Comments received on poems by dusk arising
forestness
Neville said:
What a wonderful title sir .. and what follows, is a swathe of perfect green .. although maybe a paradox .. I found your words today to be relaxing, stimulating and refreshing ... just as a woodland walk should truly be .....
... Neville
June 4th, 2021 06:04
Neville said:
What a wonderful title sir .. and what follows, is a swathe of perfect green .. although maybe a paradox .. I found your words today to be relaxing, stimulating and refreshing ... just as a woodland walk should truly be .....
... Neville
June 4th, 2021 06:04
forestness
L. B. Mek said:
\'Reaching down into the cooler
stillness where I am earthed.
Crouching now amid the richness
of bracken\'s spring growth
I inhale the vibration of forestness.
Stillness.\'
the best compliment I have to offer
for this majestic traversing through nature
within wondrous brevity of poeticism, you\'ve weaved
is that, I almost thought this could have been penned
by our nature poetess supreme: Fay Slimm...
Brilliant! Dusk, back to your innately poetic best
in my humble opinion..
thank you for sharing!
June 4th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'Reaching down into the cooler
stillness where I am earthed.
Crouching now amid the richness
of bracken\'s spring growth
I inhale the vibration of forestness.
Stillness.\'
the best compliment I have to offer
for this majestic traversing through nature
within wondrous brevity of poeticism, you\'ve weaved
is that, I almost thought this could have been penned
by our nature poetess supreme: Fay Slimm...
Brilliant! Dusk, back to your innately poetic best
in my humble opinion..
thank you for sharing!
June 4th, 2021 05:53
forestness
Saxon Crow said:
And you will you will absolutely find me there doing the same thing. Completely relatable Dusk. Great poem
June 4th, 2021 04:39
Saxon Crow said:
And you will you will absolutely find me there doing the same thing. Completely relatable Dusk. Great poem
June 4th, 2021 04:39
keeping it to myself (revisited)
L. B. Mek said:
(a great read Dusk
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
and sorry if you don\'t like chocolate either
just a handy metaphor)..
some people only like milk chocolate
for all that meltingly sweet goodness,
some people like bitter chocolate, best
so they never forget and repeat that mistake,
but, maybe what is truly best
is that 70% cocoa: quality chocolate, of acceptance;
as brittle as any love,
but never as sickeningly sweet
as those romcom depictions
and yet, full of enough emotional sustenance
to allow us, to hope
while accepting, that romantic love
is merely: a single aspect of love
there\'s much more to life
than our track record, of romantic relationships..
for instance
there\'s all that alcohol chocolate
to drown our sorrows, in...
June 4th, 2021 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
(a great read Dusk
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
and sorry if you don\'t like chocolate either
just a handy metaphor)..
some people only like milk chocolate
for all that meltingly sweet goodness,
some people like bitter chocolate, best
so they never forget and repeat that mistake,
but, maybe what is truly best
is that 70% cocoa: quality chocolate, of acceptance;
as brittle as any love,
but never as sickeningly sweet
as those romcom depictions
and yet, full of enough emotional sustenance
to allow us, to hope
while accepting, that romantic love
is merely: a single aspect of love
there\'s much more to life
than our track record, of romantic relationships..
for instance
there\'s all that alcohol chocolate
to drown our sorrows, in...
June 4th, 2021 04:24
forestness
Jayasree said:
That\'s a beautiful poem. It\'s as if I am in the forest ,enjoying the stillness. Love it
June 4th, 2021 04:24
Jayasree said:
That\'s a beautiful poem. It\'s as if I am in the forest ,enjoying the stillness. Love it
June 4th, 2021 04:24
forestness
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
You making up words that I can\'t sing? forestness. heehee.
Nice if it\'s dry underfoot. Otherwise may end up on a boggy track.
June 4th, 2021 04:06
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
You making up words that I can\'t sing? forestness. heehee.
Nice if it\'s dry underfoot. Otherwise may end up on a boggy track.
June 4th, 2021 04:06
keeping it to myself (revisited)
Goldfinch60 said:
The love of my life passed away but I know what true love is and that love that I had for her will never happen again - but she is still with me in Spirit.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 23:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The love of my life passed away but I know what true love is and that love that I had for her will never happen again - but she is still with me in Spirit.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 23:45
keeping it to myself (revisited)
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
I could do with a pork pie. Is that in the sky?! lol.
June 3rd, 2021 07:01
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
I could do with a pork pie. Is that in the sky?! lol.
June 3rd, 2021 07:01
keeping it to myself (revisited)
Neville said:
As the mist leaves no scar
On the dark green hill
So my body leaves no scar
On you and never will
Through windows in the dark
The children come, the children go
Like arrows with no targets
Like shackles made of snow ...
words courtesy of the late great poet LNC ... but seemingly most fitting here today .....
Neville
June 3rd, 2021 05:53
Neville said:
As the mist leaves no scar
On the dark green hill
So my body leaves no scar
On you and never will
Through windows in the dark
The children come, the children go
Like arrows with no targets
Like shackles made of snow ...
words courtesy of the late great poet LNC ... but seemingly most fitting here today .....
Neville
June 3rd, 2021 05:53
keeping it to myself (revisited)
Saxon Crow said:
There are other types of love Dusk. For example, the love of sticky toffee pudding. Dont ever give up on love. Lovely poem
June 3rd, 2021 05:30
Saxon Crow said:
There are other types of love Dusk. For example, the love of sticky toffee pudding. Dont ever give up on love. Lovely poem
June 3rd, 2021 05:30
music disturbs me
Saxon Crow said:
Music is the be all and end all. The only real magic in this world. That and cake
June 3rd, 2021 02:32
Saxon Crow said:
Music is the be all and end all. The only real magic in this world. That and cake
June 3rd, 2021 02:32
music disturbs me
SureshG said:
There isn’t a soul that isn’t raptured by the sound of music, as you have to cleverly used the title to show its hold on us.
Lovely indeed
June 2nd, 2021 23:52
SureshG said:
There isn’t a soul that isn’t raptured by the sound of music, as you have to cleverly used the title to show its hold on us.
Lovely indeed
June 2nd, 2021 23:52
days of the lost past
Neville said:
these words of yours are so deserving of each of the positive comments made by every single one of my NINE reviewing predecessors ... I dunno how I managed to miss them before now ... glad I got here in the end though and happy to make up the number that coincides with the mark I would be inclined to award out of 10 .....
Here\'s hoping others will now follow in my wake ....
Neville
June 2nd, 2021 05:37
Neville said:
these words of yours are so deserving of each of the positive comments made by every single one of my NINE reviewing predecessors ... I dunno how I managed to miss them before now ... glad I got here in the end though and happy to make up the number that coincides with the mark I would be inclined to award out of 10 .....
Here\'s hoping others will now follow in my wake ....
Neville
June 2nd, 2021 05:37
music disturbs me
Goldfinch60 said:
You are preaching to the converted d a.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
You are preaching to the converted d a.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:34
music disturbs me
Jayasree said:
A great read. I love music and can\'t think of a life without music. Yes, you can find music all around you, in nature, in the song of the birds.
June 1st, 2021 10:52
Jayasree said:
A great read. I love music and can\'t think of a life without music. Yes, you can find music all around you, in nature, in the song of the birds.
June 1st, 2021 10:52
music disturbs me
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no music disturbs me.
When I begin to sing, \'tis disturbing! lol.
They don\'t care. They all wear ear plugs. heehee.
June 1st, 2021 09:29
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no music disturbs me.
When I begin to sing, \'tis disturbing! lol.
They don\'t care. They all wear ear plugs. heehee.
June 1st, 2021 09:29
music disturbs me
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, where would we all be without music
they claim it predates language or art
which makes sense to me..
a wonderful dedication Dusk
June 1st, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, where would we all be without music
they claim it predates language or art
which makes sense to me..
a wonderful dedication Dusk
June 1st, 2021 05:14
music disturbs me
Caring dove said:
Maybe you should call this “ music inspires and delights me “
Great poem anyhow 🙂 I love music although you be honest I probably don’t listen to it enough . The sound of birds is beautiful . Having music on can certainly help with writing ,
Yes , what would we do without music .
It’s amazing
June 1st, 2021 03:55
Caring dove said:
Maybe you should call this “ music inspires and delights me “
Great poem anyhow 🙂 I love music although you be honest I probably don’t listen to it enough . The sound of birds is beautiful . Having music on can certainly help with writing ,
Yes , what would we do without music .
It’s amazing
June 1st, 2021 03:55
music disturbs me
Neville said:
... I concur sir .... & so perfectly poetically articulated, I might add ...
June 1st, 2021 03:39
Neville said:
... I concur sir .... & so perfectly poetically articulated, I might add ...
June 1st, 2021 03:39
days of the lost past
L. B. Mek said:
this is really impressive!
a depiction and commentary, intertwined seamlessly
on a subject, that\'s so hard to fathom..
a great write, executed with practiced skill
showcasing, that innate Poetic gift..
thanks for sharing Dusk
June 1st, 2021 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
this is really impressive!
a depiction and commentary, intertwined seamlessly
on a subject, that\'s so hard to fathom..
a great write, executed with practiced skill
showcasing, that innate Poetic gift..
thanks for sharing Dusk
June 1st, 2021 03:25
days of the lost past
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed are so important to us all. I went out to dinner last night with a friend (first time I have eaten out for many months0 and he and I were talking about memories of the passed.
Wonderful memories d a.
Andy
June 1st, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed are so important to us all. I went out to dinner last night with a friend (first time I have eaten out for many months0 and he and I were talking about memories of the passed.
Wonderful memories d a.
Andy
June 1st, 2021 00:52
days of the lost past
jarcher54 said:
A bittersweet exploration of memory and its loss. The past lives on only in our memories, and you highlight the fragility of those memories so poignantly.
May 31st, 2021 20:45
jarcher54 said:
A bittersweet exploration of memory and its loss. The past lives on only in our memories, and you highlight the fragility of those memories so poignantly.
May 31st, 2021 20:45
days of the lost past
Trenz Pruca said:
I enjoy all your poems, but this one especially so. So many people I know and have known have suffered this scourge.
May 31st, 2021 19:12
Trenz Pruca said:
I enjoy all your poems, but this one especially so. So many people I know and have known have suffered this scourge.
May 31st, 2021 19:12
days of the lost past
SureshG said:
Alzheimer’s- the robbed know not what’s gradually been stolen, but science is working hard to at least define, arrest and even reverse the cause.
It was one of the segments on 60 Minutes programs yesterday..
May 31st, 2021 12:06
SureshG said:
Alzheimer’s- the robbed know not what’s gradually been stolen, but science is working hard to at least define, arrest and even reverse the cause.
It was one of the segments on 60 Minutes programs yesterday..
May 31st, 2021 12:06
days of the lost past
Caring dove said:
Your lucky if you have a “ lot “ of good memories . Some people have negative ones .
A good poem , dusk arising .
I guess it would be difficult to havd good memories to then forget them ..,
May 31st, 2021 04:26
Caring dove said:
Your lucky if you have a “ lot “ of good memories . Some people have negative ones .
A good poem , dusk arising .
I guess it would be difficult to havd good memories to then forget them ..,
May 31st, 2021 04:26
days of the lost past
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen them so well those invaluable memories dear Dusk - the past comes alive so often in memory\'s mind.
May 31st, 2021 03:56
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen them so well those invaluable memories dear Dusk - the past comes alive so often in memory\'s mind.
May 31st, 2021 03:56
Young entrepreneur
SureshG said:
Me thinks he should have printed a guinea notes. Thanks for a golly good laugh
May 30th, 2021 16:10
SureshG said:
Me thinks he should have printed a guinea notes. Thanks for a golly good laugh
May 30th, 2021 16:10
as it should be
Neville said:
... absolutely spot on sir .. just as it should be ...
May 30th, 2021 05:17
Neville said:
... absolutely spot on sir .. just as it should be ...
May 30th, 2021 05:17
Young entrepreneur
Goldfinch60 said:
My first laugh of the day d a, thank you.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
My first laugh of the day d a, thank you.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:26
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