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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Human touch ... is so important . Just someone to give you comfort
July 3rd, 2021 00:11
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Human touch ... is so important . Just someone to give you comfort
July 3rd, 2021 00:11
high leaves
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Dusk.
A great place to be, in those trees.
July 1st, 2021 16:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Dusk.
A great place to be, in those trees.
July 1st, 2021 16:55
high leaves
L. B. Mek said:
what healing words, Dusk
sometimes our metaphors
need not be that gushingly positive
for them to effect and widen
our narrowed/limited outlooks/perceptions
sometimes, they just need to be true
so we know, we\'re not the only ones
feeling like we are..
a great read! thank you
July 1st, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
what healing words, Dusk
sometimes our metaphors
need not be that gushingly positive
for them to effect and widen
our narrowed/limited outlooks/perceptions
sometimes, they just need to be true
so we know, we\'re not the only ones
feeling like we are..
a great read! thank you
July 1st, 2021 04:27
high leaves
Neville said:
........ the perfect title ... precision pruned sublimely cool, refreshing and so comfortably chilled ..............
July 1st, 2021 03:03
Neville said:
........ the perfect title ... precision pruned sublimely cool, refreshing and so comfortably chilled ..............
July 1st, 2021 03:03
high leaves
Fay Slimm. said:
There is truly no better place to be for receiving peace my dear friend - - I am with you in spirit under those leaves of otherworldly magic.
July 1st, 2021 01:00
Fay Slimm. said:
There is truly no better place to be for receiving peace my dear friend - - I am with you in spirit under those leaves of otherworldly magic.
July 1st, 2021 01:00
high leaves
Saxon Crow said:
Really like this Dusk
you\'ll find my thoughts these days
kissed
by magic otherworldliness
Sheer poetry
July 1st, 2021 00:29
Saxon Crow said:
Really like this Dusk
you\'ll find my thoughts these days
kissed
by magic otherworldliness
Sheer poetry
July 1st, 2021 00:29
an angels gameplay
SureshG said:
I always thought it was Cupid’s playful deceit, but I’ll take the angels playfulness, if it comes wrapped in poem such as yours.
June 30th, 2021 14:07
SureshG said:
I always thought it was Cupid’s playful deceit, but I’ll take the angels playfulness, if it comes wrapped in poem such as yours.
June 30th, 2021 14:07
an angels gameplay
Saxon Crow said:
A very thoughtful and beautiful poem Dusk
\'With a safe landing net
within folded wings of wisdom.\'
I can relate to that. Brilliant
June 30th, 2021 00:44
Saxon Crow said:
A very thoughtful and beautiful poem Dusk
\'With a safe landing net
within folded wings of wisdom.\'
I can relate to that. Brilliant
June 30th, 2021 00:44
an angels gameplay
Lord Barham said:
I prefere to write poems about fallen angels! I am more familiar with them, I guess.
June 30th, 2021 00:35
Lord Barham said:
I prefere to write poems about fallen angels! I am more familiar with them, I guess.
June 30th, 2021 00:35
an angels gameplay
Goldfinch60 said:
My Angel is always with me, and always has been.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
My Angel is always with me, and always has been.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:25
from the shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
We know that the beauty will be back tomorrow when the light reappears.
That last line has me worried - are you creeping from the shadows in my garden d a. 😉.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We know that the beauty will be back tomorrow when the light reappears.
That last line has me worried - are you creeping from the shadows in my garden d a. 😉.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:06
from the shadows
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely written Dusk. However, \'Dusk creeps from the shadows\'? What were you doing in them?!!!
June 29th, 2021 23:40
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely written Dusk. However, \'Dusk creeps from the shadows\'? What were you doing in them?!!!
June 29th, 2021 23:40
from the shadows
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
A hot summer is upon us. The Garden requires a lot more water to stay vibrant.
June 29th, 2021 15:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
A hot summer is upon us. The Garden requires a lot more water to stay vibrant.
June 29th, 2021 15:02
from the shadows
orchidee said:
Yep, oh woe, the nights are drawing in now - we\'re past the Longest Day.
Help, I\'m wishing the year away here!
June 29th, 2021 09:28
orchidee said:
Yep, oh woe, the nights are drawing in now - we\'re past the Longest Day.
Help, I\'m wishing the year away here!
June 29th, 2021 09:28
the day is dark
L. B. Mek said:
dear, oh - so gifted poet
Emily Dickinson lived and wrote in a time
far removed from us, near 1850\'s
and yet, she too - somewhat by choice
lived her life, in a manner
that your words, so succinctly describe:
\'The day is dark,
curtains remain drawn.
Worry fills the place
where a light shone brightly.
Day grows long
as hope battles fear.\'
and yet, she managed
to pen such a fitting reply to your poem
nearly two hundreds years ago, and it reads:
\'Presentiment is that long shadow on the lawn
Indicative that suns go down;
The notice to the startled grass
That darkness is about to pass.\'
ain\'t Poetry just an amazingly surreal realm, to experience?
thank you, Dusk - simply Brilliant!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-8822
June 29th, 2021 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
dear, oh - so gifted poet
Emily Dickinson lived and wrote in a time
far removed from us, near 1850\'s
and yet, she too - somewhat by choice
lived her life, in a manner
that your words, so succinctly describe:
\'The day is dark,
curtains remain drawn.
Worry fills the place
where a light shone brightly.
Day grows long
as hope battles fear.\'
and yet, she managed
to pen such a fitting reply to your poem
nearly two hundreds years ago, and it reads:
\'Presentiment is that long shadow on the lawn
Indicative that suns go down;
The notice to the startled grass
That darkness is about to pass.\'
ain\'t Poetry just an amazingly surreal realm, to experience?
thank you, Dusk - simply Brilliant!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-8822
June 29th, 2021 03:34
the day is dark
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope will always overcome fear as those hopes will become reality.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope will always overcome fear as those hopes will become reality.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 00:31
the day is dark
Saxon Crow said:
Use a torch to find your way
Open the curtains by the bay
Let the worries fade away
As light fills the room with the carefree day
Dark days always come but they also go.
A good sombre poem Dusk. Know that feeling well!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
Saxon Crow said:
Use a torch to find your way
Open the curtains by the bay
Let the worries fade away
As light fills the room with the carefree day
Dark days always come but they also go.
A good sombre poem Dusk. Know that feeling well!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
the day is dark
Fay Slimm. said:
There is a lot of that battle about in these worrisome days my friend - a remedy for dark moods is to play your kind of music - so cool Mr D -and thanks for sharing it.
June 28th, 2021 09:39
Fay Slimm. said:
There is a lot of that battle about in these worrisome days my friend - a remedy for dark moods is to play your kind of music - so cool Mr D -and thanks for sharing it.
June 28th, 2021 09:39
the day is dark
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
It was a bit dark for me too - until I switched the light on! heehee.
June 28th, 2021 09:06
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
It was a bit dark for me too - until I switched the light on! heehee.
June 28th, 2021 09:06
this priceless cost
Neville said:
... tinged with a singular melancholy maybe, but none the less, quite hauntingly beautiful sir ...
June 28th, 2021 03:48
Neville said:
... tinged with a singular melancholy maybe, but none the less, quite hauntingly beautiful sir ...
June 28th, 2021 03:48
this priceless cost
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words d a, those memories will never fail you.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words d a, those memories will never fail you.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 01:32
this priceless cost
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem \'where the shimmering reflections
of moonlight on the water
turn back a page to the that
starlit sparkle of your eyes.\'
Simply beautiful Dusk. One for the favs
June 27th, 2021 00:44
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem \'where the shimmering reflections
of moonlight on the water
turn back a page to the that
starlit sparkle of your eyes.\'
Simply beautiful Dusk. One for the favs
June 27th, 2021 00:44
the jungle final
Neville said:
so seriously good in a funny kinda way ... hilarious and then some .. cant think why I missed this until just now ...
................... Neville :)
June 24th, 2021 09:19
Neville said:
so seriously good in a funny kinda way ... hilarious and then some .. cant think why I missed this until just now ...
................... Neville :)
June 24th, 2021 09:19
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