely an inner fight not to hit the vengence trail sometimes. But i guess if one has to succumb then one has to relish it.... till regret sets in.
September 23rd, 2019 02:55
Graffiti
Suresh said:
What a tribute to graffiti
Yes it can liven up a dull and dreary place.
Lovely rhyme
May 7th, 2019 10:25
Suresh said:
What a tribute to graffiti
Yes it can liven up a dull and dreary place.
Lovely rhyme
May 7th, 2019 10:25
Homebound
orchidee said:
Good write. Where ya been?! If ya hadn\'t told me ya is coming home, I never would have known ya had gone in the first place! heehee.
March 23rd, 2019 04:10
orchidee said:
Good write. Where ya been?! If ya hadn\'t told me ya is coming home, I never would have known ya had gone in the first place! heehee.
March 23rd, 2019 04:10
I am not a poet
sylviasearcher said:
This one is amazing.
The flow, the pauses and jagged edges of self doubt.
Maybe start commenting on poems/ make friends and your talents will be seen?
January 31st, 2019 07:40
sylviasearcher said:
This one is amazing.
The flow, the pauses and jagged edges of self doubt.
Maybe start commenting on poems/ make friends and your talents will be seen?
January 31st, 2019 07:40
I am not a poet
Leisa Niamh said:
Your poem reads well and I enjoyed reading it. I love rhythm and rhyme in poetry and don\'t always understand some of the more complicated stuff. I too am constantly judging my own work and never think its good enough to be shared with others. I do not consider myself clever enough to be a Poet as such but I do like having a go. Keep sharing.
November 11th, 2018 03:44
Leisa Niamh said:
Your poem reads well and I enjoyed reading it. I love rhythm and rhyme in poetry and don\'t always understand some of the more complicated stuff. I too am constantly judging my own work and never think its good enough to be shared with others. I do not consider myself clever enough to be a Poet as such but I do like having a go. Keep sharing.
November 11th, 2018 03:44
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