Comments received on poems by dusk arising
beautiful pastime
SureshG said:
Most men don’t grasp the thrill of giving pleasure and the eroticism in its act, that your words have truly unveiled
June 23rd, 2021 13:04
SureshG said:
Most men don’t grasp the thrill of giving pleasure and the eroticism in its act, that your words have truly unveiled
June 23rd, 2021 13:04
beautiful pastime
Saxon Crow said:
Ooooooo, check you out you old romantic you. A lovely poem Dusk
June 23rd, 2021 10:11
Saxon Crow said:
Ooooooo, check you out you old romantic you. A lovely poem Dusk
June 23rd, 2021 10:11
beautiful pastime
Neville said:
perfectly presented .. selflessly shared ... end of .............................. :)
June 23rd, 2021 03:25
Neville said:
perfectly presented .. selflessly shared ... end of .............................. :)
June 23rd, 2021 03:25
beautiful pastime
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
Glad someone\'s having good times! Should I try this in me sheltered life? heehee.
June 23rd, 2021 02:10
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
Glad someone\'s having good times! Should I try this in me sheltered life? heehee.
June 23rd, 2021 02:10
beautiful pastime
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful giving of love and pleasure to others without expecting anything for yourself d a.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful giving of love and pleasure to others without expecting anything for yourself d a.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 02:03
the jungle final
Goldfinch60 said:
My first laugh of the day d a, thank you.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
My first laugh of the day d a, thank you.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:46
the jungle final
Dove said:
AHA! Clever and Amusing! I was so afraid the bugs were going to be crushed, lol
June 22nd, 2021 13:37
Dove said:
AHA! Clever and Amusing! I was so afraid the bugs were going to be crushed, lol
June 22nd, 2021 13:37
the jungle final
Andy Hunter said:
Brilliant rhyme, made me smile. Nice one Dusk
June 22nd, 2021 12:59
Andy Hunter said:
Brilliant rhyme, made me smile. Nice one Dusk
June 22nd, 2021 12:59
the jungle final
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good tale, Dusk.
Nothing like a good twist.
June 22nd, 2021 12:25
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good tale, Dusk.
Nothing like a good twist.
June 22nd, 2021 12:25
the jungle final
Doggerel Dave said:
😊 Great yarn there, Dusk. You\'ll find me in the stands too.
June 22nd, 2021 08:03
Doggerel Dave said:
😊 Great yarn there, Dusk. You\'ll find me in the stands too.
June 22nd, 2021 08:03
into the woodgreen realm
Caring dove said:
It’s amazing how much calmer you become when in nature ...
June 21st, 2021 11:08
Caring dove said:
It’s amazing how much calmer you become when in nature ...
June 21st, 2021 11:08
into the woodgreen realm
Caring dove said:
Nature is amazing . I love trees ... they are so good for helping you to ground and just calming to be around .
Beautiful poem , I love your words 🙂🙂
June 21st, 2021 11:07
Caring dove said:
Nature is amazing . I love trees ... they are so good for helping you to ground and just calming to be around .
Beautiful poem , I love your words 🙂🙂
June 21st, 2021 11:07
charlie
Neville said:
cor blimey guv\'nor ..
blinkin brill and a fair cop at that.................... N :)
June 21st, 2021 07:25
Neville said:
cor blimey guv\'nor ..
blinkin brill and a fair cop at that.................... N :)
June 21st, 2021 07:25
charlie
L. B. Mek said:
I laud the poetic ambition
such a fun read, could easily be developed
into a character portrait novella
or breathlessly paced short story
or even better, a quirky modern Epic..
or simply, left as is
gifting readers, an open-ended ending
for us to go venture, in our imaginations!
well worth reposting, thanks Dusk
June 21st, 2021 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
I laud the poetic ambition
such a fun read, could easily be developed
into a character portrait novella
or breathlessly paced short story
or even better, a quirky modern Epic..
or simply, left as is
gifting readers, an open-ended ending
for us to go venture, in our imaginations!
well worth reposting, thanks Dusk
June 21st, 2021 06:00
charlie
Doggerel Dave said:
😊 No trouble with the accent, Dusk....wouldn\'t mind the rest......
June 21st, 2021 01:40
Doggerel Dave said:
😊 No trouble with the accent, Dusk....wouldn\'t mind the rest......
June 21st, 2021 01:40
charlie
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Dusk. A story poem always goes down well in my world innit bruv!
June 21st, 2021 01:07
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Dusk. A story poem always goes down well in my world innit bruv!
June 21st, 2021 01:07
curl up
Neville said:
I know that feeling ... and my Mom used to say the very same thing ..
June 21st, 2021 00:26
Neville said:
I know that feeling ... and my Mom used to say the very same thing ..
June 21st, 2021 00:26
curl up
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive write d a, I do sincerely hope that you can get passed this news and come out smiling.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive write d a, I do sincerely hope that you can get passed this news and come out smiling.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:19
curl up
SureshG said:
A posture in the womb, a comfortable place, when we feel blue
June 19th, 2021 19:49
SureshG said:
A posture in the womb, a comfortable place, when we feel blue
June 19th, 2021 19:49
curl up
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sad to hear, Dusk.
Love-
Across the Atlantic
Earl says chill
June 19th, 2021 08:25
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sad to hear, Dusk.
Love-
Across the Atlantic
Earl says chill
June 19th, 2021 08:25
curl up
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Friend - I do hope these words are not from experience - your poetic mind takes such turns and swings in your postings and this write of \"curl up\" seems a bit pessimistic between the lines - but wishing I maybe quite wrong.
June 19th, 2021 08:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Friend - I do hope these words are not from experience - your poetic mind takes such turns and swings in your postings and this write of \"curl up\" seems a bit pessimistic between the lines - but wishing I maybe quite wrong.
June 19th, 2021 08:01
alive in life
Goldfinch60 said:
So vert true d a, the love of life is so wonderful and must be lived to the full.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So vert true d a, the love of life is so wonderful and must be lived to the full.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 00:53
alive in life
Saxon Crow said:
I like this one a lot. Reminds me of Depeche mode
June 18th, 2021 08:31
Saxon Crow said:
I like this one a lot. Reminds me of Depeche mode
June 18th, 2021 08:31
bullshit
Jerry Reynolds said:
Strange write, Dusk.
Women do all the choosing, why is a wonderful mystery.
June 17th, 2021 17:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Strange write, Dusk.
Women do all the choosing, why is a wonderful mystery.
June 17th, 2021 17:27
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