Comments received on poems by dusk arising
do you?
Caring dove said:
To be around the company of others ... that’s important .
May 13th, 2021 14:21
Caring dove said:
To be around the company of others ... that’s important .
May 13th, 2021 14:21
do you?
Caring dove said:
It’s difficult when you see others with things we want ... makes us sad and envious
May 13th, 2021 11:08
Caring dove said:
It’s difficult when you see others with things we want ... makes us sad and envious
May 13th, 2021 11:08
forest
Neville said:
... Been there, done that and also asked the same question ..
... I really like the way you paved the way for the asking of it sir ..
... Neville
May 13th, 2021 04:11
Neville said:
... Been there, done that and also asked the same question ..
... I really like the way you paved the way for the asking of it sir ..
... Neville
May 13th, 2021 04:11
desire
Neville said:
having come to such an abrupt and unexpected end .. after such a smooth take off .. I am reminded of the union of opposites .........
and that hate is such a horrid word
... Neville
May 12th, 2021 10:36
Neville said:
having come to such an abrupt and unexpected end .. after such a smooth take off .. I am reminded of the union of opposites .........
and that hate is such a horrid word
... Neville
May 12th, 2021 10:36
desire
L. B. Mek said:
\'So quickly his body responded
to her movement
the essence of her smells
and softest fleshyness
of arousal.\'
a brutally - stark finale, but not all a waste, I suggest
for witness, such impassioned Poetry it helped: Birth..
onwards, then - let those ashes dry regret\'s - Tears
while you Pave your next adventure from the dirt
of fake-love\'s tarnished, remnant stutter;
how do you know it was A, fake - love?
because its very legacy is poised, to poison
that hope fuelled - Desired: future
you\'ve yet to realise...
thanks for sharing an enthralling read, dear poet
(and sorry for replying directly, I appreciate the \'him\'
was probably just an expression of your creativity
forgive my overzealous nature, yet again: my friend)
May 10th, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'So quickly his body responded
to her movement
the essence of her smells
and softest fleshyness
of arousal.\'
a brutally - stark finale, but not all a waste, I suggest
for witness, such impassioned Poetry it helped: Birth..
onwards, then - let those ashes dry regret\'s - Tears
while you Pave your next adventure from the dirt
of fake-love\'s tarnished, remnant stutter;
how do you know it was A, fake - love?
because its very legacy is poised, to poison
that hope fuelled - Desired: future
you\'ve yet to realise...
thanks for sharing an enthralling read, dear poet
(and sorry for replying directly, I appreciate the \'him\'
was probably just an expression of your creativity
forgive my overzealous nature, yet again: my friend)
May 10th, 2021 04:42
dark and feral
Neville said:
this is one of those that takes the reader to those places that they (most of them anyway) would dearly want to go, but tend not to articulate ... except maybe to themselves and a lover or two in the darkest of nights ...
and also the perfect title for this dark & seductive poem, if I may say so .............. Neville
May 10th, 2021 01:42
Neville said:
this is one of those that takes the reader to those places that they (most of them anyway) would dearly want to go, but tend not to articulate ... except maybe to themselves and a lover or two in the darkest of nights ...
and also the perfect title for this dark & seductive poem, if I may say so .............. Neville
May 10th, 2021 01:42
dark and feral
orchidee said:
Oohh I fancy a bit of dark and feral, but I might swoon! heehee.
May 10th, 2021 01:38
orchidee said:
Oohh I fancy a bit of dark and feral, but I might swoon! heehee.
May 10th, 2021 01:38
dark and feral
Goldfinch60 said:
Very dark write da, but very well written.
Andy
May 10th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very dark write da, but very well written.
Andy
May 10th, 2021 00:52
desire
Jerry Reynolds said:
You have to try and pace yourself. Ladies first then together.
May 9th, 2021 11:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
You have to try and pace yourself. Ladies first then together.
May 9th, 2021 11:18
desire
Goldfinch60 said:
Good punch line da, it does happen that way sometimes.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good punch line da, it does happen that way sometimes.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 01:48
trail to sleep
orchidee said:
Yes, tricky to get to sleep at night, I find, if napping in the day or early evening. By the time we get to bed we are awake! doh!
Coooeee, you asleep now?
May 9th, 2021 01:47
orchidee said:
Yes, tricky to get to sleep at night, I find, if napping in the day or early evening. By the time we get to bed we are awake! doh!
Coooeee, you asleep now?
May 9th, 2021 01:47
trail to sleep
jarcher54 said:
I will remember \"where no reasoning prevails\" above all the interesting conceits in this little poem. The poem itself reads like a string of one\'s thoughts (or whatever they are) as one drifts off after a little bit of insomnia. Did you write it as you fell asleep? Very observant and artful.
May 9th, 2021 00:43
jarcher54 said:
I will remember \"where no reasoning prevails\" above all the interesting conceits in this little poem. The poem itself reads like a string of one\'s thoughts (or whatever they are) as one drifts off after a little bit of insomnia. Did you write it as you fell asleep? Very observant and artful.
May 9th, 2021 00:43
trail to sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'pillow headed confusion\' may well sort itself out as you raise your head from the pillow each morning.
Memories can be so confusing sometimes da.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'pillow headed confusion\' may well sort itself out as you raise your head from the pillow each morning.
Memories can be so confusing sometimes da.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 00:31
a glass of her
ron parrish aka wordman said:
if only in my mind,lovely images of love
May 8th, 2021 17:42
ron parrish aka wordman said:
if only in my mind,lovely images of love
May 8th, 2021 17:42
trail to sleep
Fay Slimm. said:
Very relatable the roamings of past events on that trail to sleep as you so well express Dusk - - vivid and inventive your descriptions - - you have such a way with words .
May 8th, 2021 12:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Very relatable the roamings of past events on that trail to sleep as you so well express Dusk - - vivid and inventive your descriptions - - you have such a way with words .
May 8th, 2021 12:49
he stood
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
Has he sat down now? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
May 8th, 2021 01:46
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
Has he sat down now? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
May 8th, 2021 01:46
he stood
Fay Slimm. said:
These few insightful lines contain such a meaningful depth - - an inspiring write D - into my list for reading again goes this little gem.
May 7th, 2021 15:56
Fay Slimm. said:
These few insightful lines contain such a meaningful depth - - an inspiring write D - into my list for reading again goes this little gem.
May 7th, 2021 15:56
the screaming
L. B. Mek said:
acute surgical - poetry, worded: so intuitively relatable
clarifying nuances, to that burdensome - baggage
carried: from one step, to our blinkered next..
subtly, brilliant!
May 3rd, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
acute surgical - poetry, worded: so intuitively relatable
clarifying nuances, to that burdensome - baggage
carried: from one step, to our blinkered next..
subtly, brilliant!
May 3rd, 2021 04:30
the screaming
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes you may run towards it to help others who are in trouble.
Andy
May 2nd, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes you may run towards it to help others who are in trouble.
Andy
May 2nd, 2021 01:31
the screaming
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Screaming, such a base animal sound very deep DA
Great write, that\'s the room I d aren\'t go in
Bravo!
May 1st, 2021 11:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Screaming, such a base animal sound very deep DA
Great write, that\'s the room I d aren\'t go in
Bravo!
May 1st, 2021 11:50
forest
Caring dove said:
I like your poems . This was nicely expressed . I think more people need to care for nature and the environment
April 25th, 2021 01:36
Caring dove said:
I like your poems . This was nicely expressed . I think more people need to care for nature and the environment
April 25th, 2021 01:36
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