Comments received on poems by dusk arising
the artist
L. B. Mek said:
\'so cleverly his cunning method today
for there will be azure blue skies
above a wooded green land
where as a child he played
and there, a separate picture
of his boyhood friend.
and there, his dog
their favourite games and those bicycles!
but then those skies would cloud over
the darkness above foreboding\'
immersivity: showcased, with practised ease
a sublime offering, Dusk
thank you so much!
(I also use an HP Pavilion, so
you know - even if you grow to hate
everything else about me, we can utilise that
as our featherweight tether, of a connection) lol
A great read: Truly!
June 14th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'so cleverly his cunning method today
for there will be azure blue skies
above a wooded green land
where as a child he played
and there, a separate picture
of his boyhood friend.
and there, his dog
their favourite games and those bicycles!
but then those skies would cloud over
the darkness above foreboding\'
immersivity: showcased, with practised ease
a sublime offering, Dusk
thank you so much!
(I also use an HP Pavilion, so
you know - even if you grow to hate
everything else about me, we can utilise that
as our featherweight tether, of a connection) lol
A great read: Truly!
June 14th, 2021 05:06
the artist
Jayasree said:
Lovely :) Poets can bring the whole universe into your mind with a few words.
June 13th, 2021 23:59
Jayasree said:
Lovely :) Poets can bring the whole universe into your mind with a few words.
June 13th, 2021 23:59
tomorrow
ron parrish aka wordman said:
today is yesterdays tomorrow and tomorrow it will be yesterday so live for today,there is no tomorrow
June 13th, 2021 16:57
ron parrish aka wordman said:
today is yesterdays tomorrow and tomorrow it will be yesterday so live for today,there is no tomorrow
June 13th, 2021 16:57
the artist
SureshG said:
and thus you are an artist, allowing us to draw what we may…
June 13th, 2021 12:57
SureshG said:
and thus you are an artist, allowing us to draw what we may…
June 13th, 2021 12:57
the artist
Fay Slimm. said:
The read of this re-visited poem tugs at heart-strings with vivid imagery and paints the facts as they are for many in desperate conditions today - an artist whether poetic or not would have to cover his canvas with tears when he painted those boats of hope and doom, A moving piece indeed Dusk
June 13th, 2021 11:33
Fay Slimm. said:
The read of this re-visited poem tugs at heart-strings with vivid imagery and paints the facts as they are for many in desperate conditions today - an artist whether poetic or not would have to cover his canvas with tears when he painted those boats of hope and doom, A moving piece indeed Dusk
June 13th, 2021 11:33
the artist
Neville said:
I am glad you re-visited these words DA darn glad ............. and true :)
June 13th, 2021 10:15
Neville said:
I am glad you re-visited these words DA darn glad ............. and true :)
June 13th, 2021 10:15
similarities
Neville said:
.. Don\'t it just sometimes happen like that eh\' .. a well told tale sir .. beautifully wrapped up in a poem and with more than just a grain of truth to it ..
June 13th, 2021 01:31
Neville said:
.. Don\'t it just sometimes happen like that eh\' .. a well told tale sir .. beautifully wrapped up in a poem and with more than just a grain of truth to it ..
June 13th, 2021 01:31
similarities
Caring dove said:
Sad but so beautiful . Nice choice of words , dusk arising 🙂
June 12th, 2021 08:16
Caring dove said:
Sad but so beautiful . Nice choice of words , dusk arising 🙂
June 12th, 2021 08:16
to sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write d a.
A few years ago I had a serious operation and the thing that struck me as funny is the way the man putting in the anaesthetic changed so quickly into a lady nurse waking me up, those four hours in between were lost from my life.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write d a.
A few years ago I had a serious operation and the thing that struck me as funny is the way the man putting in the anaesthetic changed so quickly into a lady nurse waking me up, those four hours in between were lost from my life.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:44
to sleep
Fay Slimm. said:
Hoping your hospital visit went well today Dusk and this little anecdote tells as it was and is when being on camera and that you make light of the reason for tea and biscuits is so admirable my friend - - am smiling with a tear in my eye too.
June 11th, 2021 16:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Hoping your hospital visit went well today Dusk and this little anecdote tells as it was and is when being on camera and that you make light of the reason for tea and biscuits is so admirable my friend - - am smiling with a tear in my eye too.
June 11th, 2021 16:03
to sleep
Neville said:
this is more than just a bit o fun sir .. this is a lot of fun indeed ... Good luck mate ..
June 11th, 2021 14:10
Neville said:
this is more than just a bit o fun sir .. this is a lot of fun indeed ... Good luck mate ..
June 11th, 2021 14:10
to sleep
SureshG said:
I can visualize you smiling as you penned this adorably imagery, and gave us a reason to smile as well
June 11th, 2021 11:55
SureshG said:
I can visualize you smiling as you penned this adorably imagery, and gave us a reason to smile as well
June 11th, 2021 11:55
to sleep
Jerry Reynolds said:
Visions hard to not see, Dusk. Hope all is well. Mine is 3 years out now.
June 11th, 2021 08:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Visions hard to not see, Dusk. Hope all is well. Mine is 3 years out now.
June 11th, 2021 08:34
to sleep
L. B. Mek said:
whimsicality of poetry
exemplified with nonchalant ease
of practised skill, mastery..
such a fun read! thanks Dusk
June 11th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
whimsicality of poetry
exemplified with nonchalant ease
of practised skill, mastery..
such a fun read! thanks Dusk
June 11th, 2021 05:24
beneath the stairs
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a metaphorical, dip
into fantastical childhood scenes
that resonate, with a semblance of truth
of those common memory stains
diluting - murky, our ability to recall
just: how relatively bad, the bad really was
and just: how meagrely, the good - visited...
a great read Dusk
made me really think/recall
that\'s a wonderful gift, thank you
June 11th, 2021 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a metaphorical, dip
into fantastical childhood scenes
that resonate, with a semblance of truth
of those common memory stains
diluting - murky, our ability to recall
just: how relatively bad, the bad really was
and just: how meagrely, the good - visited...
a great read Dusk
made me really think/recall
that\'s a wonderful gift, thank you
June 11th, 2021 03:38
beneath the stairs
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a life changing experience,a good one at that
June 11th, 2021 00:08
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a life changing experience,a good one at that
June 11th, 2021 00:08
beneath the stairs
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it chill out for sure d a.
I have never ever knowingly been been near any drugs except alcohol and cigarette tobacco.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it chill out for sure d a.
I have never ever knowingly been been near any drugs except alcohol and cigarette tobacco.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:05
beneath the stairs
Jerry Reynolds said:
You can do eatables. Good story, Dusk. Love the imagery. Earl is very seeable.
June 10th, 2021 16:01
Jerry Reynolds said:
You can do eatables. Good story, Dusk. Love the imagery. Earl is very seeable.
June 10th, 2021 16:01
beneath the stairs
SureshG said:
No, don’t fancy it either, but damn it, I smell it everywhere now, in the hallways, out by the yard, and even while driving, but never locked in the cupboard
June 10th, 2021 13:18
SureshG said:
No, don’t fancy it either, but damn it, I smell it everywhere now, in the hallways, out by the yard, and even while driving, but never locked in the cupboard
June 10th, 2021 13:18
beneath the stairs
Fay Slimm. said:
When you give yourself up to fantasy Dusk your pen takes us to such other dimensions - - the tale of the spider and cupboard reminded me of times I was sent the same way for being rude in company. Earl came alive with his dreadlocks -
and his spliff had me grinning.
June 10th, 2021 12:45
Fay Slimm. said:
When you give yourself up to fantasy Dusk your pen takes us to such other dimensions - - the tale of the spider and cupboard reminded me of times I was sent the same way for being rude in company. Earl came alive with his dreadlocks -
and his spliff had me grinning.
June 10th, 2021 12:45
beneath the stairs
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i really love this one Dusk. I love poems that tell a tale. Faved
June 10th, 2021 04:30
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i really love this one Dusk. I love poems that tell a tale. Faved
June 10th, 2021 04:30
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