Comments received on poems by dusk arising



i drove
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dusk.
Watching the stars sink into a new day as the world around you wakes up is a special treat.

July 11th, 2021 08:16

i drove
Poetic Dan said:

I heard the sound of yawning, then I released the hills was alive this morning!

Appreciate the calling

July 11th, 2021 07:02

i drove
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine way of feeling alive my friend - driving to watch dawn arrive sounds truly exciting and thanks for sharing.

July 11th, 2021 01:09

i drove
Goldfinch60 said:

This is so very true d a.

Andy

July 11th, 2021 00:54

strangeness of strangers arms
Poetic Dan said:

So good I had to read it twice!

July 7th, 2021 22:52

natures sway
Poetic Dan said:

You had at the title my friend the rest was truly a flow of nature, thanks for sharing the years that made ya!

July 7th, 2021 22:42

natures sway
SureshG said:

I can sense the melody of your words

July 7th, 2021 13:19

natures sway
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful thoughts, Dusk.
Age seems to fan the embers of past loves.

July 7th, 2021 09:13

natures sway
Neville said:


reminds me very much of a summer day I once knew ..

July 7th, 2021 03:48

natures sway
flyingfish said:

A lot going on here. Interesting. Well done

July 7th, 2021 02:16

natures sway
orchidee said:

Good write dusk.

July 7th, 2021 01:54

natures sway
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories of summer days in our youth d a are so very special.
I remember when..........

Andy

July 7th, 2021 01:21

strangeness of strangers arms
Goldfinch60 said:

\"where a strangeness
of strangers arms
gave comfort\"

This is so meaningful to me, I may be a stranger but have helped many people by just listening tom them.

Andy

July 7th, 2021 00:52

strangeness of strangers arms
flyingfish said:

Congers up thoughts of entanglement.
Very well done, Cheers

July 6th, 2021 14:30

strangeness of strangers arms
SureshG said:

Exquisitely written, had me dreaming of that tabletop ballet

July 6th, 2021 13:25

strangeness of strangers arms
Neville said:


... what a lovely sentiment and wrapped beautifully within a cracking poem of real classic class ...

July 6th, 2021 09:10

strangeness of strangers arms
Fay Slimm. said:

Your expertise in word-play is so engaging dear Dusk as here yet again you intrigue with great ;metaphor - - love the title leading to short line imagery with which I am smitten. A favourite again.

July 6th, 2021 06:22

strangeness of strangers arms
orchidee said:

A fine write dusk.

July 6th, 2021 06:20

playground
jarcher54 said:

I am a sucker for short, sweet, mysterious, whimsical, wistful, and elegant. You hit it all without being trite at all.

July 5th, 2021 13:04

playground
Fay Slimm. said:

Love it - love it - and into my faves this one skips.

July 5th, 2021 12:24

playground
Jerry Reynolds said:

OK, Dusk this is seriously good.
A fave it is.

July 5th, 2021 08:44

playground
L. B. Mek said:

what a great read!
thank you Dusk

July 5th, 2021 06:48

playground
Neville said:


Probably one of your bestest yet mate

Neville 🙂

July 5th, 2021 03:25

playground
orchidee said:

Good write dusk.

July 5th, 2021 01:35

playground
Caring dove said:

Beautiful words , dusk arising 🙂 a lovely read .

July 5th, 2021 00:31

come
AuburnScribbler said:

I am glad that you\'ve written this dusk arising, as it reminds us that although we have a brain to think, we also have a heart to feel.

We are not robots, we are humans, and we need to keep in touch; to hold on to both a sense of belonging, and a sense of general happiness too.

Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well!

July 3rd, 2021 16:42

come
Neville said:



just being there is often just what the doctor ordered isn\'t it ... just the ticket sir .... N

July 3rd, 2021 06:50

high leaves
Langton said:

Free as a leaf. Lovely phrasing. At this moment I am looking at the top leaves of a tree swimming in a peaceful breeze Thank you for the wonderful imagery

July 3rd, 2021 04:35

come
orchidee said:

A fine write dusk.
Were you saying \'Come away to a place where Orchi\'s not singing\'?! heehee.

July 3rd, 2021 01:51

come
Michael Edwards said:

We all need someone to hold our hands from time to time - super write.

July 3rd, 2021 01:21



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