Comments received on poems by dusk arising
i drove
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
Watching the stars sink into a new day as the world around you wakes up is a special treat.
July 11th, 2021 08:16
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
Watching the stars sink into a new day as the world around you wakes up is a special treat.
July 11th, 2021 08:16
i drove
Poetic Dan said:
I heard the sound of yawning, then I released the hills was alive this morning!
Appreciate the calling
July 11th, 2021 07:02
Poetic Dan said:
I heard the sound of yawning, then I released the hills was alive this morning!
Appreciate the calling
July 11th, 2021 07:02
i drove
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine way of feeling alive my friend - driving to watch dawn arrive sounds truly exciting and thanks for sharing.
July 11th, 2021 01:09
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine way of feeling alive my friend - driving to watch dawn arrive sounds truly exciting and thanks for sharing.
July 11th, 2021 01:09
natures sway
Poetic Dan said:
You had at the title my friend the rest was truly a flow of nature, thanks for sharing the years that made ya!
July 7th, 2021 22:42
Poetic Dan said:
You had at the title my friend the rest was truly a flow of nature, thanks for sharing the years that made ya!
July 7th, 2021 22:42
natures sway
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful thoughts, Dusk.
Age seems to fan the embers of past loves.
July 7th, 2021 09:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful thoughts, Dusk.
Age seems to fan the embers of past loves.
July 7th, 2021 09:13
natures sway
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of summer days in our youth d a are so very special.
I remember when..........
Andy
July 7th, 2021 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of summer days in our youth d a are so very special.
I remember when..........
Andy
July 7th, 2021 01:21
strangeness of strangers arms
Goldfinch60 said:
\"where a strangeness
of strangers arms
gave comfort\"
This is so meaningful to me, I may be a stranger but have helped many people by just listening tom them.
Andy
July 7th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
\"where a strangeness
of strangers arms
gave comfort\"
This is so meaningful to me, I may be a stranger but have helped many people by just listening tom them.
Andy
July 7th, 2021 00:52
strangeness of strangers arms
flyingfish said:
Congers up thoughts of entanglement.
Very well done, Cheers
July 6th, 2021 14:30
flyingfish said:
Congers up thoughts of entanglement.
Very well done, Cheers
July 6th, 2021 14:30
strangeness of strangers arms
SureshG said:
Exquisitely written, had me dreaming of that tabletop ballet
July 6th, 2021 13:25
SureshG said:
Exquisitely written, had me dreaming of that tabletop ballet
July 6th, 2021 13:25
strangeness of strangers arms
Neville said:
... what a lovely sentiment and wrapped beautifully within a cracking poem of real classic class ...
July 6th, 2021 09:10
Neville said:
... what a lovely sentiment and wrapped beautifully within a cracking poem of real classic class ...
July 6th, 2021 09:10
strangeness of strangers arms
Fay Slimm. said:
Your expertise in word-play is so engaging dear Dusk as here yet again you intrigue with great ;metaphor - - love the title leading to short line imagery with which I am smitten. A favourite again.
July 6th, 2021 06:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Your expertise in word-play is so engaging dear Dusk as here yet again you intrigue with great ;metaphor - - love the title leading to short line imagery with which I am smitten. A favourite again.
July 6th, 2021 06:22
playground
jarcher54 said:
I am a sucker for short, sweet, mysterious, whimsical, wistful, and elegant. You hit it all without being trite at all.
July 5th, 2021 13:04
jarcher54 said:
I am a sucker for short, sweet, mysterious, whimsical, wistful, and elegant. You hit it all without being trite at all.
July 5th, 2021 13:04
playground
Fay Slimm. said:
Love it - love it - and into my faves this one skips.
July 5th, 2021 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Love it - love it - and into my faves this one skips.
July 5th, 2021 12:24
playground
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words , dusk arising 🙂 a lovely read .
July 5th, 2021 00:31
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words , dusk arising 🙂 a lovely read .
July 5th, 2021 00:31
come
AuburnScribbler said:
I am glad that you\'ve written this dusk arising, as it reminds us that although we have a brain to think, we also have a heart to feel.
We are not robots, we are humans, and we need to keep in touch; to hold on to both a sense of belonging, and a sense of general happiness too.
Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well!
July 3rd, 2021 16:42
AuburnScribbler said:
I am glad that you\'ve written this dusk arising, as it reminds us that although we have a brain to think, we also have a heart to feel.
We are not robots, we are humans, and we need to keep in touch; to hold on to both a sense of belonging, and a sense of general happiness too.
Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well!
July 3rd, 2021 16:42
come
Neville said:
just being there is often just what the doctor ordered isn\'t it ... just the ticket sir .... N
July 3rd, 2021 06:50
Neville said:
just being there is often just what the doctor ordered isn\'t it ... just the ticket sir .... N
July 3rd, 2021 06:50
high leaves
Langton said:
Free as a leaf. Lovely phrasing. At this moment I am looking at the top leaves of a tree swimming in a peaceful breeze Thank you for the wonderful imagery
July 3rd, 2021 04:35
Langton said:
Free as a leaf. Lovely phrasing. At this moment I am looking at the top leaves of a tree swimming in a peaceful breeze Thank you for the wonderful imagery
July 3rd, 2021 04:35
come
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Were you saying \'Come away to a place where Orchi\'s not singing\'?! heehee.
July 3rd, 2021 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Were you saying \'Come away to a place where Orchi\'s not singing\'?! heehee.
July 3rd, 2021 01:51
come
Michael Edwards said:
We all need someone to hold our hands from time to time - super write.
July 3rd, 2021 01:21
Michael Edwards said:
We all need someone to hold our hands from time to time - super write.
July 3rd, 2021 01:21
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