Comments received on poems by dusk arising



value people
L. B. Mek said:

this is what wisdom, reveals itself to me as
when I identify it in others or in what I read
it exists here
in these words you\'ve penned, dear poet
thank you!

June 10th, 2021 03:26

value people
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true d a the true friends will always bring out the best in you and are so valuable to us in our lives.

Andy

June 10th, 2021 00:08

value people
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you, Dust. Always enjoyable.

June 9th, 2021 17:22

value people
SureshG said:

If you value others, chances are good you will bring out the best in them.

June 9th, 2021 11:57

value people
Saxon Crow said:

Nice one dusk. Always look for the ones who treat you well and you are always able to be yourself

June 9th, 2021 10:22

value people
Laura🌻 said:

da,
I truly believe there’s a reason/purpose for encountering the many people throughout our lives. It awakens us to our many trials and tribulations of our life’s journey.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Laura🌻

June 9th, 2021 10:09

value people
orchidee said:

Good write dusk.

June 9th, 2021 09:43

value people
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good poem, Dusk. The shape evokes a cremation urn intentional or just me.

June 9th, 2021 09:30

route 66 (the A46)
Goldfinch60 said:

I get my kicks
On A forty six
Day after day
Night after night
Roadwork after roadwork
On the A forty six
I get my kicks.

Andy

June 8th, 2021 23:48

route 66 (the A46)
Neville said:



Fun all the way I see ... a splendid road trip and yes, it works dunnit ..

June 7th, 2021 17:02

route 66 (the A46)
Michael Edwards said:

I know the road well - well I know bits of it. enjoyed the read.
pity I can\'t sing.

June 7th, 2021 15:34

route 66 (the A46)
SureshG said:

Well I’ll have to hop on an Airbus, just to take this memorable trip on A 46.

Thank you for a very lighted and entertaining work

June 7th, 2021 14:06

The artist
Caring dove said:

Very good , dusk arising 🙂 engaging

June 7th, 2021 12:48

route 66 (the A46)
orchidee said:

How you knowing the A34 SC?
A part of it is about 25 or so miles from me.

June 7th, 2021 06:15

route 66 (the A46)
Saxon Crow said:

Haha. Nice one Dusk. Do the a34. That\'s a good one!

June 7th, 2021 03:17

too busy?
Goldfinch60 said:

So true d a money is the thing that
drives many religions to move forward, not their beliefs.

Andy

June 6th, 2021 23:59

too busy?
Neville said:


I am inclined to agree .. you make a good point and raise a pertinent question .......................

June 6th, 2021 17:00

too busy?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dusk.
Humans can make a convincing sounding case for or against anything. The sun will burn until it doesn’t the planet will orbit until it doesn’t we will last until we don’t. Enjoy the ride.

June 6th, 2021 14:43

too busy?
Saxon Crow said:

The institutions are mostly corrupt. They fear a truly devout person. Good poem Dusk

June 6th, 2021 08:38

too busy?
orchidee said:

Why, yes, some are. But not all.
I\'ve not got antipathy towards religion or spirituality.
It\'s worse having professed faith, and doing some bad things in the name of \'religion\', than to have no faith at all, I think.
We need to watch our own step though, me included. Jesus\' words of \'hypocrites\' applied to some of the religious leaders of his day.


June 6th, 2021 02:15

the dark wall of night
Goldfinch60 said:

With that vulnerability you left that chink of light for me, so I will go towards that light and have a wonderful night filled with dreams of love and beauty.

Andy

June 6th, 2021 00:31

the dark wall of night
Fay Slimm. said:

What a poem -Oh so rich in potent intrigue - - flowing with fugitive ghosts grappling to enter my most vulnerable places . This read leaves me running to add its linguistic lilt to my list of favourites.

June 5th, 2021 10:03

the dark wall of night
Saxon Crow said:

I like this one, a lot. Good job Dusk

June 5th, 2021 08:56

the dark wall of night
Jerry Reynolds said:

Yep! I agree with Neville, imagination already off and running. Thanks for the write Dusk.

June 5th, 2021 07:23

the dark wall of night
orchidee said:

A fine write DA.

June 5th, 2021 06:48

the dark wall of night
Neville said:


now every single bloomin one of us is gonna start imagining things ...

I do love psychological thrillers in any shape or form ..

... poems being among my personal favouwrite\'s ...

Neville :)


June 5th, 2021 06:35

forestness
Goldfinch60 said:

The glory of woodland is so wonderful and beautiful to be in, your words show this so well d a. I will meet you in that wood one day.

Andy

June 5th, 2021 01:15

forestness
SureshG said:

Nature has a way to enrapturing our senses, as you have so oetic captured

June 4th, 2021 21:52

forestness
myself and me said:

I held my breath while reading your work, so afraid to disturb the peaceful forestness.

June 4th, 2021 21:08

forestness
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good poem, Dusk. Grew up on a farm in southern Virginia. No running water or electricity. Surrounded by \"Forestness.\" Totally relatable.

June 4th, 2021 08:31



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