Comments received on poems by dusk arising
Mary had a......
Dove said:
Thanks for the smiles!
Mary had some silly desires
Sunshine was beautifully warm
Hoping her lover set her passions on fire
He had been forewarned
Mary set the candle sticks a glow
Dressed in a nightie to thrill
But her lover wouldn’t you know
Had taken a Sleeping pill
Sorry Mary, but It’s time to sleep
Can’t fulfill your womenly desires
So all she could do was count sheep
as she watched the candle light fire
May 21st, 2021 09:05
Dove said:
Thanks for the smiles!
Mary had some silly desires
Sunshine was beautifully warm
Hoping her lover set her passions on fire
He had been forewarned
Mary set the candle sticks a glow
Dressed in a nightie to thrill
But her lover wouldn’t you know
Had taken a Sleeping pill
Sorry Mary, but It’s time to sleep
Can’t fulfill your womenly desires
So all she could do was count sheep
as she watched the candle light fire
May 21st, 2021 09:05
Mary had a......
Wackyheartache4 said:
And finally, her pig
Sure to be slaughtered next
Whenever this one comes around,
Expect a night of... Oinks
May 21st, 2021 01:31
Wackyheartache4 said:
And finally, her pig
Sure to be slaughtered next
Whenever this one comes around,
Expect a night of... Oinks
May 21st, 2021 01:31
Mary had a......
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary had a little lamb,
Its fleece was full of muck,
And everywhere that Mary went,
That lamb was sure to frolic.
May 21st, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary had a little lamb,
Its fleece was full of muck,
And everywhere that Mary went,
That lamb was sure to frolic.
May 21st, 2021 00:44
hope
Goldfinch60 said:
May that hope turn into the reality that we know will be there for us.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that hope turn into the reality that we know will be there for us.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:37
hope
Neville said:
.. original and showing not only great form, but also bringing with it, something of a positive slant ..
May 20th, 2021 12:04
Neville said:
.. original and showing not only great form, but also bringing with it, something of a positive slant ..
May 20th, 2021 12:04
have you ever doppled missus?
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I\'ve had too much - firsthand: experience
of relationship\'s succumbing to distorted, waves - of connection
to find these acutely insightful words
that cut, far too close to the bone
as merely, amusing.
an interesting concept/metaphor
and a wonderful read, Dusk
May 20th, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I\'ve had too much - firsthand: experience
of relationship\'s succumbing to distorted, waves - of connection
to find these acutely insightful words
that cut, far too close to the bone
as merely, amusing.
an interesting concept/metaphor
and a wonderful read, Dusk
May 20th, 2021 04:23
have you ever doppled missus?
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks da, my first laugh of the day.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks da, my first laugh of the day.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:08
a day in the life of
rosiedm said:
Just another day which we are thankfully allowed to have lived😊
May 19th, 2021 16:42
rosiedm said:
Just another day which we are thankfully allowed to have lived😊
May 19th, 2021 16:42
a day in the life of
Andy Hunter said:
Short and poignant. Work hard, play hard and have some fun along the way. So true ☺️
May 19th, 2021 15:27
Andy Hunter said:
Short and poignant. Work hard, play hard and have some fun along the way. So true ☺️
May 19th, 2021 15:27
a day in the life of
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful shorty Dusk..
we too easily forget
consumed by our needy - now, of temperamental haste
indeed, a lifetime is blended
between our midnight\'s - bell, of triumphant survival
from one day: to its hopeful, next
May 19th, 2021 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful shorty Dusk..
we too easily forget
consumed by our needy - now, of temperamental haste
indeed, a lifetime is blended
between our midnight\'s - bell, of triumphant survival
from one day: to its hopeful, next
May 19th, 2021 04:38
a day in the life of
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and even more blessed id you wake up the following day.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and even more blessed id you wake up the following day.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:12
a day in the life of
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
\'All work (or all singing) and no play, makes Jack a dull boy at the end of the day?\' That\'ll be right, if it\'s me singing! lol
May 18th, 2021 04:29
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
\'All work (or all singing) and no play, makes Jack a dull boy at the end of the day?\' That\'ll be right, if it\'s me singing! lol
May 18th, 2021 04:29
as it should be
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we are individuals and we are enough - - a needed message and so well scripted my friend.
May 17th, 2021 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we are individuals and we are enough - - a needed message and so well scripted my friend.
May 17th, 2021 03:09
as it should be
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true da, we each have our own path to lead us to the place we are going towards.
Andy
May 17th, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true da, we each have our own path to lead us to the place we are going towards.
Andy
May 17th, 2021 00:11
do you?
Neville said:
I think I most probably do .. but quite possibly unconsciously so .. and often .. I find my self surrounded by the not so pretty or positively valued ...
You pose an interesting question here DA .. and certainly made me think ......................
Neville
May 16th, 2021 11:51
Neville said:
I think I most probably do .. but quite possibly unconsciously so .. and often .. I find my self surrounded by the not so pretty or positively valued ...
You pose an interesting question here DA .. and certainly made me think ......................
Neville
May 16th, 2021 11:51
longing
Fay Slimm. said:
Dreams are so meaningful when we understand that they are just that my dear friend........ only dreams.
May 16th, 2021 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Dreams are so meaningful when we understand that they are just that my dear friend........ only dreams.
May 16th, 2021 04:52
was that me
Fay Slimm. said:
Your questions and wonderings are very relatable Dusk - we all have days when our pens bring out the deeper side of our poetic hearts and reading these lines did the same for me - so glad you posted it.
May 16th, 2021 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Your questions and wonderings are very relatable Dusk - we all have days when our pens bring out the deeper side of our poetic hearts and reading these lines did the same for me - so glad you posted it.
May 16th, 2021 04:50
was that me
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart is the truth within you and will show you the wonder of your life to come.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart is the truth within you and will show you the wonder of your life to come.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:52
longing
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes dreams show show the person we longed for many years ago but are so grateful they are no longer in our lives.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes dreams show show the person we longed for many years ago but are so grateful they are no longer in our lives.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:15
longing
myself and me said:
I can feel you, the longing.
\"the one you think you know
the one you never found \"
Enjoy the read.
May 15th, 2021 22:28
myself and me said:
I can feel you, the longing.
\"the one you think you know
the one you never found \"
Enjoy the read.
May 15th, 2021 22:28
longing
orchidee said:
I hear her. I\'m gonna meet her. But will she be too much for me, and it end in swoons?! heehee.
May 15th, 2021 07:48
orchidee said:
I hear her. I\'m gonna meet her. But will she be too much for me, and it end in swoons?! heehee.
May 15th, 2021 07:48
do you?
L. B. Mek said:
there is timeless wisdom in that old saying
\'a time away, will do you some good\' or
\'take a break, indulge in new scenery\'
as our senses often get bogged down by repetition..
by nature we are inquisitive folk, and so
we yearn to experience the new and different
to maximise this brief life, we\'ve been gifted..
but then, a few moments of separation
from our tried and trusted, patterns or rhythmic routines
and we crave, those snug fitting comforts
we\'ve dented into worn-in, safe havens
as a perfect fit: for us, at least...
(a wonderfully thought provoking write Dusk
brilliantly worded, relatable and succinctly direct)
May 14th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
there is timeless wisdom in that old saying
\'a time away, will do you some good\' or
\'take a break, indulge in new scenery\'
as our senses often get bogged down by repetition..
by nature we are inquisitive folk, and so
we yearn to experience the new and different
to maximise this brief life, we\'ve been gifted..
but then, a few moments of separation
from our tried and trusted, patterns or rhythmic routines
and we crave, those snug fitting comforts
we\'ve dented into worn-in, safe havens
as a perfect fit: for us, at least...
(a wonderfully thought provoking write Dusk
brilliantly worded, relatable and succinctly direct)
May 14th, 2021 05:13
do you?
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times, there are many things that we had in life and hopefully soon we will be able to sit amongst them again.
Andy
May 14th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times, there are many things that we had in life and hopefully soon we will be able to sit amongst them again.
Andy
May 14th, 2021 00:28
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